《Avneil - being with you》Holi part 4
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So guys i here with my next part.....
Hope u enjoy it....
And the wait for avniel romance is over...
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Avni:"neil tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...."
Neil:"main kya kar raha hoon ka mutlab...tumne kya kar rahi ho.. or kahan se aayi...."
Avni:"ashman se...yeh kaisa saval hai...offcouse jahan se tum aaye...."
Neil:"accha okay ab lardo mat plz..."
Avni:"haan tum shirt peheno...."
Neil:"nahi pehen sakta..."
Avni:"kyun..."
Neil:"kyunki meri wify ne muhje darake use tab me gira diya..."
Avni:"kya...ab tum kaparde nahi laye..."
Neil:"nahi.... jane wala tha per...."
Avni:"neil yaar kaise...normal log jo hote hain woh kaparde lake jate hain...."
neil:"toh tum kehe rahi main normal nahi hoon...toh kya donkey hoon.."
avni:"nahi maine essa kab kaha.."
neil:"per kehene ka toh wahi matalab tha....."
avni:"accha hum yahan yeh karne se accha kuch or kare.."
neil:"oh ho....toh mrs.avni neil khana ko kuch or karna hai....(with a smirk on his face)
avni:(avni understood what he meant)"mera....mera...mat...matlab woh nahi tha.."
neil:"toh kya tha....."(coming close.....avni kept moving back....suddenly she sliped causing the shower to on.....she closed her eyes due to the fear of falling but neil grabbed her on time......they had a eyelock...)
Avni breaks the eyelock....neil makes her stand proper....they both are fully drenched in water......avni blushes and turnes to go but neil stopes her by putting his hand on her wrist.. and pulles her back to which she collides on his bare chest .....avni's back is touching neil's bare chest....she closed her eyes while he left a trail of kisses on her back......all she could do was say his name......that turned him on more...and more...firstly she was wet due to which she was looking breath taking...plus her moaning.......than he turned her around and kissed her cheeks then kissed forehead......then he kissed her lips....both were fighting for dominance....they had a passionate kiss....they broke off after a long kiss due to oxygen lack........but Neil went for another one right away.....after they broke of...both were breathing hard....
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Avni:"neil.....woh...."
Neil:"hmmm bolo....."
Avni justjust hugged him tightly and neil reciprocated......soon they broke off.... Neil was going to kiss avni again but she backed off
Avni:"neil humhe kuch sochna chahiye yahan se kaise nikale....."
Neil:"kya yaar avni ....hamesha koyi aa jata hai.....abhi koyi nahi hai...karne do na romance..."
Avni:" neil romance karne ko puri zindagi pari hai ...humhe yahan se nikal na hai...bhool gaye kya..."(Neil makes a sad face...so avni kisses his cheeks...)"ab plz kuch socho... "
Neil:"hmm sochne do...."(they both were buzy thinking when avni started walking towards the door....but she screamed and ran back and hugged neil due to which they unbalanced and neil fell in the tab with avni on top of him.....)
Neil:"kya Hua avni kyun chilaye...."
Avni:"woh..woh...uder..."
Neil:"kya "
Avni:"aare woh..."(Neil turned his head to see and saw....saw...a.....)(* let's keep some suspense....😉😉😉)
In the hall.....
Everyone gathered except juhi ...cause she was sleeping and mishti..she was also sleeping...
Neela:"arre mera Sar itna dhok raha hai. .ufff...."
Sweata:"mera bhi. ...."
Prakash and bebe:"humhara bhi.. "
Bebe:"per kal hua kya tha.... "
Neela:"pata nahi bebe..yaad nahi aa raha ...."
Prakash:"yeh sab baad main ...pehele kuch lao...is sar dard ko bagane ke liye.. "
Sweata:"correct prakash ji...."
Bebe:"beema (guys remember her as the maid of khana house...)beema kahan ho..."
Beema:"ji maam sab...."
Bebe:"hum sab ke liye kuch lao...."
Beema:"maam sab ....Neil sab or avni maan ne bola tha aapko nebo apni do jab aap utho...toh yeh woh hai...pee li gaye..."
Neela:"avni or neil...unko kaise pata hai. No humhara sar dard ho raha......"
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Sweata:"hmm pata nahi..."
Prakash:"thank you beema..."
Beema:"mansions not sahab mansions not...(guys her english is very week...)
All laugh......
In avneil bathroom..
Avni:"aare woh..."(Neil turned his head to see and saw....saw...a.....)
Cockroach....
Neil:(screames)"cockroach ahhhhh..."
Avni:(putting her hand in his mouth) "shhh neil main yahin hoon or tum mere kaan main chila rahe ho..."
Neil:"opps ab..kya kare..."
Avni:"kya kare ke kya mutlab...tum jao use bagao...muhje dar lagta hai.. "
Neil: "aare...main...main..Kyun...tum gao...lady don..toh tum ho...jao...."
Avni:"aare per tum supercop ho tum hai..."
Neil:"nahi tum"
Avni:"tum"
Neil:"tum...."
Avni:"tumnmmmm "
Neil:"nahi tummmmmmm"(while they continue doing this the cockroch went .....)
Avni:(noticing this)"stop neil woh chala gaya...ab tum uth gao..."
Neil:"kaise uthon...tum mere uper ho..."(Avni realizes her position and gets up .......)
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So guys hope u enjoyed it....
Plz do vote and comment....
Next update after 50 votes and 40 comment ...
Precap:"how will avneil escape the bathroom...what will happend when khana family gets to know there karname.. ..."
Remeber 50votes and 40comments.....
Love u guys....😘😘😘
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