《Avneil - being with you》karname....
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Avneil room....
Neil:"oh haan..."(avni moves aside ...he puts the pin through and twists it......it didn't work......finally after 2 tries it works an the door unlocks...)
Avni:(in excitement jumps)"yehhhhhh...(and hugged neil tightly and kisses his cheeks)
Neil:(shocked) "yeh...."
Avni:"woh excitement me aake kar diya......"
They walk out to there room....
Avni:"ufff finally out....(to neil) ab chalo...ready ho neeche sab yeh gaye hoge...raat bhi ho gayi....dinner bhi karna hai..."
Neil:"hmmm...."
At the market...
Juhi bought the toys for mishti....she was..going back when she bumped into someone....
Juhi:"sorry woh...(looking at the face... scared...)tu....tum..."
Soneone:"tum...."(they had a shocked and anger shown on there face)
(* if u guys guessed vidihut congrats cause u were right...)
Vidihut:(with anger and hurt in his eyes.....)"tum...tum yahan kya kar rahi....."
Juhi:"woh....woh..woh main..."
Vidihut:"main main kya..."(kind of yelling)
Juhi:" chilao mat......"
Vidihut:"tumne mere saath jo kiya uske baad u have the strengthto talk to me like this...."
Juhi just pushed him and ran.....he ran behind her but...she got lost in the crowd....
At khana house....
All were sitting in the hall trying to remember what happend....when avneil come down the stairs...
Sweata:"hua kya tha kuch yaad nahi aa raha...."
Bebe:"arre madam madona...soch...kya Hua tha..."
Sweata:"sochi toh rahi hoon bebe..."
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Prakash:"aare plz...lardna band karo..Or socho...Plz...."
Neela:"ji...Plz..."
Avni:"kya socho maa...."
Neela:"aare beta...humhara saar dard ho raha...Or kuch yaad nahi aa raha Kya hua tha..."(Neil brusted out laughing......avni was trying to hold her laughter...but still laughing little....)
Sweata:"kya Hua tillu..haas kyun raha hai tu...Or beta tum bhi...hua kya..."
Neil: (still laughing) "aapke...(laughing) karna...karname yaad aa gaye..."
Prakash: "karname...kya kiya humne..."
Neil:"dekho...."(he connected his phone to the tv..)
First video started....
In sweata and prakash room....Avni making both of them lay down...
Sweata:"prakash ji..."
Prakash :"ji sweata ji..."
Sweata:"aaj khush toh bahut hoge tum hain"
Prakash:"arre Amitabh ji aap.....yahan..."
Sweata:"aare nahi prakash ji main sweata...sweata khana..."
Prakash:"oh per main kyun hoga...."
Sweata:"inder aao secret hai...."
Prakash:"kya(come close...)
Sweata:"pata nahi....(they both start laughing...)
Avni:"mummy ji...papa ji aap so gayiye plz..."
Prakash:"beta main so kaise sakta..."
Neil:"kyun dad..."
Prakash:"arre sweata ji ke tillu...hawa main kyun sota.....main toh fly kar raha..."
Sweata:"main bhi....(they both start acting of flying...)
Avni:"neil tum meri help karoge plz..."
Neil:"arre per main video bana raha..."
Avni:"neil main dono ko nahi samal parahi..plz yaar.."
Neil:"accha wait....(he kept the camara on the stand and come to help)
Avni:"mummy ji plz...so gayi ye na..."
Sweata:"beta...tu bahut acchi hai....tuhje pata hai....woh teri dushman..."
Avni:"dushman...??"
Sweata:"aare wahin...juhi chuhi...."
Avni:"mummy ji asa kuch nahi...aap so hai..."
Finally after losts of struggle they slept....
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Video ended.....
Sweata and prakash were feeling so embarrassed....
Bebe:"kyun bhai madam madona...yeh kya tha...."
Sweata:"woh bebe bhaang..."
Neil:"bebe waise aapne jo kiya wog ise jayada tha...."
Bebe:(shocked) maine esa kya kiya...."
Avni:"dekhiye...."
Second video started....
It showed avni putting neela and bebe on the bed
Bebe:"avni...tere liye ek sher....arz kiya hai...."
Neela:"wah wah wah wah...."
Avni:"maa...bolne toh do..."
Bebe:"teri ankho ki nammkin mastiya......."
Neil:"wah bebe...age.."
Bebe:"bas itna hi tha...."
Neil:"per bebe yeh sher nahi srk ke ki movie ka dialogue hai...."
Bebe:"tillu...main avni ke liye bola...Or tu meri teacher kyun ban raha hai...."(fake crying) dekho avni yeh muhje dant raha hai...."
Avni:"bebe plz ro mat...plz..main aapke tillu ko dant dongi..."
Neil:"arre majn kya kiya..."
Avni:"neil plz yaar...tum bhi bacche mat bano...main ese hi bol rahi hoon..."
Neela:"why this kolavari kolavari kolavari di.....dishk sola mona mona moon color white..."
Bebe:"haawww moon ka color white hai....."
Neela:"nahi bebe....black..."
Neil:"moon ka color toh gray hai na...yaar bebe or maa aap log muhje confuse kar rahe..."
Avni:"ok now all of you sleep....."(she made them both sleep)
Video ended.....
Sweata:"o ho bebe ab yeh kya tha....."
Bebe:"woh..woh..Avni puttar khana laga...bhook lag.."
Avni:"ji bebe...(that's when juhi entered....)
Aare juhi..tum kahan gayi thi.... Or itni dari kyun ho...."
Juhi:"kuch nahi...woh market gayi thi...mishti ke liye gift lane......(she hands the gift to mishti....and gose to her room)
Avni:"ise kya hua..."
Neil:"pata nahi..."
They all went for dinner and juhi dinner was send to her room cause she asked.... after dinner all went to there respective rooms and slept
In morning avneil room...
Avni wakes up in the morning and dosnt find neil next to him....she thinks that neil dosent do anything in the morning without her morning kiss....
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So really soon...In the next update there is somthing coming which you all wanted fora long time....so you guys guess what it is.....
Plz do vote and comment...
Thank you...
Hope u enjoy it....
Next update after 60votes and 50comment
Precap:" surpize...you guys have to guess.. where is neil...what more twist to come....."
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