《Avneil - being with you》Pani puri romance.....
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so guys i am here with my next part...
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riya invites them to there house...just than a car comes...
riya:"avni dekh meri behen ne car behej di...i have to go per tu bhoolna mat..i will send u the place ....chal bye...bye jiju...."(she said as going to car......avneil waved back and she left)
neil:"chalo ab hum bhi ghar chale..."
avni:"nahi...."
neil:"kyun tumhe airport pe ghar basana..."
avni:"neil....mera mutlab ur forgetting something..."
neil:"kya avni...(remembering) wait pani puri..."
avni:"yes...."
neil:"nahi bhoola...chalo.."(he made her sit on passenger seat ....and than he sat in driver seat and started driving.....)
neil:(in mind)"arre baab re.....mood swings are too much .......2 din bhi nahi hue per itna dekhne ko mila....per i love it anyways....kabhi bhi avni ne esi demand nahi ki....atleast pregnancy me i get to see a new version of avni....or avni kitni cute lagti demand karte hue....i just love it..i just love her....i want to live each and every moment of my life with her....all the happiness in my life are because of her and she will get the happiness she deserves too...i will give her...ab bus yeh vidihut ko sambhal le uske baad main juhi ke liye bhi koyi door longa....or fir sab theek hoga....and hum log kushi kushi rahenge....."(his thoughts were disturbed by avni)
avni:" neil tum kitni slow chala rahe...ese toh hum kal tak nahi pochenge...."
neil:"dont worry wify....appka demand hai...hum pura toh karke rahenge..."(avni smiled)"we reached....."(neil helped her out of car...and walk to the stall....)
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neil:"bhaiya....2 plate lagana...or haan thekha mat dalna.."
avni:"nahi neil thekha...."
neil:"okay bhaiya thekha ,,,(whispers) per thora sa hi..."(the bhaiya smiled at the couple and gave pani puri...)
avni was eating like a little kid.......
neil:"avni tum ek dam cute bacchi lag rahi ho..."
avni:"waise mr.hubby....i guess ur forgetting i have a baby inside me... toh why wouldnt i act like a kid.."
neil:"accha ji... toh yeh lo meri pyarri bari or choti baby...(making her eat pani puri... after eating they left for home....it was about evening .....avni had sept by the time they reached home....because she had been up scene morning due to her morning sickness....and the whole morning was hectic.. so neil didnt want to distrub her sleep....so he picked her up without disturbing her sleep than took her inside.....as soon as he entered he saw all in living room....juhi seeing this senerio burned in angry.......)
bebe:"puttar avni ko kya hua..."
neil:"nothing bebe...so rahi hai..main abhi aaya...(saying this he went in his room and layed avni on the bed....)
neil went out of room...just then juhi entered....
juhi:"bahut ho gaya...tumhe bahut kushi mil gayi....main tumhe ab koyi kushi nahi lene dongi....ab tumhe marna hoga...or tumhare saath tumhara baccha....tumhari or neil ki nishani...."(saying this...she takes the pillow and starts moving towards avni......as soon as she is about to put the pillow to suffocate avni....someone stops her... and that is our aman......he drags her out of room and takes her to his room...he pushes her in and closed the door....)
juhi:"how dare u touch me..."
aman:"shut up....tum itni geeri hui lardki ho....mere di ya jiju ke khilaf kuch bhi kiya na...toh main nahi chorodga....tum unki zindagi se nikal kyun nahi jati...jabse yahan aaya hoon notice kiya you were acting very diffrent...or fir us din...jab di pregnant hai new aayi...tab maine tumhari sari baate...sunliya.....main apne di or jiju ke saath kuch nahi galat hone donga..."
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juhi:"tum...tum mera kuch nahi begard sakte....tumne jo past main harkat ki...uske baad koyi tumpe barosha nahi karga..."
aman:"agar koyi muhje barosha kare...ya nahi...i dont care...per di ke saath i wont let anything bad happend...ab is pariwar ke saath kuch kiya tumne...toh yaad rakhna main rukhonga...main is pariwar ko bachaonga tumhare jal se...."(saying this he left.....and juhi in anger went to her room..)
in avneil room....
avni was peacefully sleeping when neil came in....
neil:"avni....utho na.."
avni:(like a kid)"nahi thori der or..."
neil:"awww mera baby ko or sona...okay...per jab riya..tumhe bolegi..toh main kuch nahi bolonga..."
avni:(gets up)" riya....accha haan aaj uske ghar gana tha...ek min main so gai...afternon main.... time kya hua...."
neil:"6"
avni:"omg neil... hum ghar kab aaye..."
neil:"2 bhaje..."
avni:"main 4 ghante soyi....what.... tumhe uthna chahiye tha na...ghar wale kya soche honge...."
neil:"kuch nahi....tum rest kar rahi yeh..."
avni:"nail main tumhara kya karon..."
neil:"pyaar karo.."
avni:"Neil ur gone.... bahut irritate kar chuke...ab mat karo warna..(got cut off)
neil:"sherni muhje khacha chab jayegi...."
avni:"neil...(startes hitting him with pillow)
neil:"dekho dekho avni marna mat....baby kya soche ga....baby muhje apni lady don mumma se bachao..."
avni:"neil main tumhe don dikhti....."(makes a angry face and turns around)
neil:"avni ...suno na...accha sorry baba...tum meri pyaari avni...sorry...i love you"
avni:(smile)i love you too...."(kisses his cheeks and runs to change...)
neil:(touches his cheek)"yeh lardki bhi na...."
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hope u liked it....
plz do vote and comment...
next update after 80 votes and 70 comments...
thank you.....
guys remember i asked about if i should add avni diary.... well i thought of it... but never found a place to add it... lets see if in the future i can find a place...maybe after juhi track is over than...so people who are waiting for it sorry....i might add after juhi track and i dint forget... hope u all understand........thanks..
precap:"avneil at riya house.....dinner...enjoyment....something shocking....riya sis..."
remember 80 vote and 70 comments
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