《Avneil - being with you》good ya bad....
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So guys this is the 2nd update for birthday special....
Hope u enjoy it...
Remeber both updates should reach there target to get a update by june 11...
Here you go....
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Neil was in so much confusion....All what juhi said and what mishti told....and all vidihut behavior was going in his head...and his thoughts were disturbed by riya...
Riya:"okay...toh aap boys enjoy boy talk...avni priya chal hum priya ke kamare main chalte...."
Avni:"hmm...."(they started going...but was stopped by neil...)
Neil:"avni ek min rukna...baat karni hai..."
Riya:"kya jiju...thori der bhi door NAHI rehe sakte avni se..."
Neil:"woh..."
Riya:"accha ok ok karlo..."(both the girls left to room...and vivan and vidihut were talking sitting on sofa.... Neil took avni by the stairs and whispered...)
Neil:"avni dekho...tumhe ragani pandit yaad hai..."
Avni:"haan per woh achanak se kaise aa gayi..."
Neil:"woh.....uska beta....ka naam vidihut pandit or dusare ka naam vivan pandit...vidihut vahi hai...mishti ka sir..."
Avni:(matched everything) "omg wait....yeh sab kaise...yeh hi hai woh...per neil...he is not like that....uska behavior bahut different hai yaar...."
Neil:"wahi toh...muhje kuch samaj nahi aa raha...vidihut bad ya good hai...humlog kuch bahut bara miss kar rahe..per kya..."
Avni:" neil muhje lagta jo bhi humhe pata hai woh full sach nahi..hai...we have to find out..."
Neil:"hmmm...main karta hoon kosis tum bhi karo..."
Avni: "okay....."(they go to there respective groups ...Avni in room for with girls and neil with boys at hall...)
Room....
Avni:"waise...vidihut or vivan bahut opposite hai na..."
Riya:"haan yaar maine bhi notice kiya.....ek serious or ek full comedy...."
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Priya:"nahi di....vidihut bhaiya bhi bahut fun karte the...copy vivan type ke the...vivan ne muhje videos dekhaye the...per fir woh incident...."
Riya/avni:"kya incident...."
Priya:"muhje jayada kuch nahi pata...per haan vivan ne ek baar bola...uske baad bhaiya ka sab kuch cheen liya...kushis....sab kuch...woh bahut gussa karne lage....per pyaar woh itna hi karte sabse....or use bhi..."
Riya:"use...?"
Priya:"woh....di..ek bacchi se..."
Avni:"bacchi....(in mind) mishti...per she used to be scared...yeh toh bahut confuse ho raha..."
Riya:"haan...waise yeh sab chordo or appne or neil jiju ke bare main bolo kaise mile aap log..."(they continue there gosip...)
While in hall....
Vivan:"aapke ghar main kyun kyun hai bhai..."
Neil:"bus main..Avni...mom. dad...bebe...neela maa, avni ki mom...or maddi bua...aman...karina...."
Vidihut:"bahut bari hai..."
Neil:"hmm....aapke family me....I mean parents..."
Vidihut:(face turned red in anger....)"woh humhare saath nahi rehe te...humhara unse koyi nata nahi..."
Neil:"per hua kya..."
Vivan:"woh...unka illigal business tha...they didnt even care about us...tabse humne ushe chord diya...now we hate THEM..."
Neil:"oh...sorry..."
Vidihut:"no need...ye sab baat chordo...aapko kuch chaiye...."
Neil:"nahi its okay...(in mind)"yeh toh aapne parents se bhi nahi related....jaise juhi be bola...mutlab kya hai...kahi juhi kuch chupa toh nahi rahi...nahi nahi wog was kyun karegi..."(they contiued there boy talk.....)
After sometime all gathered at hall....
Riya:"ab kya kare...."
Vidihut:"movie dekha..."
Vivan:"great idea...right neil bhai..."(Neil nodded)
Avni:"per kyunsi...."
Priya:"lets watch a family movie....."
Neil:"per kyunsi...."
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Vivan:"ummmm tiger zinda hai...."
Priya:"bhoodo...fighting nahi family....."
Riya:"dekho.....ya toh dilwale ya fir prem ratan dhan payo...."
Avni:"dono hi cahlegi..."
Neil:"muhje bhi..."
Vidihut:"dekho....dilwale kisne kisne dekha..."(Avni, neil riya and priya raised there hand....)"and prem ratan dhan payo (avni,riya raise there hand)"okay so prem ratan dhan payo dekhte...next time dilwale...okay..."
All:"okay...."(they all settle down to watch the movie....order being vidihut,vivan,neil,avni,priya,riya.... after its finished.....)
Riya:"wow yaar sach great movie....(vidihut was lost in her beauty....)
Neil:"ab humhe chalna chahiye...late ho gaya..."
Avni:"hmmmm"
Vidihut:"okay per hum phirse milne ka plan banate....is baar aapki whole family ko mana..."
Neil:"sure.....chalo ab hum chalte..."(they left)
In car....
Neil:"avni tumhe pata hai...they hate there parents...and they left them long time back.....per juhi ne toh kaha vidihut is withhis mom...kuch samaj nahi aa raha..."
Avni:"hmmm also priya bol rahi thi...uske saath kuch hua hai....or haan she said woh ek bacchi se bahut pyaar karta...bacchi mutlab mishti...per mishti be jo kahan ki sir and all...muhje toh kuch nahi samaj aa raha...."
Neil:"hmmm humhe jana parega sach...pura sach.......pata nahi kyareal sach hai..hain na...(no respond)..Avni...(he turns to see her sleepling like a baby...smiles)awww mera baby..."
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So guys hope you enjoyed it....
Plz do vote and comment....
Next update after 80votes and 70comment ...
And REMEBER both updates should reach there target....
Precap:"what is the whole sach...juhi ka khana house se bahar jane ka raasta jaldi hi khulega...."
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