《Avneil - being with you》Papa
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Juhi:"I don't care....(and she shot....and also dd shot....)
All froze...and shocked what happend..
Juhi dropped down to the floor.(*congrates to all cause mostly all guess juhi...)...and here avni was shocked to core....
Riya:(running)"vidihut "(yes vidihut got shot.....he come between avni mishti and juhi.....)
All ran to vidihut.....
Riya:(crying) "vidihut plz open ur eyes...."
Neil:"dd tum juhi ko leke hospital jao...."(he picks up vidihut and takes him to car.....avni holds Riya.....they both are crying....)
Mishti:"angle....sir....sir....(crying) sir ko kya hua..."
Avni:"kuch nahi baccha aap chalo...aao..."(she takes mishti and riya....)
In car.....(Neil is driving....avni in passanger seat with mishti and riya in back seat with vidihut laying down and his head on her lap...)
Riya:(tapping his cheeks)"vidihut kuch nahi hoga...tumhe....plz ankhe kolo....plz...."
Avni:"riya...plz calm down use kuch nahi hoga...."(they reach hospital....all rush vidihut in....as doctor takes vidihut in....Neil has informed all memeber and they also arrive......)
Vivan:(crying)"bhai....Neil bhai kahan hai unhe kuch hua toh nahi...plz bolo...muhje unse milna plz....Neil..."
Neil:(hugged vivan)"shhhhh kuch nahi hua vidihut ko....plz shaant ho....tumhe strong rehena parega...."
Vivan:"woh theek ho gayenge na..."
Priya:(putting her hand on his sholder....)"hmm bhaiya abhi theek ho gayenge.....or tumhe ese dekh ke muhje dantenge...ki maine tumhe rone kyun diya...chalo jaldi se...rona band karo...."(he huges her.....)
Bebe:"yeh sab kaise hua...."(avni tells them every thing...)
Dd:(entering)"sir...doctor have check juhi....and she ...she is dead...."
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Avni:(closing her eyes)"esa nahi hona chachiye tha......"
Neil:(looks at avni then at dd)"okay....uska posmotam kar walo..."
Dd:"yes sir...(left...)
Nurse:(entering ....to neil)"sir aapne jo...room lene ko bola tha its ready....and doctor also come...so can we take her..."
Avni:"neil....room kiske liye...."
Bebe:"haan putter kiske liye room..."
Neil:(ignoring avni ...to bebe):"bebe ...avni ke liye..doctor uska check up karenge....or woh wahan rest karegi..."
Avni:(in mind)"neil ko kya hau....muhje ignor kyun kar raha....( to neil) " nahi main yahan theek hoon...."
Neil:"nurse aap le gaye inhe..."
Avni:"per.. "
Neela:"beta tumhe rest lene ki zarorat hai...gao....mishti ko main dekh longi...."(nurse takes avni....)
On the other hand....doctor comes out of operation theater...
Vivan:"doctor how is my brother...."
Doctor:"goli dil ke bahut karib se nikli....woh abhi theek hai....per agar unhe 24 gante main hosh nahi aaya toh woh coma me ja sakte...."(..everyone was broken....even tho vidihut was no related to them....after what happend he was like family....)
Riya:"doctor can we see him..."
Doctor:"yes...but plz be care ful...."
Inside room....
All went in...vidihut laying on the hospital bed....
Vivan:"bhai....plz utho na...plz...dekho sab hai yahan...plz bhai....plz...."
Mishti:(leaving neela hand and going to vidihut)"s....sir..."
Neela:"mishti...."
Mishti:(crying)"sir.. plz utho...I am sorry....main aapko kabhi tang nahi karongi....maa ke bare main bhi nahi puchongi....plz...sir utho..."(a drop fell on vidihut hand....his hand had a movement.......Riya noticed it...)
Riya:"doctor..look..."(doctor came....vidihut slowly opened his eyes....)
Doctor:"thats good news...main unka check up karlo ...fir aap sab inse mil sakte...for now plz go out..."(doctor checks him...all is fine.. just needs rest....all go inside....vidihut holds mishti hand...)
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Vidihut:"sorry mishti.. main bahut bura hoon na....plz muhje maaf kardo...I am a bad dad...a bad man...main kisi or ka gussa aap pe nikal raha tha...plz muhje maaf kardo...."(the next thing mishti said shocked him.....)
Mishti:"PAPA...."
Vidihut: "kya bula aapne...."
Mishti:"PAPA..."(he hugged mishti...)
Nurse:"chalo sab bahar chalp...inhe rest karne do"(all go out one person is allowed to stay so riya stays....she talks to him...)
While on the other hand....avni room(hospital room)
Doctor(girl hai):(entering...)"hi Mrs.khana..."
Avni:"hi doctor..."
Doctor:"how many months...."
Avni:"3 completed.....2 weeks back..."
Doctor:"oh ok...(cheaks)the baby is fine....aap relax ho gao....and take care of ur self...."(she leaves...)
Avni:(in mind)"neil kahan hai...abhi tak aaya kyun nahi...vidihut ki tension ho rahi...( nurse enters to take something to her)"kya aap neil khana ko bhej sakte yaha...."
Nurse:"sure..."
Outside....
Nurse:"neil khana kaun (who)hai..."
Neil:"me..."
Avni:"aapki wife aapko bola rahi...."
Neil:"okay...(she leaves)"neela maa...aapko avni bola rahi..."
Neela:"ok...(enters avni room)"avni baccha kaise ho..."
Avni:"aare maa...I am fine...maa aap yahan..."
Neela:"haan neil ne kahan u called me...."
Avni:(felt sad that neil is ignoring her)"woh...kuch nahi..."
Neela:"u know what...(she tells avni everything about vidihut...and mishti calling him papa....)
Avni:"sachi wow its nice...."
Neela:"hmm bebe bol rahi thi..ki kuch din tak...sab humhare yahan rahenge...jab tak vidihut theek nahi hogata.. (avni hmmm....she was lost in thoughts of why neil is ignoring her)"kya hua beta...aren't u excited.. sab ek saath rahenge..."
Avni:"haan maa I am..."
Neela:"chalo ab rest kar...kuch der main discharge karenge vidihut ko...than we can all go home..."(avni nodded and neela left...)
Avni:(years in her eyes)"neil ko kya hua hai...esa kyun kar raha hai.. main use bolaya or woh maa....woh muhje ignore kyun kar raha.. maine kya kiya...."
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