《Avneil - being with you》New life
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So guys I am back with my next part....
Hope u enjoy it....
Plz do vote and comment.....
Sorry for the late update.....
Guys one more thing plz tell me a nickname for naina...
So without more talks lets starts the update....
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A beautiful morning.....sun is up high and ready to shine.....birds are singing....flowers dancing with the wind.......
A beautiful bungalow is shown...as we move inside it...we see 1 little kid about 2 years and few months old running and behind him was a beautiful lady....with a glass of milk in her hands.....
Lady:"aaru.....aaru plz beta dood(milk) pilo....dekho abhi muhje bahut kaam hai..."
Boy:"no....dodo(milk in baby language)"
Lady:(stop running and puts her one hand on her hips and the other still holding the milk)"AARAV me last time bol rahi hoon come and drink this milk...."(the boy slowly walks towards his mother seeing her anger....while another girl same age as the boy comes running to her the lady)
Girl:"mumma dodo(milk) katam"
Lady:"good job princess....."(she kisses the girls forehead.....)"aaru ab tum bhi jaldi se mumma ke acche bacche bano or dodo finish Karo...fast ....phir me tumhara favorite kahan banaogi..."
Boy:"pakka..."
Lady:"pakka..."(the boy finishes the milk making face than runs away....while the little girl also follows her....the lady smiles and goes to the kitchen and starts making food....when she hears someone call her )
Voice:"avni...."(yes the lady is none other than our avni... and the kids are none other than aarav and naina )
Avni:"riya tum itni jaldi kaise uth gayi...abhi toh bas 9 baje hai...wah...aaj khubkaran ko neend nahi aayi...."
Riya:"avni yaar tuhje toh pata hai na....jabse me pregnant hui hoon...muhje neend hi neend aa rahi hai..."
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Avni:"aacha hai yaar tu so toh leti hai...muhje toh meri time pe neend hi nahi atti thi or Neil toh...(she stops....riya looks at avni while her eyes get teary.....)
Riya:"avni tum theek ho..."
Avni:(wiping her tears)"...haan haan muhje kya hau....tu ja Jake rest kar... me breakfast bana rahi....aaj neha(the maid) ki bhi chuti hai..."
Priya:(entering )"good morning riya di.... avni di....(bending to riya stomach height )"good morning champ...."
Vivan:(entering)"priya Maine pehele bhi bola hai na....lardki hai...tu champ champ mat bol....bhabhi aap ise samja di jiye....avni bhabhi....aaru or naina kahan hai...."
Avni:"aapne kamare me honge.....jao tum hara hi wait kar rahe the..."
Vivan:"okay....bhabhi mishti ko bhi riya bhabhi mishti ko bhi bhej dena .. me baccho ko aaj park le ja raha...."
Mishti:"me ready hoon chachu....(we see a 7 years old mishti....entering in the kitchen )"good morning mausi....good morning mumma...good morning angle..."
All:"good morning...."
Aarav and naina:(entering)"mishti di....."(they hug her and she kisses both their cheeks...)
Vivan:"accha bacchon jaldi chalo...."
Avni:"vivan nashta..."
Vivan:"bhabhi hum ek ghante me aa gayenge..."(the kids and vivan leave)
Vidihut:(entering kitchen )"morning ladies "
All:"morning "
Vidihut:"baccha party kahan gayi...."
Priya:"bhaiya vivan unhe park leke gaya hai...ek ghante me aayenge..."
Vidihut:"theek hai...jaan...(to riya) meri ek meeting hai...toh me aap sab se ek ghante me milta hoon..."(bye...)
Riya:"yeh or inki meeting....(all 3 laugh...)
Meanwhile on the other side...in khanna house....
It was like a regular dull morning.....everyone was sitted in the breakfast table eating food...but something was missing...the happiness and glow on their face.....(only neil was missing.....soon neil comes down the stairs....and was going out when neela stops him)
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Neela:"Neil....nasta..."
Neil:"maa muhje bhook nahi hai"
Sweata:"jaane di jiye ise neela ji...."
Neela:"per sweata ji bina khaye..."
Bebe:(coldly)"hum koyi farak nahi parta neela...jisko kahana hai khaye jisko nahi woh uski marzi"(Neil looked hurt but kept a stern face and started moving towards the gate when shurti called him)
Shruti:"aare Neil kahan ja rahe ho..."
Neil:(rudely)"bahar...."
Shruti:"per neil nasta...."
Neil:"bhook nahi hai...(saying so he left)
Shruti:"per neil..."(being disappointed she also eat her breakfast....)
Neela:(in mind )"yeh sab kya ho raha hai bhagwanji....2 saal ho Gaye meri..avni ko Gaye hue....2 saal me har din bas ese hi jata hai....neil toh ghar me bhi nahi reheta hai...bas bahar hi ghoomta reheta hai.....kabhi kabhi toh bahut din tak ghar bhi nahi aaya ...pata nahi kya hoga iska....or avni...(a tear escaped her eyes) avni baccha kahan ho tum....2 saal se tumhe nahi dekha....baccha plz wapas aa gao...."
Bebe:"neela ji aap khaye...."
Meanwhile in vidihut mansion.....
Vivan comes back with the kids...and all meet up at the breakfast table...avni was feeding naina and aarav while both the kids were arguing
Aarav:"naina me kehe raha hoon....woh mera hai..."
Naina:"nahi woh mera hai...pls na bhai..."(guys aarav is 5 min bigger than naina...that's why she calls him bhai..)
Vidihut:"aare ab kya hai kis cheese pe lard rahe ho..."
Naina:"dekho na chachu....bhai muhje teddy bear nahi de rahe..."
Aarav:"per woh mera hai..."
Avni:"tum dono itni si baat pe kyun lard rahe ho....teddy hi toh hai...or me tum dono ke liye layi hoon...toh dono share karoge okay..."
Riya:"avni....ab yeh log theen saal ke hone wale hai jaldi hi....toh inka school me admissions karane ka kya socha hai..."
Naina:"yaayyy scool...(school)..."
Aarav:"woh school hota hai..."
Avni:"me abhi aayi..."(saying so she left to her room....)
In avni room...
Avni was sitting on the bed with a picture in her hands.....of her and the khanna family.....a tear leaves her eyes as she remembers the incident 2 years back....(guys the next bold dialogue are flashback words that avni is remembering...)
Avni:(wiping her tears)"kash woh sab na hua hota jo hua....kash ....phir shayad aaj hum Sab ek saath hote...phir shayad aarav or naina ko dadi dada...bebe...nani....sabka pyaar milta....2 saal ho Gaye....2 saal...bahut kuch badal gaya....kuch hi dono me baccho ka school suru hoga....kyun bhagwanji... meri jaisi hi zindagi aapne mere baccho ko bhi dedi....kyun..."
While on the other hand....
Neil was in the car....he wipes his tears...and wears shades and starts his cars.....
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So guys hope you enjoyed it....
Plz do vote and comment....
I will update next part after 200 votes...
Do comment how do u like the new twist....
Precap:"meeting of avneil....with the family member....."
Remember 200 votes....
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