《Avneil - being with you》Avneil meeting
Advertisement
So guys I am here with my next part....
Hope you enjoy it....
Plz do vote and comment....
Here we go....
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
Khanna house...
It was around evening time when Neil come back home....his face showed no emotions as he left to his room without uttering a word....
Bebe:"sunny sab ready hai na janne ke liye..."
Prakash:"haan bebe..."
Neela:"ek min bebe...main Neil ko bhi leke aa rahi..."
Sweata:"use laane ki koyi zarorat nahi hai neela ji..."
Neela:"plz sweata ji aaj nahi...aaj ke din uska hona zarori hai...aaj uske dadaji ka birthday hai.. or dharshan ke uska hona bahut zarori hai..."
Bebe:"per neela ji..."
Prakash:"bebe....(nods his head no) neela ji aapko ji theek lage aa kijiye....hum gardi me hain....(and they all leave....neela goes to Neil's room to see shruti sitting ...and talking while Neil is busy in his own world ignoring her.....)
Neela:"Neil...me I talk to u for few mins..."
Shruti:"actually aunty he is busy u can come later...."
Neil:(ignoring shruti comment)"boliye maa..."
Neela:"...beta hum sab mandir ja rahe tum bhi chalo...pls...its a request...."
Neil:"theek hai maa....chalo...(he gets up to go ....)
Shruti:"Neil me bhi chalon ghar behet ke bore ho rahi hoon..."
Neil:"tumhe jo karna hai woh karo...."(and he starts walking out.....with neela maa while shruti also followed making faces....)
Outside .....
All were seated in their car....neil goes and sits in his car...shruti was going to sit in the passenger seat but neil asked neela to sit front as it is more comfortable for her....shruti was mad but went and sat in the back...soon they reached the temple.....
Advertisement
While on the other hand....
Avni:"arru...nainu...jaldi aao ...."
Aarav:"kya hua mumma..."
Avni:"chalo tum dono hum bahar ja rahe..."
Naina:"kahan mumma...."
Avni:"temple or fir pani puri khane...."(both kids jumped hearing pani puri...and avni headed out of house...not before telling riya....)
In avni's car......
The driver was sitting forward....and avni and the kids was sitting back....
Naina:"mumma hum temple kyun ja rahe..."
Avni:"beta...aaj aapke great grandfather ka birthday hai..."
Aarav:"woh humhare saath kyun nahi hai..kahan hai woh..."
Avni:"woh bhagwan ji ke pass hai beta....is hi liye hum temple ja rahe....ab kitne sawal pochonge tum dono....chup chap beheto 2 min...."(soon they also reached temple....)
In temple.....
Avni enters with the kids...and tells both of them to pray to God.....while she joins her hands and closes her eyes....the kids...cutely follow what avni dose...
Pandit:(to avni)"beta prasad "(avni take the prasad in her hands and makes the kids eat than eats the rest her self....)
Avni:"pandit ji aaj mere dada ji ka birthday hai.. toh plz aap yeh prasad sab baccho me baat dena...dhanyawad..."(pandit ji nods and starts heading back...)"chalo baccho...."(as she goes to the back side of the temple to do parikrama.....neil and his family enter the temple.....all go and pray to bhagwanji and get prasad... )
While on the other hand.....avni and the kids are done with the parikrama and are heading back to the front of temple....
Naina:"mumma ab hum pani puri khane ja sakte hai plzzzz...."
Avni:"haan baccha wahi toh ja rahe hai..."
Aarav:"mumma me na teeka wala khaonga..."
Avni:(tickling him)"accha baccha.....teeka....."
Advertisement
Aarav:(laughing)"... mumma nahi....no tick....tickling...."(and he starts running )
Avni:"aaru...beta ruku...(avni runs behind him holding naina hands....while running avni bumps into someone and close her eyes in the fear of falling....but feeling nothing she opens her eyes and gets shock....yes she was safe from hitting the ground....and yes someone had saved her...but that someone was none other than Neil....they both share a painful eyelock which was broken by neela...)
Neela:(tears in her eyes )"...av...avni..."(coming back to the real world avni separates from Neil...Neil was just looking at her...with tears in his eyes....while avni wiped her tears and naina hide behind avni....)
Bebe:(tears)"avni putter...(cupping her face )"kaisi hai tu beta..."
Sweata:"meri bacchi...kahan chali gayi thi tu..."
Prakash:"puttar ji....tu tu aapne papa ko chord ke kyun chali gayi..."(all very looking at her with tears....shruti was not there as she had gone to get something from the near by store...)
Aarav:(running and hugging avni)"mumma kya hua...aap yahan kyun ruk gayi..."
Sweata:(seeing the kids...)"avni...beta...yeh ....aarav or naina hai ..na.."
Naina:(hiding behind avni...)"haan...per...sap kaun ho...."
Avni:"aarav naina tum dono gardi me jao....(to the driver )"aap plz dono ko le gayi me abhi aati hoon..."( he nods)
Aarav:"nahi mumma aap bhi chalo na..."
Avni:(sits on her knees)"aaru...aap jao me abhi aa rahi hoon...or naina ka dhayan rakhna...."(aarav nodded....he held naina hand...and they both went with the driver ...avni stands up and wipes her tears...)
Neela:"avni baccha..."
Avni:(sternly to Neil )"I am sorry for bumping into you...(and to family ) now I should leave..."
Bebe:"avni beta..."(but she didn't listen....while going she bumped into shruti )
Shruti:(yelling)"dekh ke nahi chal sakti..."(seeing avni and in anger)"tum....tum yahan..."
Avni:"haan me....or dekh ke tum nahi chal rahi thi...anyways...will u move out of my way....so I can go..."(saying so she sits on the car and leaves...)
Shruti:(standing next to the family )"wah...nahi car....pata nahi kis amir insan ko ab pasaya hai...."(neil didn't say anything....while everyone else looked at her in anger...neil without saying anything left from there...)"aare Neil ruku toh...."(before she can say anything neil got in his car and left....here the family also sat in their car)
Sweata:"sorry shruti car me jaga nahi hai....tum riksha se aa gao...(saying so they also left in the car...while shrutu fumed in anger....)
Meanwhile in avni car .....
Both kids were playing...while avni was looking out the house...blankly.....she gets flashes of the past .....
Flashback.....
Avni:(crying holding the babies)"neil meri baat mano maine kuch nahi kiya....tum toh jante ho muhje..."
Neil:"avni tum itni Careless kaise ho sakti ho....tum janti ho phir bhi tumne..."
Avni:"per Neil me..."
Neil:"bass avni muhje kuch nahi suna..."
Flashback ends...
Avni thoughts were broken by naina voice...
Naina:"mumma pani puri aa gaya..."(avni looks out to see the pani puri stall...she wipes her tears.....Smiles at the kids.. and they all head out to eat pani puri.....soon they head back home.. after enjoying the pani puri....)
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
So guys hope you enjoyed it...
Plz do vote and comment...
I will update next part after 120 votes
Precap:"bebe tells prakash to find out about avni....more flashback...and a big twist...."
Remember 120 votes...
Advertisement
- In Serial75 Chapters
Vigil's Justice (Vigil Bound Book 1)
Death is a real son of a bitch. Boyd Knight found his calling when he joined the Marines and qualified for the elite Force Recon. He’d found a tribe and a family, so when a hand grenade landed near his team, he jumped on it without thought or regret. But instead of winding up dead, he wakes up butt naked in a cave full of monsters with a knife in one hand and a pistol in the other. He’s been hand chosen by the Five-Faced God of Justice and entrusted with the power of the Vigil Bound. Every kill makes him stronger and thanks to the Ascendant System, Boyd can level up, unlock increasingly powerful spells, and even harness the abilities of the monsters he’s been dispatched to hunt. If he can survive the deadly shapeshifter stalking him from the shadows, Boyd’s second life promises to be even more ass-kickingly epic than his first.
8 187 - In Serial80 Chapters
Godly Otaku Divine System
G.O.D.S._________________________________________________________The Otaku Zhen Shi died and reincarnated in another world. Cliche much? Yup!Then he got a system! Cliche again? Yup!But, this system steals stuff from Gods and kindly gifts them to the less fortunate... namely to himself! Huh... That's sort of new...He also has a magical library in his mind! Wait... isn't that strangely familiar? Flaws!Also, his best bro is the Legendary Great Merlin with a plus one! Now is that cliche...?________________________________________________________________________________________________ Zhen Shi was a nerd and an otaku that had traveled all over the world with his absent parents until... he was pushed off a cliff? But fortunately, he reincarnated in another world with a system! This new world seems to have unexplained connections to the Gods and Deities of almost every mythology back on Earth, and their influences are seen everywhere, from every kingdom to every clan... Thankfully, Zhen Shi isn't an ordinary person. He is a bookworm easily entranced by the workings of the world and very familiar with world history and mythology. So he has an advantage over everyone with his knowledge! Moving on, did I mention he's a shameless bastard at the forefront of ridiculous situations? With even more shameless Merlin and Co. to keep him company? With his beloved but mischievous system *cough* scapegoat *cough*, Zhen Shi embarks on a journey facing happiness and sorrow alike as he attempts to reach the heavens!________________________________________________________________________________________________ AUTHOR NOTE This is my first novel. But I intend to finish it!Release rate: 5 chapters/week [DEFINITELY! Sticks and stones may break my bones, but this will happen!] The story will bring in some references from popular Chinese novels, games, and anime. But it will mainly include real-world mythology. Also, the cover is original. Also, you can hop into a fun community and learn much more on discord, https://discord.gg/NWW2AGy
8 688 - In Serial24 Chapters
I Live To Play VR-MMORPG
This is not the story about someone playing VR-MMORPG. Instead of someone playing VR-MMORPG, this is the story where someone makes VR-MMORPG possible. Technology and Science have truly come a long way. Finally, in the year 20XX, the people successfully created Immersive VR-MMORPG. A technology that takes you to another world, allowing an individual to experience a second-life. Unfortunately, Andy Lee, who participated in creating the masterpiece technology, didn't get to enjoy it. Before the technology was perfected, he died of a heart attack. Being devastated by the fact he didn't get to fulfill his dream, he was given a second chance. He miraculously traveled back to his primary school days. This time, he won't slack. He will live his life to the fullest unlike before. His goal in this life was obvious and that is to fast-forward the development of technology and science. All of the efforts he gave were only to achieve his dream, which is to play VR-MMORPG.
8 205 - In Serial10 Chapters
Kung Fu Panda: The New World Order
Order and Chaos.These are the foundation of life. But what happen when people want to control these foundation? Nothing good will come from it. Po, the Furious Five and the Four Constellation must join forces with a Legendary organization known as The Crusader to stop the powerful and Dangerous organization from ruling the world. New powers, new relationship, new faces.
8 193 - In Serial9 Chapters
Aristocratic Avenue
Andrew had a pretty simple life plan: write LitRPG fiction, make a boatload of cash, and... well, he'd figure out what he actually wanted to do with the cash once he'd gotten it. But things haven't worked out quite as he'd hoped. After dozens of failed LitRPG serial attempts and countless thousands of words written, he's found himself pushing forty and broke, living alone in a crappy apartment.But when the platform upon which he publishes his work, Aristocratic Avenue, gains sentience, he and his fellow writers suddenly finds themselves transported to a playground of its own making, a place where there are no rules except the ones the authors have imposed upon themselves through their own writing. Spawned in pods of three, they will need to work together to figure out just what the darned heck they're supposed to be doing and how to get the goodness gracious out of there.In Andrew's pod are the bossy and enigmatic Margeaux Sinclair, crossover erotica/LitRPG author who immediately demands increasingly kinky sex from the hapless Andrew in order to level up. There's also teenager Zachary, who is rather regretting his choice to write about a world populated only by the undead. Turns out, it's kinda hard to talk when your lips are rotting off.Armed only with his skills of Deduction and Investigation and an inspirational mug he managed to bring along with him from home, Andrew is determined to answer one question:What the ever-loving blessed little heart?!---This is a blow-off-steam hobby project, and I can't tell you how often it'll update as it's dependent on my regular work. But I hope you enjoy it regardless!
8 120 - In Serial21 Chapters
Forgotten, Forsaken (Post Canon Worm/Kantai Collection)
Hell starts out as remarkably like a particularly stormy Midway. It gets worse... and better.
8 113

