《Avneil - being with you》Birthday prep
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So guys I am here with my next part....
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Shruti:"Neil ..."(all turn to see shruti standing there....as soon as avni sees her she signals vivan to take the kids up..)
Vivan:"aare baccho chalo hum sab chalke aapka new room dekhte...mishti aao..."(all 4 went up)
Shruti:"yeh kya kar rahi hai yahan...(pointing towards avni)
Sweata:"kyun haan yeh yahan nahi aa sakti kya...."
Shruti:"nahi auntyji mera maltab hai ki Neil aur iske beeche ab kuch nahi raha toh..."
Bebe:"oyee...yeh ghar mera hai...aur avni is ghar ki bahu hai tu mane ya na mane ye teri marzi..."
Shruti:"bahu?....per Neil aur avni toh alag...."
Neil:"nahi hue the...."
Shruti:"kya?"
Neil:"me aur avni alag nahi hue the..."
Shruti:"what....per kaise matlab..."
Neil:"abhi pata chalega...pehele ek gift laya hoon tumhare liye...ushe toh dekh lo...dd..."(Dd plays a video of diksha confess and a phone call convo of shruti and diksha...)
Shruti:(after seeing the video )"yeh yeh sab "
Avni:"tumhari sachayi ..."
Shruti:"tum tum chup raho....yeh sab jhoot hai....neil me me tumse pyaar karti hoon...tum sirf mere ho...tumne toh isse majbori me shaadi ki thi....phir itni hamdardi kyun..."
Neil:"shut up shruti....tumhe ho kya gaya hai...tum meri bachpan ki friend nahi ho...tum badal gayi ho..."
Shruti:"oh go to hell with badal gayi ho...tumhe pata bhi hai me bacchpan se tumse pyaar karti thi...per tum...tumne kabhi bhi muhje acknowledge nahi kiya...pehele apni studys me busy the...air phir pata nahi kahan se woh juhi aa gayi ...per 2 saal baad hi she died...and muhje laga ki bhagwan muhje ek naya chance de rahe ...per ider aayi toh tumhari mom and tumhari shaadi iss iss avni ke saath kardi....maine socha meri kismat me tum ho hi nahi per diksha....ussne muhje bataya tumhare aur avni ke rishte ki sachayi.....toh haan maine tumhe aur avni ko alag kara.....per alag karte hi tum sabse akard akard ke rehene lage....meri kya galti hai neil...ki maine pyaar kiya...."(she said finally breaking down...)
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Voice:"teri galti me batata hoon..."(all look back to see Rohan standing there....if u forgot rohan is shruti twin brother...)
Neil:"rohan?...tu yahan kaise..."
Rohan:"me toh pehele hi aa jata agar isse karname muhje pata hota toh....thanks avni muhje batane ke liye...(turning to shruti )"Or tu ...tuhje ho kya gaya hai Shruti...tu pyaar nahi pagalpanti kar rahi hai...tune kabhi bhi socha ki woh 2 bacche unka kya hoga...tune toh aapne hisab se avni aur Neil ko alag kar diya...per tune kabhi usse 2 chote baccho ka socha...tu unse unke papa ka pyaar cheena chahati hai...tu ..me kya bolon tuhje..."(he said all disappoint while shruti lowered her head...)"bahut ho gaya tera natak ab chal ....maine hum dono ki flight book kardi hai ghar ki.."(he holds her hand and drags her out .....)
Neil:"rohan tu..."
Rohan:"nahi Neil aaj nahi...tu hamesha isko bachpan me isski galti se bacha leta tha lekin aaj nahi...beema shruti ka saman lena..."(beema nodded and came down after 10 mins with shruti's stuff and rohan left with shruti )
All settle down in the hall when a reminder rings on both avni and Neil's phone...they both get up and stare at each other ...
Avneil:"oh no...."(all look at them confused except for vidihut riya and priya...both avneil start pacing around the room calling different people and finalizing stuff...)
Bebe:"inhe kya ho gaya..."
Riya:"kuch nahi bebe...kal aarav or naina ka birthday hai uski hi preparations ke call kar rahe..."
Sweata:(laughs)"yeh toh ese tension me hai jaise aapne boss ko koyi report deni hai.."
Priya:"aap janti nahi hai auntyji inke bacche inke liye boss se kam nahi hai..."(all laughs...after 30 mins of calls both avneil finally take a breath and sit on the couch....)
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Neil:"decorations "
Avni:"check"
Neil:"cake "
Avni:"check"
Neil:"dresses "
Avni:"check and food "
Neil:"check"
Avni:"gifts..."
Neil:"check...ek min.."
Avni:"kya hau..."
Neil:"me princess ka barda wala gift toh lena bhool gaya...(avni glares at neil)"aare mera matlab maine book kar diya hai...per store se collect karne ka time nahi mila..."
Avni:"neillll..."
Vidihut:"don't worry avni woh maine collect kar liya hai...ghar pe call aaya tha toh muhje laga tum dono busy ho is liye maine kar liya..."
Avni:"uff thank you vidihut..."
Neil:"yeah thanks man.."
Vidihut:"tum dono pitoge...thanks kis baat ka..."(avneil smile )
Naina:(running from upstairs to avni)"mumma mumma mumma "
Avni:"kya hua baby..."
Naina:"mumma buku lagi..."
Avni:"oh...accha chalo aapke liye yummy yummy food banate..."
Aarav:"mumma aaj kya banega..."
Avni:"aapke dd uncle ka favorite aalo puri..."
Dd:"aare wah bhabhi mazza hi aa jayega..."(all laugh )
After dinner avni and neil take the kids to their room to sleep....as avni enters her room all the old memories play in her head...its been almost about 3 years since she entered her room.....
Naina:"mumma aao na.."(naima said breaking avni thoughts....she turned to see naina aarav and neil already on the bed...she smiles and goes and lays down next to them)
Aarav:"mumma lori sunao na..."
Avni:"theek hai.."(and she starts to sing a lori while both avneil patted the kids head)
Avni looked at the kids to find them sleeping peacefully.....than she looks at neil to see him staring at her....avni rises her eyebrows asking what...neil nods no than mouths to her "I love you" to which avni smiles and whispers back "I love you too"
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So guys hope u enjoyed it...
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Will update next part after 200 votes....
Precap:"aarav and naina birthday...."
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