《SIN [yoonmin]》Fifteen
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[Namjoon is older in this btw}
The man seems very surprised to see Jimin, but quickly masks his confusion with a smile. He steps away from Yoongi and walks towards the younger, lifting his hand for a handshake.
He is wearing a similar black gown to Yoongi's, showing Jimin this man is also a priest. He has black hair that looks kind of fluffy, parted towards the right, a slightly wider nose that suits him greatly and rosy, plump lips. He is really tall, especially compared to Jimin, and looks pretty lanky.
His eyes show kindness as he opens his mouth to present himself.
"Hi there, young man. My name is Kim Namjoon, but people usually just address me as priest Kim. Yoongi didn't tell me he has other visitors over. What's your name?"
Jimin notices Namjoon's eyes looking over him from head to toe, but when he looks back up to hear Jimin's answer, he doesn't look the least judgmental, just interested. Jimin already can say he likes Namjoon better than Yoongi.
He catches the priest's extended hand and shakes it a few times. With a genuine, small smile, Jimin answers his question.
"Park Jimin, sir"
"Nice to meet you, Jimin. For how long have you been here? Or did you just arrive as well?" Namjoon looks a bit around, possibly looking for any car that indicates Jimin just arrived.
"No, no. I have been here for a few days."
"That's amazing! You could show my group around a bit, then. You seem to be the same age as most of them, so I am sure you will get along."
Namjoon goes to the van and slides the door open. A few seconds afterwards, one by one around fifteen people get off and are staring around the place.
Jimin can see a few boys and a girl that seem his age. Next to them are some other kids who look maybe around twelve.
"Go introduce yourself, Jimin." Yoongi's voice shatters his train of thought.
He scoffs and goes straight towards the older bunch. He stops in front of one boy who looks quite friendly and clears his throat to capture his attention.
The boy turns around from searching for something inside his bag and flinches slightly when he notices Jimin standing next to him- he didn't hear him coming.
The boy has a beautifully structured face and figure, with a pointy nose and full, red lips. On top of his head is a messy mop of light brown hair that suits him amazingly. The second his eyes fall on Jimin's figure, his lips stretch into a heart-shaped wide and genuine smile.
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"Hi!" his voice is cheerful, as if sleeping one night in a church was his biggest dream and is finally happening.
"Uhm...hey," the difference in tones is obvious, but Jimin's lack of excitement doesn't seem to affect the guy at all.
"What's your name? Did you also come with a group? How long are you staying?"
'Good lord, at least he is pretty' Jimin thinks sourly.
"Uhm...I am Jimin and no, I am here alone. And you? What's your name?"
"I am Hoseok. Ohh, don't you get bored here alone? Don't worry, we can now be friends." and he flashes Jimin another big smile.
Jimin can't exactly say he wants them to be friends, but he could do for some small talks. He is damn tired of 'chatting' with only Yoongi. He would also call his friends, but the priest took his phone.
"I'd like that." Jimin also smiles slightly, to not put the boy off with his lack of reactions.
"Hi, I'm Seoyeon!" a cheerful feminine voice pulls Jimin from Hoseok and turns to see the girl who spoke.
The girl is just a bit shorter than him, the top of her head at his eyes' level. She has long, dark brown, wavy hair that looks well taken care of. She sports a pair of thick, light brown eyebrows above two round, bambi eyes that have Jimin mesmerized. Her nose is sharply shaped and her bottom lip is way fuller than the upper one.
"Hey, I'm Jimin." he smiles at her gently.
"How old are you Jimin to be here alone?" she asks, curiosity and confusion mixing into her tone.
"I am nineteen. You guys?"
"We are both seventeen. Minjun and Siwoo here are sixteen though." she introduces the other two boys staying on the side.
The two of them wave awkwardly and mutter a 'hi' before going back to taking among themselves.
"How long are you staying here?" Jimin asks.
"I think for only one night. But priest Kim said that he might convince priest Yoongi to let us stay over for longer if we want to." Hoseok speaks up, barely containing his excitement.
"I want to stay for as long as possible. It's so beautiful here!" Seoyeon exclaims swirling around.
"Jimin!" Yoongi's voice makes him turn around, "Show the visitors where their rooms are and then come together to prepare lunch."
Jimin watches and Yoongi and priest Kim go inside through the open front door, chatting loudly and cheerfully. Jimin feels the same desperate want to break them apart. Yoongi is awfully happy with this Namjoon figure and it ticks Jimin off.
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He turns towards Hoseok and takes his bag from him, already walking towards the cottage when Hoseok starts running after him, demanding cutely his bag back. He turns his head towards the younger and winks.
The door is thrown open and Jimin steps into the cottage, many footsteps behind him. He stops and waits until he sees everyone has arrived inside.
"There are six rooms, as you can see, three on each side. I really don't care how you settle in, but throw your shit somewhere and let's go to lunch."
He can feel judgmental eyes boring on him as he lets out the 'mean word', but it is what it is, he really doesn't care for it.
He watches as Hoseok and the two other boys, whose names Jimin already forgot, go inside the same room. When he exists and sees Jimin waiting for him, Hoseok smiles big. Together, they go inside the main building to the dining room.
Reaching the kitchen, Yoongi splits everyone in groups and everyone starts working right away.
Hoseok and Jimin are put at the sink to wash extra plates for everyone. Everyone is working peacefully, nun Maria guiding the kids around at cooking.
The boys keep asking random questions to get to know each other more and Jimin is actually glad this group arrived. Yoongi hasn't bothered him at all since the morning.
After the lunch is done and served, everyone splits and most go to their room to settle in better, others are going around the complex to explore.
"How did you come here, Jimin?" Hoseok asks suddenly and Jimin almost chokes on his own saliva. They are walking aimlessly around the garden.
His heart is suddenly racing, mind searching quickly for something to answer with. He doesn't want to tell Hoseok the reason is that he is gay and likes sex. He seems pretty accepting and open, but Jimin doesn't want to risk losing him so quickly.
"I..uhm...needed a break from school. Go somewhere quiet and far away. Yeah." he scratches his nape and peeks at Hoseok's face for a reaction.
"Hopefully you found it. You are such a fun person, I wouldn't want you to feel stressed or bad."
Jimin stands up quickly and mutters something about needing water before rushing inside the rectory.
He never heard someone telling him they care, or that they wish for his well-being. Who the fuck is Hoseok to care about him so quick? He doesn't even know anything about him.
He just walks a bit through the hallways to clear his flushed face, when he sees Yoongi's door half open and voices from inside.
His curiosity makes him stop in his tracks and approach the room as quiet as possible. Inside are standing Yoongi and priest Namjoon.
He barely listens to the conversation, as they are talking about some mass attendance. What his eyes catch is the subtle touches and advances priest Kim does towards Yoongi.
Namjoon just places his hand on the other's shoulder, but since Yoongi is with his back towards the door, Jimin can see the thumb moving and caressing him.
He continues to watch the scene, Namjoon finally taking his hand off his shoulder. What he does next though, irritates Jimin until he sees red.
He puts his large hand on Yoongi's frail arm and moves it up and down, in a gentle manner, but to Jimin, as an outsider, it seems so seductively.
Jimin turns around, mind not clear. All he can imagine is Yoongi falling for this man's charms, letting him touch around so carelessly, with no reaction.
He doesn't understand the rage and possessiveness building inside his being as he rushes outside. He spots Hoseok in the same place as before.
"You wanted to know why I am here?"
"Yeah? I already asked and you-"
"Let me show you why."
***
[longest chapter so far
Jimin is about to do something dumb tsktsk poor guy
also, Hoseok is not the mysterious character from Yoongi's past
i hope it wasn't boring!
more, the reason the story is going so slow is because i personally don't like stories where 3 chapters in they are already together and living perfectly..
Yoongi is a priest, therefore he has completely different believes than Jimin. His parents trusted him to be firm against Jimin, so ofc he isn't going to let himself loose so easily.
I have many things planned for this story tho, so keep an eye out ;)
enjoy!!]
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