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Tarnished throne buckling beneath
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The Caring Dungeon
NOTE: I, as an 'author' am on a(n) (indefinite?) Hiatus. Without getting into too many details, the person who convinced me to write, who was my muse and my everything, is no longer in my life. I think about writing and I get physically ill and ache in ways that transcend the physical. I want to want to write, but I cannot find the energy. Life events, combined with apparently thin-skin when it comes to personal attacks on this platform, make it impossible for me. The messages, comments, and reviews I recieve(d) were so detrimental to my mental health that I've already removed one story from this website. This one remains up only because the criticisms located in this work are about my writing, and not personal attacks.I just felt like I should put something out there for anyone who is thinking about starting this story. It is not completed. I don't know that it ever will be at this point. I have lost my muse.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Not everything in this world is natural, and it's only natural to fear the unnatural. Fortunately for Manning, he was natural. Unfortunately, he found himself to be in a very unnatural state. Manning was trapped inside of a gemstone, called a dungeon core. Luckily for Manning, he found himself capable of using his newly found unnatural power to make a nature filled forest. With the help of Cara, his unnatural roommate, and Ash, his nature spirit companion, Manning dreams of covering the continent with the most beautiful and dangerous forest it has ever seen. His only other goals are to protect himself and Cara, and if he could ever remember, recover his memories. This is my first time attempting to write anything. Updates whenever I can find the energy and desire to write.
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The Gray Mage
The Great Collapse shattered the world, altering its terrain and destroying governments. At the same time, it brought magic to the world in a wave of chaos. Only the Gray Mage, who appeared just as suddenly as magic and disappeared just as fast, saved humanity from the destruction magic's arrival brought. A century and a half later, the world is run by the Orders, the Guilds, and the Families, an uneasy peace between the three as the end of the Third Age of Magic draws near. Ryan Novar, heir of the most powerful Family, was born blind. During his Appraising, however, he learned that he possessed great magical potential, which would be wasted due to his blindness. Determined to not waste his magical potential and to overcome his blindness through magic, Ryan set a goal for himself: become the second Gray Mage. While working towards this goal, Ryan discovers secrets about the Great Collapse, the Gray Mage, and the paradox that was his own birth. Release Schedule: Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Saturdays by 11:59 PM CST (+/- 1 day)
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500+ Psychology Facts | ✍
Psychology, if it's your cup of tea, opens doors to a lot of interesting characteristics and traits that human beings encompass. Reading about it will not only give a meaningful perspective to how you see the world, but will also allow you to reach out and understand people around you better.
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Ashura Vale
The void; Endless and powerful; Unknown and mysterious. To earth that is. A young earthling gets the chance to explore the wonders of the void, explore its depths and pry out its secrets, join him on his journey to various expanses as he grows and learns, the universe is his new playground and he's eager to explore it.
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The Dark Veil
This story is about a seemingly average teenager named Dennzyte or Denny. Ever since he was a kid, he has strayed away from any contact with the outside world because he doesn't see the point.Does he really like being left alone? Yes and No. He likes it because he can escape from reality. But he hates them because he has to use them to escape from reality. The real story is that ever since he was a baby, he has not been able to see peoples faces, just a shroud of darkness where their heads should be. He feigns like he knows his parents or family. But he has never seen them.He acts as if it doesn't bother him but he is human. Right?Will he find a way out of this curse? Will he be able to see the people who have loved him since he was born? Find out in The Dark Veil.
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I Can Make You Smile (David x Reader)// CAMP CAMP
David approached the new counselor, (Y/N) with a welcoming smile. "Welcome to camp campbell!" He smiled. (Y/N) smiled nervously, giving a small wave to the man. "Yeah, welcome to this shithole." A boy with a blue hoodie mumbled. (Y/N) smirked slightly, "So I guess you'll be a hard one." "Yep, bitch." "Brat."David's smile faltered slightly. "Oh, boy." He chuckled.//Hi, Welcome to my David x reader! You're name is (Y/N) correct? Sorry to inform you, but you're a spy! A spy who lives in a family of spies where everyone expects you to do your job! Especially your father! You're job is to hunt down Cameron Campbell! Working as a camp counselor at a camp in order to get information on this mysterious gambling man, You meet a man named David, one that you fall for and refuse to admit for the reasoning of investigation distractions. So?What will it be? Betray your crush, David by turning in his father figure to the police to gain respect from your father? OrBetray your father and quit your family lined job in order to keep your relationship with who you call your true love?
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