《falling for a tiktok boy》chapter: thirteen
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Jadens pov
Brynn and me finished getting ready and made our way downstairs. Everyone was in the living room waiting. "Is everyone ready to head to the beach?" I asked as everyone looked dressed and ready. Everyone said they were ready so we went out to the driveway.
"I want to ride with the birthday girl," Chase said smiling at Brynn. Eventually we figured out who was riding with who, since there were 20 of us going we needed a lot of cars. Brynn, Joanne, Maia, chase, Avani, Anthony, and me rode in Taylor's SUV since there was a lot of seats. Taylor had 4 more cars so everyone did there best to squeeze into them. We also had to take the surf boards, so Sam, Jackson, Josh, and Yewsif ended up taking an Uber there so there was enough room for the boards. I led the way we went to one of the best beaches in California Malibu.
Brynns pov
Once we made it down to the beach we took some pictures before we got wet. Jaden and me started to walk down to the water I jumped right in and went under. When I came up I looked back at Jaden and he was still standing on the shore. I stood up and yelled, "what's wrong Hossler are you scared?" He smiled at me and said, "that's it" he dove into the waves and picked me up and spun me around. Everyone eventually came running into the water. We were already in the ocean for about 2 hours and we didn't even know it. It was getting kind of late so me and Same started surfing before the sun set. I was so happy that I was finally getting back on my board. I use to surf all the time whenever we would visit my aunt in Florida. I even lived down there for a year when I was 11. The sun was starting to set so Jaden and me decided to take some pictures.
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"Alright guys are you ready to head home?" He asked everyone and they all agreed they were ready. I didn't know what the plans were for the rest of the day but it was already the best birthday.
Jadens pov
When we got back to Taylors house I told Brynn to shower fast because I wanted to take her out to dinner. I showered in Taylor's bathroom while she got ready which actually didn't take to long to my surprise. I decided to post for Brynns birthday which took awhile because there was so many things I wanted to say but I didn't know how.
Jadens birthday post to Brynn
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Brynns pov
After I got out of the shower I did my hair and put on a little bit of mascara. I decided to wear this for dinner with my hair down and wavy.
I checked my phone before going to find Jaden and I saw he posted for my birthday. What he wrote made me tear up I never thought I would be so lucky to find someone like Jaden. I commented on it and then went to find Jaden right away. I was walking down stairs yelling, "Jaden."
Then I heard him yell, "in Taylor's room babe." When I walked in my jaw was on the floor he looked so good.
"Jaden you're so cute thank you for the birthday post it was so sweet. I love you" I said walking towards him.
"I love you too... babe you look gorgeous" he said looking me up and down.
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"Thank you, you look amazing too" I said as he pulled me close and kissed me.
"Are you ready to go the Uber is already out front?" He asked.
this is what Jaden wore
"Yep just let me grab my purse" I said. Once me and Jaden made it into the Uber I asked him where we were going but he said it was a surprise. I noticed when we were leaving there was no one in sight.
"We're here" he said unbuckling his seat belt. I didn't really know where here was but the place looked beautiful and I knew it wasn't a restaurant. We walked up a big staircase hand and hand until we reached two big doors. Jaden opened the door for me and the room was pitch black until someone hit the switch.
"Surprise" I looked around and everyone I knew was there even my hometown friends kaitlyn and valerie.
"Jaden you didn't have to do all this" I said looking around the room. It was beautifully decorated all the sudden I heard someone yell let's party.
We danced all night it was the best night of my life I was with all of the people I cared about most. I was just missing one person my dad but he's in the marines and was currently in Afghanistan. We weren't sure when he would be back but in a few days I would be able to do a Skype call with Payton, Maia, and my mom. They brought out the cake and started singing to me.
It was getting late and we had to be out by 12 and it was 11:30, so we started cleaning up which didn't take that long because there were so many people. We headed back to taylor's I feel asleep in jaden's arms.
Jadens pov
Brynn feel asleep in the car so I carried her up to my room. She started to wake up when I laid her down in the bed. I went into the bathroom and grabbed makeup wipes so I could take her makeup off. She was really starting to wake up now.
"Jaden you don't have to do that" she said while I was wiping away her mascara.
"It's okay babe don't worry about it" I said. After I was done getting all the makeup off I got her one of my shirts to wear. She went into the bathroom to change and I changed Into some grey sweats and no shirt. I got into bed while I waited for Brynn. I was scrolling through Instagram and saw Brynn posted.
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Brynn came out of the bathroom wearing my shirt man did she look good. I took a picture of her and posted it on snap. I captioned it "the prettiest birthday girl"
"What was that for" she asked while getting into bed.
"No reason" I said. I pulled her close and she laid her head on my chest.
"Shit I never opened anyone's presents" she said.
"It's okay everyone will understand you had a busy day. We can do it tomorrow morning in the living room so everyone can see" I suggested.
"Sounds perfect" she said. "Hey Jaden"
"Yeah" I said
"Thank you for flying everyone out for my birthday it really means a lot to me" she said all sweet.
"Of course babe I wanted your 18th birthday to be special" I said squeezing her tight. We eventually feel asleep in each other's arms.
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