《Adult ✅》part 3
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დილით დროზე ადრე მეღვიძება თვალებს ვახელ არ ვიცი ეს რიგანა გამოწვეული მაგრამ მეღვიძება თვალებს ვახე ლოგინიდან სიხარულით ვდგები და სააბაზანოში შევდივარ ... ვწესრიგდები იქიდან კი გარდერობის ოთახში შევდივარ და ტანსამლის არჩევას ვიწყებ ბევრს არ ვფიქრობ : გრძელ კრემისფერ ატლასის კაბას ვიცვამ და იმავე ფერის თხელ პალტოს ფეხზე კი მაღლებს ვიცვამ თმას მაღლა ვიწევ და პატარა ზურგ ჩანთას ვიღებ შიგნისთ საფულეს , გასაღებს , ნაუშნიკებს და კედებს ვდებ მერე კი სახლიდან გავდივარ
ოფისში როგორც კი შევდივარ ყველას ყურადღებას ვიპყრობ .. რაც ცოტა დისკომფორტს მიქმნის .. მაგრამ ვიკიდებ და ჩემი კაბინეტისკენ მივდივარ გზაში ემა მხვდება და ძაან ცუდი თვალებით მიყურებს რო შეიძლებოდეს თვალებით მოკვლა არც დაფიქრდებოდა ისე მომკლავდა .. კაბინეტში შევდივარ და მაგიდაზე საბუთები მხვდება მეც ერთი ამოვიოხრე და ჩემს სავარძელში ჩავჯექი და კითხავა დავიწყე ცოტა ხანში კარებზე კაკუნი გაისმა მეც თავი წამოვყაი და ლუი შემრჩა .
-ჰეი ჯიჯი რა კარგად გამოიყურები ...
-მადლობა ლუი
-არაფრის აბა იყავი სტაილსთან ?
-არა რამე მოხდა ?
-გიბარებდა .
-არაფერი არ უთქვიათ ჩემთვის ..
-მიდი ადი არ გააბრაზო
-კარგი ავალ
ნეტა რატო მიბარებს ? ამ ფიქებში ჰარის სარათულზეც ავედი ერთი ღრმად ჩავისუნთქე და ამოვისუნთქე . მერე კი კარებზე დავაკაკუნე ..
-მოდი გაისმა ხრინწიანი ხმა
-ამ მისტერ სტაილს მეძახდით ?
-აჰ ჯიჯი კი გეძახდი ...
-რამე მოხდა ?
-საბუთებს თუ გადახედე თვალი ?
-კი გადავავლე და დავასრულე კიდევაც ...
-ძალიან კარგი ! ყავა ამომიტანე
-კარგით ...
კაბინეტიდან გამოვედი და ყავა მოვუდუღე შემდეგ ავუტანე და ოთახიდან გამოვედი ... 10 წუთის მერე ისევ მირეკავს სატაილსი მეც ავდივარ მის კაბინეტში და საბუთები ჩამომაქვს ... მერე ვასწორებ და ისევ ამაქვს მოკლედ ფეხები მე არ მეკუვნის ... საშინლად მტკივა ვეღარ ვდგავარ ფეხზე ..
როგორც იქნა დამთავრდა ეს დამღლელი დღე იმდენად დავიღალე რომ არ ვიცი იმედი მაქ ნიკი სახლში იქნება ... მასაჟს გავაკეთებინებ ამ ფიქრებში მივედი სახლშიც როგორც ვივარაუდე ნიკი სახლში იყო და რაღაც დებილობა გადაცემა უყურებდა ...
იუკინდან მივეპარე და თალებზე ავაფარე ხელი
-აბა ვინ ვარ ? რა შემეძლო დავიბოხე ხმა !
-ჰმ ალბათ ჩემი გოჭი
-ხოო გამოიცანი
-როგორ ჩაიარა დღემ ?
-რავი კარგად შენთან ?
-ოხ ნამდვილი სატანაა !
-რა გააკეთა ?
-დღეს მთელი დღეე კიბებზე მარბენინა ალბათ 10 კილო დამაკლებინა ..
-ჰჰაჰა
-რა გაცინებს ?
-მაგარი სასაცილო ხარ !!
-ხოო მასაჟს გამიკეთებ ?
-ოფფ მომინდომა გოგომ !
-გთხოვ
-დაწექი მიდი ..
მეც დავწექი და მთელუ ჩემი არსებით მოვდუნდი ნიკმა ნელა დაიწყო ხელების მოძრაობა ნელა მეხებოდა ბეჭებზე ამ
სიამოვნებაში ჩამეძინა .....
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Sword System Academia
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I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. 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I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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