《An Akshan FF- Sauda(deal of love)》Chapter 4
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The next day Archu is alone at home and talking with someone on call..
Ar- Ek ghanta ho gaya vo bahar gayi hai..aise bina bataye kabhi jati nahi hai....ha ha...agar vaha aayi to mujhe batayiye ga....
She cuts the call... and as she turns around she finds guddan coming with some stuff...
Ar- Bhabhi kaha gayi thi aap....
G- Are kahi nahi... yahi pass hi me gayi thi...
Ar- To batake jana chahiye tha na.... hum yaha chinta me.... ab bhaiya gaye hai aapko dhundhne.....
G- Main kya koi bacchi hu jo kho jaungi....ya ye sheher naya hai mujhe... tumhare bhaiya bhi na........ accha dekho mai tumhare liye kya layi hu....yahi pass hi mi dukan me naye collections aaye hai...hai salwar kameez hi par pattern alag hai... ye dekho....
Archana goes from there....
G- Are kya hua... pasand nahi aaya kya... hmmm... kaise pasand aayega...ab toh sari pasand na pasand vikram se hi shuru hoti hai aur usi pe rukti hai... Hai kaha vo....bohot dino se dikha nahi....
Archu comes back...
Ar- Bhabhi aapki dawai.... le lijiye....
G- Le lungi mai...par vikram kai....
Ar- Ye aap khud se hi kyu nahi puch leti.... shayad aapko khud hi jawab mil jaye....
G- Mujhe?? kuch bhi....vo jitna tumhare karib hai utna....
Ar- Bhabhi please..... aapko pata bhi hai aap kya keh rahi hai....
Archu starts going from there and the clock starts banging...akshat also comes just then...archu checks her watch...
Ar- Vo ghadi badal dijiye ab....
G- Vo hume shadi me gift mili thi... di di ne....
Ar- Usi ke gift toh musibat hai.... Kharab ghadi kyu rakhni hai ghar me... pehlehi jo chal raha hai vo kam hai kya.....
Archu goes from there....
G- Ye humari Archu hi hai na...aise kyu behave kar rahi hai....
Akshat stays silent..... Akshat goes to archu who is standing alone at the balcony....
Aj- Kya hua archu...kya problem hai... dekho vo bimar hai... use humari jarurat hai... aur tum agar usse aise...
Ar- Jaan bujh ke bura nahi behave ar rahi hu mai.....
Aj- Matlab bure tarike se behave kar rahi ho ye toh manjoor hai tumhe... se sab chize naye hai kya humare liye...itne saalo se mere sath tumne bhi toh uski bimari ko jhela hai....itne dino me tume aapna aapa kabhi nahi khoya...toh aaj achanak....
Ar- Sorry bhaiya.... phirse aisa nahi hoga...
She starts going but he holds her hand...
Aj- Sorry ka koi sawal nahi hai...kya hua hai batao..
Ar- Chodiye na...ghar me itna sab kuch ho raha hai... usme mera kyu... hum bhabhi ki taraf dhyan dete hai...
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Akshat takes her in side hug...
Aj- Tum ek kaam karo kuch din Angad ke pass jao... Tumhara dil shant hone pe vapas aao..
Ar- Aap misunderstanding kar rahe ho...
Aj- Mai misunderstanding nahi kar raha hu beta... mai samajh sakta hu...yaha mi situation hi aisi hai ki...
Ar- Aur aisi situation me mai aap dono ko chod ke jaungi aisa lagta hai kya aapko.....akele handle karoge sab kuch..... mai kahi nahi ja rahi... mai yahi rahungi... atleast bhabhi thik hone tak...
Aj- Ek shart pe...tum dil me kuch nahi rakhogi... jo kuch bhi hai vo bologi... mujhe batao tum disturb kyu ho....
Ar- Vikram ka call aaya tha... Aane wale 4-5 dino me madras vapas ja raha hai keh raha tha...
Akshat calls Vikram at a lonely place and he comes....
Aj- Vikram jis maksad se maine tumhe yaha bulaya tha vo maksad abhi pura nahi hua hai... aur tum aise bich me...
V- Akshat maine bohot koshish ki... par mujhe nahi lagta ki iska hal mai nikal paunga....
Aj- Aise achanak kya hua ki tum se sab bich me chod jar rahe ho....
V- Meri baat mano bhabhi ko acchi treatment ki jarurat hai... mai koi doctor nahi... aur jaadu tona bhi nahi karta...
Aj- Vikram mujhe sahi lage aisa ek reason batao..mai...
V- Reason nahi hai mere pass... sirf decision hai.... and I'm sorry...
He starts going...
Aj- Tum mujhse kuch chipa rahe ho...
V- Nahi kuch nahi chupa raha hu...
Aj- Vikram ek aam aadmi aur ek acche businessman me ek farak hota hai... aam aadmi files, books padhta hai... hum insaan padhte hai.. aur abhi jo mai padh raha hu usse ye toh clear hai ki kuch to galat hua hai... kya hua hai batao...
V- Akshat hum deep na hi jaye to accha hai, takleef hogi..
Aj- Mujhe yun upar upar ki bato se takleef hoti hai... Vikram please tell me the truth....
V- Please Akshat...
Aj- Vikram I said please...
V- Akshat meri antara se baat hui..aur vo bhabhi ko chod ke jane ke liye tayar hai... par uske badle jo vo mang rahi hai...
Aj-Are toh vo jo mang rahi hai vo use de...
V- Itna asan nahi hai vo Akshat...
Aj- Mushkil hoga to bhi koi problem nahi...Vo jane ko tayar hai yahi mere liye bohot hai... bolo...
V- Use physical love chahiye...( after a pause) mujhse...
Aj- Vikram!!!
He slaps vikram hard... and then holds his collar...
Aj- How dare you... tum meri biwi...tum... cheee...( leaves him)
V- Akshat tum galti kar rahe ho...( he grabs his throat) tum galti kar rahe ho...jo physical love mang rahi hai...vo antara hai..
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Aj- Ye jhuth hai.... Antara ko bich me la tar tum....( akshat remembers Prashant's words) accha...accha ab sari chize meri samajh me aa rahi hai... matlab Prashant ne jo kaha tha vo sach hai...koi antara vagere nahi hai.... it's just a pshycological trauma... asal me tumne use pehli baar dekha tha tabhi tumhe vo pasand aa gayi thi... tumhe pata tha ki vo mentally disturb hai.... isliye tumne uspe chilla ke uski dual personality ko jaga diya(leaves him forcefully)
V- Nahi Akshat...
Aj- Ayr ab tumhe jo usse chahiye... tum usse bulva rahe ho....
V- Aisa kuch nahi hai Akshat...
Aj- Just shut up....and you're right...ye case handle karne ki tumhari aukaat nahi hai...
Akshat goes from there.... Later he goes to meet Prashant....akshat is roaming here and there in the room...
P- Akshat... is everything ok..
Aj- Ya...
P- Guddan bhabhi ka phirse koi problem hua kya.... matlab mujhe aur vikram ko aana...
Aj- Prashant.... Vikram ab nahi aayega...
P- Nahi aayega matlab...
Aj- Vo madras ja raha hai vapas....
P- Case bich me chodke....
Aj- Ye case vo kabhi kar hi nahi pata...maine hi galat insan ko bulaya..
P- Akshat case ka toh pata nahi...par... vo aadmi genuine hai... uske logic bhalehi mujhe manjoor na ho...par uska confidence..aur jis tarah se vo guddan bhabhi ko handle kar raha hai...mujhe lagta hai...use humse jyada guddan ki bimari samajh me aayi hai....
Aj- Use bimari samajh me aayi hai...par vo prescription galat de raha hai..let it be... ab se aage vo humare sath nahi hoga...
P- Ek suggest karu? hum ek baar bhabhi ko sari sacchai bata de....
Aj- Prashant...
P- Akshat kai baar bimari identifyhoti hai..toh vaha se vo thik hona shuru hoti hai..
Aj- Maybe... par abhi uska vakt aaya hai aisa mujhe nahi lagta...
Just then the phone rings...
P-Hello.. Dr.Prashant bol raha hu...
Prashant looks at akshat tensed... They both rush home.... Archu is waiting for them....
Ar- Bhaiya bhabhi se kabse aapne aap ko bedroom me band karke rakha hai....
Akshat runs inside.... followed by Prashant and Archu...
Aj- Tumne darwaza knock kiya ya nahi...
Ar- Ha kiya..
Aj- Kitni der hogayi? Tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi call kiya...
Ar-Bhayiya mujhe kuch bhi sujh nahi raha tha....
They see the door open and noone inside...
Aj- Guddan...Guddan...
Ar- BHabhi...Bhabhi...
Akshat comes out of the room... he feels something and he goes downstairs.... He finds guddan sitting near stairs hiding her face in knees... akshat goes near her..
Aj- Guddan.... ( She looks up but not at him)
G- Aa gaye aap..( looks at him) accha hua... mujhe aapko kuch dena hai...
Aj- Guddan vo sab badme.. mujhe batao tum itni der tak kamre me kya kar rahi thi.... aur tumne darwaza kyu nahi khola...
Guddan takes out something from below her feet...
G- Ye nikal rahi thi andar....( playing with the hands of the clock)
Aj- Tumne ghadi tod di guddan....
G- Guddan nahi...
Akshat moves back..
Aj-Antara....
Guddan gets up.. prashant and archu also come there..
Ar- Bhabhi...
G- Aur maine ghadi todi nahi hai... acche se khola... phir maine uske ye kaate alag kiye ghadi se...
She points the hands of the clock at archu's neck...
G- Vaise bhi vo ghadi chalti kaha hai... maine hi diya tha... tum logo ne diwar par tanga diya...
Guddan now points at prashant.. archu goes and hugs akshat...
G-Ghadi to bekar hai... sirf uski suyiyan kaam ki...
She now turns at akshat...
G- Ye dekho...ye hours ki suyi...blunt hota hai na ye...Akshat( raising her eyebrows).... ye seeconds ki suyi... ( she again goes to prashant)...Prashant tum matlab second ki suyi...bina vajah idhar udhar daudte rehte hai... par koi aapke taraf dhyan nahi deta.... ye dono suyi aap rakh lijiye ( keeps in his upper pocket).. operation ke liye....
Akshat goes and keeps hand on guddan's shoulder...
G- Main aapni badi suyi lekar jati hu...
Aj- Guddan...
She jerks him and points at his neck shouting....
G- Khoon dekho Khoon... Guddan ke bacche ka khoon... Guddan ke bacche ko andar hi chuba chuba ke mara hai maine is suyi se... sirf ye suyi kaam ki... ye matlab mera vikram....ssssss...( moves the and of the clock near her mouth sensously) bohot accha lagta hai... isse chuba kar lene me....
Aj-( slapping her) chup raho...tum khud janti ho tum kya keh rahi ho....
G- Tumhari biwi mere kabze me hai itna yaad rakho.... chodungi nahi mai use...kabhi nahi...
She starts going up chanting vikram's name.... Akshat angrily tries to go but prashant stops him....
Ar- Bhaiya...
Aj- Lagta hai jaan lelu iski....(starts sobing) par kya karu..bohot pyaar karta hu usse....Prashant mai kya karu....
Hey friends I hope aapko story acchi lag rahi hai... Main janti hu aap chate hai ki mai guddan ko jaldi se thik kardu...par aise phir story me kuch maja nahi aayega.... ek accha sa plot mai likh rahi hu...thoda patiently wait karo.... Iske baad dusri wali update hogi 2-3 days me... Till then let me know your reviews for this part.... Thank You!!!!
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