《Fidaa - An Akshan Short Stories Collection》Story 2 - I HATE YOU - Part 3
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Hi guys, since a few of you guys were asking for a part 3,even though I decided not to write a part 3, I thought why not. So let's gets started
It was the next morning and Guddan was sleeping peacefully since she had cried so much that she was exhausted. Askhat was sleeping sitting up since he had looked over Guddan the whole night and just fell asleep. Guddan slowly starting waking up and when she opened her eyes she saw her Jindal Saab sleeping sitting up. She took his glasses off and made him lay down and put a blanket over him. She smiled remembering the fact that her Jindal Saab loves her a lot, but as soon as she remembered what Revati, her Chutki had done, her smile dropped to a frown, and tears started streaming down her face. Just then Akshat heard her crying and woke up.
Akshat - Guddan tum theek toh ho naa? Ro kyun rahi ho
He pulls her into a hug
Guddan - Jindal Saab... Main bohot buri hoon na, pehle toh main Angad ji ko bachaa nahi payi, aur ab meri jaan, mera sabse keemti rishta, meri Chutki mujhe Angad ji ke maut ki zimidaar maanti hai, mujhse itni nafrat karti hai ki mujhe maarna chahti hai. Mujhe maarna chahti hai Jindal Saab woh, MAARNA! Kya main jeene ki hakdaar nahi hun Jindal Saab, kya sach mein main...
Akshat puts a hand on her mouth
Akshat - Himmat bhi mat karna Guddan aisa kuch bolni ki, agar ek insaan ko yeh lagta hai ke tumhe jeene nahi chahiye to kya iska yeh matlab hai ki tum jeene ki hakdaar nahi ho? Un sab logon ka kya Guddan jinhe tumhare bina jeena manzoor nahi? Maa, Durga bahu, Lakshmi Bahu, Vardaan, Kishore, Papa Ji (Guddan's Father), Kaushalya Maa, aur main? Mere kya Guddan? Ham sab tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahi jee sakte Guddan ek pal bhi nahi. Main toh yehi prarthana karta hun Guddan ki yaa toh hum dono saath main, ek dusre ki baahon main jeena chodein Guddan, yaa toh bagwaan pehle mujhe maut....
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Guddan puts a finger on his mouth
Guddan - Shhhh.... Jindal Saab, agar hum aise bolne ki himmat nahi karsakte toh aapki bhi kaise himmat huyi aisa kuch bolne ki? Itna pyaar karte hain aap humse?
Akshat - Guddan agar tum jaan na chahti ho naa ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hun, toh is duniya ke saar samundron ki gehrayi jaakar naap lo usse 1000 guna kar do. Itna pyaar karta hun main tumse, aur sirf main hi nahi par iss ghar ke sab lok tumse itna pyaar karte hain.
Guddan pulls Akshat into a hug.
Guddan - Jindal Saab ab hum kya karenge? Hamse humari Chutki ki nafrat nahi seh jaayegi, hume kuch na kuch karke usse yeh saabit karna hoga ki hum Angad ji ke maut ke zimidaar nahi hain. Tab hi uski nafrat kuch kam hogi. Par Jindal Saab pehle aap hume yeh batayiye ke aap ko toh hum par yakeen hai naa? Hum sach keh rahe hain, hamne pehle Angad ji ko chudwaya tha aur unho ne mujhe kaha tha ki woh sahi salamat ghar pauhanch jayein ge aur hum aapko bacha lein. Toh hume nahi pata ki woh waapis unn.....unn deewaron ke beech kaise pahaunch gaye.
Akshat - Guddan Guddan mujhe tumpar poora bharosa hai...mujhe pata hai ki tum kabhi bhi Angad ko marne ke liye nahi chod sakti, mujhse bhi zyaada pyaar tum Angad se karti thi aur mujhse zyaada tum use apna bhai manti thi. Par yeh baat naa hi Revati ko samaj mein aa rahi hai aur nahi hum usse samja payenge. Hame iss baat ka kuch bhi karke saboot dhundna parega ki Angad ko tumne bachaya tha.
Guddan - Par kaise Jindal Saab?
Akshat - Woh toh mujhe abhi nahi pata Guddan, par hum dono jo saath main hain, toh humse yeh BHI ho payega. Hume kuch sochna hoga. Par zyada zaroori is waqt yeh hai ke hame yeh nafrat ka naatak jaari rakhna hoga. Revati ko kuch bhi karke yeh pata nahi chalna chahiye ke tumhe sab pata chal chuka hai nahi toh woh pata nahi pagalpan main kya karde. Aur waise bhi hame saboot dhoondne ke liye samhe chahiye.
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Guddan - Theek hai Jindal Saab. Ab aap jakar fresh ho jayiye aapko office ke liye late ho raha hoga. Main aapki coffee lekar aati hoon aur phir kudh bhi fresh ho jayungi.
Guddan starts walking to the cupboard, just then Akshat holds her wrist and pulls her close to him, her hands are on his chest and he is holding her waist.
Guddan - Kya kar rahe hain Jindal Saab late ho jayenge aap.
Akshat - Arre Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal, pehle aap ko sorry toh bol dein dhang se.
Guddan - Sorry? Sorry kiske liya Jindal Saab?
Akshat - Tumhe itna tang jo kiya hain humne. Itna dard diye hai tumhe, tumhe yeh yakeen dilane ki koshish ki ki main tumse nafrat karta hun, jo hala ki kaam nahi kiya, par phir bhi. Ab tumhe yeh bhi toh yakeen dilana parega naa ki tumhare Jindal Saab, tumse kitnaaaaaaa pyaar karte hain.
Guddan - Acha? Toh dilayiye yakeen.
Akshat then starts caressing her jaw with his lips, and leaves small kisses along her jaw.
Guddan - Yeh kya kar rahein hain Jindal Saab?
Akshat ( whispering) - Tumhe apne pyaar ka yakeen dila raha hun Mrs Guddan.... Akshat..... Jindal
Just then Guddan frees herself from his hold and shyly runs away but Akshat holds her wrist.
Akshat - Arre aaj toh bohot sharma rahi ho. Kal kya ho gaya tha? Abb toh main tumhe nahi chodunga.
Guddan remembers their passionate kiss from the day prior and her cheeks turn a shade of dark red. Just then Akshat pulls her towards him. She shyly looks down but he holds her chin and makes her look at him. He then starts kissing her neck.
Guddan (whispering) - Jindal Saab
Akshat - Akshat kaho Guddan, naam lo mera. While kissing her neck, he bites her neck and gives her a love bite.
Guddan - Nahi Jindal Saab, yeh nahi ho payega humse
Akshat - Akshat kaho Guddan
He then kisses the other side of her neck. He starts to unbutton his kurta, exposing his chest. Guddan shyly looks at his chest and starts breathing heavily. Akshat loves the effect he is having on her and unbuttons more of the buttons on his kurta.
Akshat - Akshat kaho Guddan
He then starts kissing her chest and moves towards her cleavage
Guddan then moans - Akshat
As soon as Guddan says his name Akshat takes her into a hard, passionate and hungry kiss. At first Guddan is shocked but she then reciprocates. They part for air and Akshat takes Guddan into his arms and carries her to the bed. He then takes off his kurta and is about to kiss Guddan again when someone knocks on the door.
Lakshmi (while knocking on door) - Sasumaa? AJ? Aap theek toh hai aaj bohot der laga di aapne uth ne main, tabeeyat tho theek hai naa?
Akshat and Guddan part
Akshat - Ji Lakshmi bahu sab theek hai aap chaliye hum aate hain.
Guddan then runs into the bathroom and quickly closes the door
Akshat - Guddan?!
Akshat then smiles and Guddan also smiles behind the door in the bathroom.
Akshat takes his clothes out from the wardrobe. After a while Guddan comes out after getting fresh and Akshat goes and gets fresh as well.
There you have it guys the third part. I have a good news for you guys which is that I have decided to make this a short story. I have not yet decided how many parts it will be but I have decided to show how Guddan and AJ get the evidence to prove Guddan's innocence to Revati. It will have lots of romance, some drama and some emotion. Do let me know if you guys want to see something specific in the story and let me know if you are liking the parts. Thank you so much for giving my book so much love.
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