《Akshat Aur Guddan Ki Atrangi Kahaaniyaan》NAYE RISHTON KA AAGAAZ✨...
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Gupta House...
In a fine morning,the Guptas were having their breakfast..Just then,there was a knock at the door..
Kaushalya-Itni subah kaun aaya hoga!!??
Revti-Maa,main jaakar dekhti hoon!!
Revti went and opened the door..Seeing the visitors,she screamed in happiness!!
Revti-(screaming)Diiiiiiiiii!!!!
Guddan,who was the visitor,immediately covered her and her daughter's ears with her hands..She looked at her sister shockingly!!
Guddan-Aaram se!!Kya kar rahi hai!!(looking at her daughter)Choti darr jaati,yaar!!
Revti-(holding her hands)Maa,Papa!!Dekho kaun aaya hai humse milne!!
Saying this,she took Guddan and Choti inside..Seeing their daughter and granddaughter,Bhushan and Kaushalya got super happy..Guddan went to them,handing over Choti to Revti,and took their blessings..Both the parents blessed her and hugged her..
Guddan-Kaise ho aap dono??Tabiyat thik hai na aap dono ki??
Bhushan-Hum toh bilkul theek hain!!Aur tujhe dekh kar aur bhi theek ho gayein!!
Kaushalya-Haan!!(caressing Guddan's face)Aaj kitne dino baad meri bacchi apne ghar aayi hai!!(looking at Choti)Aur dekhiye toh zara,ek nayi mehman aayi hai humse milne!!
Saying this,she went to Choti and took her in her arms..
Kaushalya-Pehli baar humari naatin apne nanihaal aayi hai,hai na!!(sadly)Iss Corona ke wajah se na hum apni bacchi se milne jaa paayein,na woh yahaan aa payi!!Na meri Guddan ke pregnancy ke waqt hum usse milne jaa paayein aur ab dekhte dekhte humari Gudiya rani ko aath mahine ho gayein hain!!(happily)Par ab dekhiye!!Aakhirkaar meri naatin meri god mein hain!!(looking at her granddaughter)Baccha,pehchana na nani ko!!Hai na!!
Choti giggled looking at her Nani,Nanu and Maasi..Guddan introduced Choti to everyone in her baby language..They had a great moment there..Then Revti and Kaushalya took Choti inside with them to give her a house tour,leaving the father-daughter duo to have a quality time together..
Guddan-(emotionally looked at Bhushan)Papa!!(She went and hugged him)
Bhushan-(hugging his daughter)Kaisi hai, meri bacchi!!Aankhein taras gayi thi tujhe dekhne!!
Guddan-(breaking the hug)Papa!!Abhi no emotional talks!!Sirf acchi acchi aur khushiyaan bhari baatein,okay!!!(she wiped her and her father's tears)
They went and sat on the couch in the hall..
Guddan-Accha,batayiye!!Humnein jo tohfe bheje the tyohaar ke liye,woh kaise lage aapko??
Bhushan-Sab bahut acche the!!Meri bacchi kitna khayal rakhti hai apne dono parivaaron ka!!Mujhe toh garv hai tujh par!!!
Ghar mein sab kaise hain??Akshat,Samdhan Ji,tere bahu bete,Aarav...sab kaise hain,beta??
Guddan-Sab bahut acche hain!!Aur humara bhi bahut acche se khayal rakh rahein hain!!Aapko pata hai,Jindal Sahab aur Maa ne hi humein kaha ki hum jaakar aap se mil aayein!!Ab toh Covid ka keher thoda kam hain!!Toh bas,aa gayein!!
Bhushan-(teasingly)Accha!!Toh Akshat aur Samdhan ji ke kehne par tu humse milne aayi!!(faking disappointment)Apne aap se nahin🤨!!
Guddan-Are!!Nahin nahin!!Papa,aisa kuch nahin hai!!Hum toh woh bas Covid ke precautionary measurements ke chalte....
Bhushan-(interrupting in between,teasing knowingly)Haan..Haan!!!Ab bhala tujhe humari yaar kyun aayegi!!Tere paas itna bada parivaar hai,itne pyaar karne waale apne hain!!Woh toh tera sasuraal nahin,maayka hi hai maano!!Tu toh bas apne Pati,beti,saas,bahu bete...inhi mein rehti hogi!!Tujhe aur kisiki kya zaroorat!!Bhai humein kaun yaad karta hoga ab!!
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Guddan-(emotionally)Nahin,Papa!!Aisa mat kahiye na!!Aisa kuch bhi nahin hai!!Hum aapko bhala kaise bhul sakte hain!!Haan yeh sach hai ki wahaan sab kuch hai par...par humare Papa toh nahin hai na!!!Aap ke jaise humein koi nahin bigad sakta!!Humein aapki bahut yaad aati hai,bas jatate nahin hain!!
Saying this,she was on the verge of crying..So she lowered her head down..Bhushan noticed this and felt guilty for making his princess cry..
Bhushan-(immediately sat by her side and cupped her face)Are!!Kya hua,meri Gudiya!!Tu ro kyun rahi hai!!Main toh bas mazaak kar raha tha!!Teri taang kheench raha tha!!(At this,Guddan looked at her father,surprisingly)Haan,beta!!Mujhe pata hai ki meri bacchi mujhe kabhi nahin bhul sakti hai!!Aur agar bhul bhi toh acchi baat hai na!!Mujhe toh khushi hai iss baat ki meri Gudiya ke paas itna pyaar karne waala parivaar hai,itna khayal rakhne waale apne hain!!Isse badi khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai mere liye!!
Guddan-(disappointed)Toh aap humari taang kheench rahein the,mazak kar rahein the!!!(Bhushan smiled and nodded in yes)Kyun,Papa!!Aapko pata hai na humein aise mazaak bilkul pasand nahin hai!!Phir kyun.....Nahin,Papa!!!Not fair!!I just don't like it at all!!Hum na bahut naraaz hain aapse,humein baat nahin karni aapse!!Hum jaa rahein hain!!Aap kijiye apna mazaak!!
Saying this,she began to leave..Bhushan tried to stop her..Just then,Kaushalya and Revti reached there,along with Choti..They got confused witnessing the current scenario..
Kaushalya asked Guddan what happened..Guddan narrated her everything..
Kaushalya-(looking at Bhushan)Aap bhi na!!Koi aisa bolta hai bhala!!Aapko pata hai humari bacchi ko aisa mazaak bilkul pasand nahin hain!!Phir kyun kiya aapne aisa mazaak!!Ab bhugtiye!!Woh toh ab rahi aap se baat karne!!
Bhushan- Are,Kaushalya!!Tum bhi!!Khair chodo!!Revti,tu toh kam se kam samjha apni behen ko!!
Revti-Na,Baba,na!!!Main nahin padne waali iss chakkar mein!!Aap dono ka maajra hai,aap dono hi dekhlo aapsa mein!!
Guddan winked at her mother and sister as she was teasing her father now..Bhushan got sad at this..As soon as Guddan noticed this,she couldn't continue her drama anymore and stopped it..
Guddan-(hugging him)Aapko kya laga!!Sirf aap hi mazak kar sakte hain aur hum nahin!!Bhai,hum bhi aap hi ki beti hain aakhir 😉!!
Bhushan nodded at this and everyone laughed at this..Then,after some chitchat,Guddan,along with her daughter,left her maayka..
Guddan was,sitting at the back seat and Choti was already asleep..Just then,she noticed a woman was standing under a tree,outside a shop...She was tensed and standing outside her car..It seemed like that woman needed any help..So Guddan asked the driver to stop the car..She went outside the car with Choti in her arms...She headed towards the woman..
Guddan-(calling her)Excuse me!!
Woman-(turning back)Yes!!
Guddan-Kya hua,aap pareshaan lag rahi hain!!Kuch problem hai kya??May I help you??
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Woman-(desperately)Woh main aur meri family ek problem mein phans gayein hain!!Actually hum aaj hi US se wapas India aayein hain!!Aaj subah Delhi mein pahunchne..Inter state flights band hone ke kaaran humein by road travel karke Indore aana pada..Par itni long travelling aur kadi dhoop aur exhaustion ke wajah se mere Sasur ji ki tabiyat bigadne lagi hai achaanak se..Main,mere pati aur mere devar tab se koshish kar rahein hain kisi hospital ki khoj karne par humein kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha hai ki iss anjaan sheher mein hum kya karein!!Network issues ki wajah se Google se bhi connect nahin ho raha!!Aas paas kisi se madad bhi nahin mil rahi hai!!Covid restrictions ke wajah se bazaar ke sabhi dukaan almost band hai toh kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha ki kya karein!!
She was on the verge of crying..Guddan could see her father-in-law struggling for better health inside the car..The woman's mother-in-law was,also there..Guddan couldn't see their helplessness and decided to help them..
Guddan-Accha aap fikar mat kijiye please!!Hum aapko hospital le chalenge!!Aap humari gaadi ko follow kijiye bas!!Sab thim ho jaayega,please don't worry!!
Woman-(relieved,folding her hands)Thank you!!Thank you so much!!Bahut meherbaani hogi aapki!!Main abhi apne pati aur devar ko inform kardeti hoon..
She informed her husband and brother-in-law to come fast,who were searching for help in opposite directions,away from the car..They reached there..Guddan sat in her car and instructed the driver to go to the hospital..They left for the hospital,followed by the family of the woman..
Soon,they reached hospital..Guddan called a doctor and requested him to begin the treatment of the patient immediately..As she was Mrs.Guddan Akshat Jindal,the superstar of Bollywood and wife of the business tycoon Akshat Jindal,the doctor couldn't deny her,even after he was having some other duties..He told his staffs to take the patient in to the emergency ward as soon as possible..He assured the family about the health of the patient and asked them to wait patiently outside the ward..The treatment got started soon..
Guddan-Aap sab yahi rukiye!!Hum reception mein registration karwaake aate hain..
Man-1(That woman's husband)Rukiye!!Main bhi aata hoon aapke saath!!Aapne already bahut kuch kiya humare liye!!Ab aage ki fikar mat kijiye,main sab sambhalloonga!!Thank you so much!!
Then,he,along with Guddan,headed towards the reception..At the reception,just when they were about register,Choti woke up and began to cry..Guddan tried to calm her down but in vain..It seemed like she was hungry..
Guddan-Ummmmm!!I think humari beti ko bhookh lagi hai!!Humein jaana hoga!! I am so sorry!!I hope you will manage...
Man-Are!!Ya,ya..sure!!!Please don't apologize!!Ajnabee hokar bhi aapne itna kuch kiya humare liye,it means a lot!!I will manage everything,don't worry!!Thank you so much!!
Guddan narrated him everything about how to register and what to do and what not if they needed anything or any help..Saying this,she took his leave and left the hospital,while trying to calm down her daughter..
Here,outside the ward,the family was,waiting for the doctor..The doctor camr outside..
Man-2-(tensed)Kya hua,doctor??Sab theek hai na??
Doctor-Ghabrane waali koi baat nahin hai!!He is now out of danger..
This relieved the family..They thanked God for the same..
Woman-Thank you,doctor!!Thank you so much!!
Doctor-Accha hua aap sahi waqt par unhein yaahaan le aayein!!Warna unki condition critical ho jaati aur unka bachna bhi mushkil ho jaata!!
Aur haan!!Shukriya mera nahin,shukriya Mrs.Jindal ko kijiye,jo aap sab ko yahaan lekar aayi!!Dekha jaaye toh unhone hi aapke father-in-law ki jaan bachayi hai!!
Saying this,the doctor left for his cabin,not before instructing then about the medicines,discharge of the patient and prescription..
Woman's mother-in-law-Hey,bhagwaan!!Tera laakh laakh shukr hai mere pati ki jaan bachane ke liye!!Aur laakh laakh shukriya hai uss bacchi ka jo humare liye farishta bankar aayi!!Bhagwaan use saari khushiyaan aur barkat dein!!(realizing that Guddan wasn't there)Waise woh hai kahaan??Mujhe usska shukriyada karna tha!!Milna hai mujhe usse!!
Man-1-(arrived there with medicines and prescription)Maa!!Woh apne ghar chali gayi!!Woh toh aakhir tak humare saath rukne waali thi..par unki beti ko bhookh lag rahi thi shayad,aur woh ro rahi thi!!Isiliye unhein jaana pada apni beti ko lekar...
Woman-Mujhe lagta hai woh koi aam insaan nahin hain!!
Mother-in-law-Matlab??Main kuch samjhi nahin,beta!!
Woman-Maa!!I mean mujhe lagta hai ki woh koi bade ghar ki hain!!Kisi ameer aur bade khaandan ki bahu hain!!Aapne dekha na,doctor bhi unhein jaante hain aur jab hum haahan aayein tab doctor ne unhein bilkul mana nahin kiya aur sab kuch kitni jaldi arrange kar diya!!Warna pandemic ke samay kisi aur patient ko itna care shayad hi milta hoga!!!Aur I think US mein bhi maine unke baare mein kahin padha hai,articles or magazine mein,par yaad nahin aa raha hai!!Kabhi gaur hi nahin kiya!!Humein unse milna chahiye!!Hum unke ehsaanmand hain!!
Man-2-Yeh baat toh aapne bilkul sahi kahi,bhabhi!!We are grateful to her!!Par abhi pehle humein Papa ko discharge karna hain aur apne destination par pahunchna hai!!Aap fikar mat kijiye,main unn madam ko dhoondh lunga aur aap sabko mila bhi dunga!!Thik hain!!
Everyone agreed to this..After discharging their father from the hospital,they left for their destination..
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Hey,everyone!!Here is my new update!!Please vote for the story and comment too!!Now keep guessing who must be the new family 😉!!Till then,stay safe,stay home and take care❤!!
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