《Lakshmila TS Collection》INNOCENT URMILA - 4
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Guys,
So the following chapter has more than 10,000 words.... Truly the biggest chapter... I have written till now.. I neeed lots and lots of votes and comments...
Do not disappoint me please...
So, let's start...
Now, after this Urmila and Shrutikirti.. The two notorious bahus of Ayodhya... Started planning something interesting to help Bua ji come out of her... Steady and out dated vichaars..
URMILA: Shruti... Koi aisa sujhaav do jisse... Saanp b mar jaye aur laathi bhi na toote...
SHRUTIKIRTI: Waah... Jiji aapko to y lokotiyon ka smaran kitne sahaj bhaav se h...
URMILA: Qa bataye Kirti aarya h na... Na jaane kitni baar kitni uktiyan yon hi sahej bhaav se bolte h... Ab yadi unke saath badhna h to... Inka smaran to Krna hi hoga na...
SHRUTIKIRTI: Jiji... Y to sahi kaha apne...
As they were discussing this in the kitchen while cooking so... Bua ji as usual came there out of nowhere and started interupting in their discussion as always....
BUA Ji: Waah... Waah.. Yeh dekho Sumitra tumhari dono Nayan pyaari yahan bhojan banate samay bhajan krne k sthaan pr... Charcha kr rhi h....
SUMITRA: Jiji... Y dono bhenein yadi abhi vartalaap nhi krengi... To kab krengi??
KAUSHALYA: Haan jiji.. Aur bhojan m bhajan nhi varna... Usko banane wale ki prem bhawna ka mahettva hota h...
With all this... Bua ji got irritated and she immediately gathered courage to call Maharaj at an urgent basis...
RAM: Ji bua ji??
MAHARAJ: Bolo jiji qa hua?? Koi kashta h qa aapko jo apne... Itni sheeghra.... Hume yaha ati sheeghra se bulaya??
BUA JI: Haan tumhari y natkhat kul vadhu k karam batane m liye bulaya h...
As she looks towards them... She finds that.. both of them are standing straight without their heads...
BUA JI: Lo ab y b dekh liya h humne.... Ab chahe to pran har lo mere... Hey paramatma sunai de rha h na aapko??
MAHARAJ: Jiji yadi aap batayengi nhi... To hum samadhan kaise krenge..
BUA JI: Hahaha!!! Samadhaan samadhan to tab hoga na... Jab tumlog inki in chhoti chhoti cheezon ko samjhaoge??
RAM: Arthat??
BUA JI: Arthat y putra ki... Ghr ki laxmi... Yadi is prakar bina sir dhake apne sasur k samaksh bina nayan neeche kiye khadhi hogi ?? To qa hoga???
MAHARAJ: Jiji aap is prakar chintit na ho... Y dono mere hi kehne pr is prakar khadi h...
BUA JI: Arthat tumne inhe sir dhakne se vanchit kiya h ??? Kintu q??
MAHARAJ: Abhaar tatha adar vyakta krne k liye .. netron m y achran thatha... Hridya mein y vichaar rehna avashyak h... Na ki sir ko dhak kr... Sabhi k samaksh jhuke rehna... Aur mera hridya bhali bhaanti jaanta h ki... Meri putriyon k vichaar kitne pavitra tatha... Achran m adar chalakta h...
After listening to all this... Bua ji was on fire as she couldn't get a single chance to prove them guilty infront of him... And even the words that she heard made her feel as if someone is humiliating her...
BUA JI: Kintu yadi sir dhak lengi to koi paap kadachid nhi hoga na bhrata shree...
MAHARAJ: Haan jiji paap to avashya nhi hoga kintu aisi koi b vastu thatha kriya jisse hume koi laabh nhi... Usko karne m q vyartha m samay tatha bal ka priyog kre??
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BUA JI: Vaastav m... Maharaj Janak ne koi to kriya ki h... Aap pr... Jo aap is prakar... Sabhi kaaryon ko nishkashit kr rhe h...
MAHARAJ: Jiji..... Wah yogi h... Unke jaise karam krna qa... Yadi m soch b loon to... Mujhe apna samast jeevan vyartha lgta h...
KAUSHALYA, SUMITRA and KAIKEYI: (understanding his guilt) Maharaj ab in baaton m vyartha apna samay q laga rhe h... Chaliye vishraam kr lijiye...
Buaji was about to say something when she saw... Maharaj giving his blessings to his daughters that he had...
MAHARAJ: Urmila.. aaj k bhojan ki sugandh ne to... Samast vatavaran ko apne bheetar samet liya h... Qa banaya h aaj Rasoi m...
URMILA: Pita shree aapka priya bhojan pakaya h aaj... Asha h... Aapko accha lagega...
KAIKEYI: (while looking t Maharaj) Urmila putri tumhre pita shree ka mukh dekh kr hi prateet ho rha h... Ki unhe bhojan kitna manohar lagra h... Ki yadi aaj y... Vishraam na Krke... Bhojan k parusne ki raah dekhenge... To koi ashcharya ki baat nhi hogi... (Looking towards her sisters) Q h na jiji???
KAUSHALYA and SUMITRA: (smiling) avashya... (Looking towards maharaj's puppy face).. Chaliye Maharaj aapke yun raah dekhne se... Bhojan kadachid sheeghra nhi pakega... Varan wah utna hi samay lega...
Maharaj similingly went towards his room.. And here the two sisters went back to their work of planning something..
URMILA: Ek yukti h.. kintu usko purna krne m.. Mujhe Bhrata Ram tha aur sabki b avashyakta hogi...
SHRUTIKIRTI: Q nhi Urmi... Yadi yukti.. acchi hui to... Sabhi.. tumhra bhar poor sahyog krenge... Tum uske liye chintit na ho...
URMILA: To thik h...
In the evening,
While it was a tea break for all of them and bua ji has left for mandir... So, our fav. 8 were busy in planning...
BHARAT: Kintu y karya krega kon??
RAM: Bharat jiski yukti h... Wahi isko antim charan tak lekr jayega na..
URMILA: Kintu Bhrata shree.. Ko to m.. kadpi nhi bhaati... To wah meri baat p q dhyaan dengi??
SITA: Dhyaan dengi wo Urmi... Bss tum kisi b vastu se bhai bheet mat ho jana... Tumhra apna dhairya khona hi... Tumhare liye ghatak siddh ho jayega nhi to...
MANDAVI: Jiji... Urmi k dhairya ki to aap chinta na kre .. wah to wo baandh legi.. hnn bss ise apne krodh p kaabu Krna h...
SHRUTIKIRTI: Haan jiji... Aur wah b y.. Kl ratri m rakh hi chuki h... To aur qa hoga??
SHATRUGHAN: Satya kaha Kirti aur... Bhabhi... Ko darana to asambhav hi prateet hota h...
BHARAT: Yah b satya h...
Here as all were discussing about her bravery Urmila was just lost in her own world.. and our Lakshman as always.. knew the reason of her thoughts...
LAKSHMAN: (while looking staright towards Ram) Bhrata shree... Mujhe Urmi se kuch varta karni h...
Ram could sense from his eyes that he really needs to talk and before telling he even took a glance towards Urmila... With which he knew why is Lakshman asking for some time??
RAM: Haan hnn... Lakshman jao na...
With this he grabbed his Urmi's hand and left towards their room...
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LAKSHMAN: (while holding her from her shoulder) Urmi... Kuch nhi h... Dekho vastav m.. tum atyant samajhdaar tatha... Sarva pratham masoom ho... Prem ka athah.. Sagar bhara h tumhare hridya m.. aur yahi tumko kisi b chiz ko... Prem tatha... Samarpan ka prarthi banata h..
URMILA: Kintu arya... Yadi maine kuch athyadhik josh m aakr kr diya to?? Mujhe darr h ki... Kuch ho na jaye... Mere vichaaron ka asar unpr ho na ho... Yadi wo use vipreet disha m le gyi to... Krodhit hokr... Yaha se chali gyi to... Chidh kr baith gyi to.... Yadi unhone mere liye... Meri mata ko sunaya to?? Bla bla bla bla...
LAKSHMAN: Urmiiiii.... Vishwas rakho aisa nhi hoga...
URMILA: Arya Krna mujhe h... Mein bhaibheet hu?? Mujhe pata h.. ki mein gadbad krne m saksham hu... Aur...
With this for the first time ever he hugged her tightly... As without this stopping her as her thoughts were brimming continuously... Urmila was just stunned with the sudden action... And as expected she stopped then and there for a moment...
LAKSHMAN: Urmiiii... Suno.. tum vastav m kaafi pratibhashaali ho... Aur tumhari y prem k saath samajhdaari ki pratibha hi tumhari pehchaan banegi..
URMILA: Arya... Qa vastav m aapko mujhpe itna vishwas h..
LAKSHMAN: Haan aur rahi baat vishwas ki... To... Bass unhi logo k vishwas aur prem ki chinta kro jo vastav m tumhare liye priye h... Sabki chinta nhi karni chahiye... Kasht kaari ho jaati h kayi baar.. aur na hi sabki baaton p... Sabke vachno p.. Dhyaan dena chahiye...
URMILA: Qa sach m... Unke atirikt koi kisi b baat ka bura maane to unhe aise hi chod do... Unhe na manaye... Aisa q??
LAKSHMAN: Qki unki ikshaaon ko itna mahataav denge to kaise sukhi rahenge... Apne jeevan ko ek naam ek pehchaan kaise de payenge.. qki hr kisi ko to tum prasannn nhi rakh skti ho na..
URMILA: Y baat to sahi bolre h aap??
LAKSHMAN: To ab bahar chale??
URMILA: Haan wo... Wo...
LAKSHMAN: Bolo na... Kuch der aur aise hi rehna h....
URMILA: Aree aise kaise...
LAKSHMAN: Q??? Ardhangini ho tum meri... Itnaa adhikaar hai tumhara mujhpe...
URMILA: Aap satya bolre h??
LAKSHMAN: Haan... Jitna adhikaar mera tumpr h .. utna hi tumhara b mujhpe h...
URMILA: ohh... To aur tez kijiye na... Jaise aap pehle pakde the... Aur haan abhi thodi der m chlte h.. na...
Lakshman could not stop smiling and admiring his beautiful wife... He can spend his whole life... In just admiring her... She seemed to be sooo cutee, sweet and innocent...
After sometime they went out.. And it was time for outcome..
So,
The arrangements to execute it are:
2 strings of different age tied on different hook.. simultaneously.
A wooden doll was about to move on them.
3-4 children playing with that.
As bua ji was approaching towards Bhawan,
URMILA: Dekho baccho abhi bua ji aari h na... Unhi se puchlena...
BUA JI: Q qa hua bacchon?? Tumhari jiji ab qa nhi bata pa ri??
BACCHE: Dekhiye na bua ji... Jiji bolri h ki... Is purani ladi p hi... Hum ise chalaye... Kintu... Yadi aisa kiya... To...
Bua ji and kids in unison.... To y toot jayegi na...
BUA JI: Bhawan ki ladli... Tumhe yah tak gyaat nhi... Ki hr vastu ka ek samay hota h.. tatha... Hume use uske samay k anusaar hi chalana chahiye...
URMILA: Kintu y to sadiyon se sabka bhaar uthate aari h na... Bua ji to ab q nhi??
BUA JI: Bhaar to y ab b utha skti h... Kintu iske upr se bhaar uthwane wale ko... Ispr atoot vishwas Krna padega... Qki yadi y tooti to isme na to... Iska apradh hoga aur na hi... Us vyakti ka... Jisne ispr vishwas kiya...
URMILA: Kintu gud watta to dono m barabar ki h na... To b??
BUA JI: Putri... Yadi gud watta barabar ki h... To... Iske upr Chadha kr... Ise siddh krne ki qa awashyakta?? Aur waise b.. iska upyog krne walo ko to pata tha na... Iski gud watta k baare m... To sabko q batana??
URMILA: ohh... Jii... Kintu yadi aisa h to... Qa ise is prakar upyog na krne p... Ya jis karya k liye... Y bani h... Usme na lane se... Ispr koi shanaka to nhi hogi na??
BUA JI: Shanka Kaisi itne gud h iske andar... Aur samay k saath... Badlaav ko sweekar Krna padta h... Isliye to aaj y... Kaam Krke... Har chiz ko Sarthak to kr rhi h.... Kintu apne vyavhaar se... Apni khanak se... Aur vastav m yahi hona chahiye...
URMILA: To qa har kisi ki alag khanak hoti h??
BUA JI: Haan jis prakar hr Pushpa ki bhinn sugandh hoti h... Usi prakar... Hr manushya ki b bhinn khanak hoti h... Jisse uski pehchaan hoti h... Jo use ek naam deti h...
URMILA: Aur bua ji...
BUA JI: Ab bass... Ab smjha diya maine jitna samjahna tha... Ab b qa nhi Smjh aya??
URMILA: Vastav m y to... Mujhe aapko smjhana tha Bua ji...
BUA JI: Tumhe mujhe!!!! Qa???
URMILA: aapne abhi jo b bola uske atirikt kuch nhi... Vinamra nivedan krti hoon apse... Ki aapne abhi jo kuch b mujhe smjhaya kripya use punah... Gyaat kre... Tatha uspe dhyaan krne ki kripa kre...
All this while... Bua ji was making different expression as she was thinking about it .. Here Urmila was just standing and playing vigorously with her fingers....
After sometime...
BUA JI: Mujhe chama krdo.. putri... Mein na jaane kaise itni si baat Smjh hi nhi paayi... Jo is ntkhat si pyaari si balika ne mujhse samjha di...
Hearing the word Putri from her mouth URMILA was on cloud nine... She shouted...
URMILA: Aarya arrya, jijiiiiii, Bhrata shreee.... dekha suna... Suna aapne... Bua ji ne mujhe mujhe putri kaha...
LAKSHMAN: Maine kaha tha na... Meri Urmiiii... Sabse bhinnn jo h...
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