《GEETIKA》PART 32
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( I had to take a break from my writing due to personal reasons. For those who are connected with me here, know the reasons very well and for those who are not connected, please read my comments sections.
I am back here after long time and hence please ignore major spelling and grammer mistakes or anything to do with editing. Shall check and edit the mistakes one by one. )
Bhuvana rushes to Geet's room
At Geet's room, Geet was wearing a new Kanjeevaram Saree for her first night and she is surrounded by her mom Geet's mom, Rajji and her aunts who were helping her with make up whilst giving her usual advices. While Geet was getting dressed, Radhika (Geet's mom) takes some kajal in her finger tips and tattoos on one side of Geet's cheeks in a sense that no one's jealous filled vision should fall on her....
(My daughter is looking so beautiful that even my vision may turn out to be evil) Radhika gets emotional and wipes out her tears.
Where as one of her aunt advises her..(Geetika...henceforth Shankar is everything for you...Try to understand him and his family and live accordingly...ok?)
Geet is quite and still not into the feeling of accepting the new relationship she has got into. But she is trying her best to adapt herself into it. Then she heard someone scream out her name..
Bhuvana screams and enters the room. All ladies look at Bhuvana
(What happened? Why are you running like this?) Geet's mother questions.
Bhuvana actually wanted to talk to one of Geet's family members in private. But Geet, Radhika and Rajji were surrounded by other ladies .doesn't want to tell disclose anything when these many ladies were surrounding them. Geet's mom breaks the silence... (Ok OK...make Geetika wear these jewellery and flowers...we all have to leave now)
After all ladies left the room leaving Geetika, Bhuvana and Rajji alone...Bhuvana tries to talk to her after chasing Rajji from there.
B:
and Rajji leaves from there leaving Geet and Bhuvana Alone.
(I need to talk to you something important)
Geet is all lost in her own world.. Also she is aware that Bhuvana was not happy with this marriage and mistakes that she is here again to give the same advises against Shankar. (There's nothing left to talk. Now I am Shankar's wife).
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B: (You are married just it. First/Wedding night has not yet happened so you are still safe).
G: (What? What are you even saying? Are you in true senses or lost it?) Geet is getting mad at Bhuvana as she is getting tired of hearing repetitive hatred filled words against Shankar.
(Yes I have gone mad) .Bhuvana sighs.. (How many times I told you. Did you listen to me?)She takes another frustrated sigh... (you still have time...Just forget that your marriage happened).
G: (What is happening to you? Have you gone nuts?)
B: (I don't care what you think about me) ..(For time being just come with me.).
Bhuvana holds Geet's hand and tries to drag her out of that place but its too late. They hear a knock on the door..and one young lady walks in. She is carrying a 5-6 month old baby that's sleeping by resting its head comfortably on her shoulder. This lady was never seen here before. Who is she? What is she doing here at this point of time? Geet and Bhuvana look at each other.
G:
Listening to this, that woman instantly falls on Geet's feet holding on to her baby and starts crying profusely.
G:
Geet lifts her up gently and that lady starts crying uncontrollably... Geet is holding on to this lady's shoulder.
(Actress Sadaf Alias Sada as Julie)
Bhuvana Thinks...
Geet is still holding on to Julie.
Geet slowly takes her hands off Julie with a severe shock that's making her entire body shiver.
Julie gently pats her daughter's back..
Geet and Bhuvana look at each other and then look back at Julie..
Bhuvana just got info about Julie and Shakar. But she was unaware that Shankar has a daughter too. This is another shocker for her.
J:
Geet slowly takes the photo in her hand and looks at it strangely...
Geet and Bhuvana again look at each other.. Geet is still not able to believe that Shankar could scoop so low that he would cheat a woman like this and moreover he had multiple affairs. Julie shows a photo of herself and Shankar together standing near the registrar and wearing garlands. She sighs and rests her baby in the bed and continues her talk. She huffs and continues...
Geet is not getting words to utter...she is shell shocked and almost fell down on a chair near by.. Tears rolls down her eyes. Bhuvana shakes her couple of times to bring her back to normal condition.
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B: (Geet...be strong...What ever Julie is telling is all truth)
Julie kneels down in front of Geet and starts crying...
Geet looks as if she is lost somewhere. What is her Bhagwan upto? Why is she had to go thro all this and more than herself, she pities Julie's condition. She comes out of her senses when she listens to Julie talk to her further. Julie falls on Geet's feet again. Geet lifts her. .
G:
Julie couldn't thank enough...
G:
Julie holds her hand with a firm grip.
Unfortunately, Bhuvana keeps quite on what the entire Shankar's family discussed as she felt happy to see Julie and assumed everything will be fine now.
Geet, Bhuvana and Julie plan out on something...Julie was asked to come near the first night room that was arranged in the second floor. The second floor is deserted and no other room is occupied apart from the first night room and hence no one would pass by this floor.
Bhuvana Got Geet ready. All ladies came to take Geet till the first night room and Bhuvana convinced them that She will accompany Geet till the first night room and everyone agreed to her.
Bhuvana leaves from the second floor after dropping Geet till the door of the First Night room. She knew where Julie was hiding. She goes till there and asks her to join Geet. Once Julie joins Geet, Geet gestures at Julie to get into the room first and Geet will join her very soon.
(Author's note: First night procedure in South is completely different. The groom gets into the room first. The Bride joins him later who will be mainly dropped into the room by the bride's friends/sister or cousins of her age)
Shankar was waiting for Geet in the first night room. He hears someone entering into his room and turns to smile thinking it is Geet but shocked to see Julie and her baby there.
S:
J:
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Shankar hears the voice of the second lady in the room and again turns to find Geet this time...Geet tells this with the toughest of her tone.
S:
G:
Shankar is in a fix now...he has to get Geet under his confidence at any cost. He shouts at Julie... Julie just folds her hand and stares back at him. Then he moves to Geet...
G: Geet shouts at him by holding his silk shirt collar.Julie comes to help Geet to control herself.
G:
Shankar is quite for sometime
Julie: ...Julie spits fire...
At this point of time, Shankar has no other choice left apart from Submitting himself to the twist that he never expected. That is the only way he can plan his next card. Shankar speaks in a tone filled with innocence and as if there is no fault of his.
Geet is crying for what ever happened to her. Whatever said and done she had the respect for the mangalsootra (Secred chain) and sindoor vermellon what she was wearing and trying her level best to adjust to her new life which destiny choose for her... her current state of mind makes her feel so frustrated She gets angry and tries to remove her mangalsootra to throw it on Shankar's face and leave from there.
Shankar stops her...
G:
S: .
Geet faces off from him as if she is not interested in his talks. But then She had to listen to him for once.
S: Shankar tells this in a sugar coated tone...
Geet rolls her eyes and imagines the worst when her paati comes to know about all what happened. First thing first, her Paati would feel very guilty for choosing a wrong groom for her and she would not leave this earthly place with a peace filled soul.
S:
Geet starts crying as she is in such a tough fix now. While Shankar smirks within as he knew Geet will somehow believe in him.
Shankar sighs and answers her with a tone coted with politeness...
G:
S:
Geet has no other choice but to agree to all what Shankar was saying. After all she agreed to this wedding just because her paati is not keeping well. If Paati comes to know about this, she will die with this sorrow and pain. Geet recalls how her Paati was so happy to see the moment Shankar tied Mangalsootra on her neck...She should bear the same happiness thro out the last phase of her life.
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