《O RE PIYA... (OH MY LOVE / BELOVED)》PART 29 B
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I know I have been giving more sorries than updates. 😔. I had to travel to India and just back. I am trying my best to give regular updates. Once again sorry for the delay.
here goes the next part of ORP...please read -like -comment-share. You might find the story to get dragged in next couple of parts but all for good future of the lead pairs. so kindly trust your author.
Will check for the spellings and related errors and correct one by one.
At KM, Once Daadima has cut her call...she looks at Shantima who is giving a confused look to her.
S:
D: Daadi takes a phew holding on to her heartbeats...
S:
D: Daadi nods her head with amusement. Where as Shantima is hell worried for Geet now. She cannot see her going thro again all the pain that she went thro in KM.
S: (IF you don't mind, I have something to say)
Daadi gestures to her to go ahead...
S:(Why are you sending Geet to Farmhouse? That too with Maan baba and I am feeling its not right)
Shanti nad Nakul have worked here for Decades, they are no longer considered to be servants but family members and hence Daadi takes a lead in listening to her point of view.
D:
S:she sighs and continues...She knows that she is now interfering in Khurana Khandan's personal matters..but her heart feels for Geet and she cannot see her in emotional turmoil. And she is not sure if her Maan baba will be able to understand this.
D:
S:She sighs sadly...
Daadi rests her hand on Shanti's shoulder and continues.
Shanti is really not able to believe it. Is it Maan baba who is initiating to move to Farm house?
Daadi makes her understand further...but still what if he looses his temper? Shanti is not at peace untill she is 100% sure that he has changed for good.
Shanti nods for Yes.. Daadi holds on to her shoulder again... She sighs and continues..
Just after having his talks with Daadi, Maan reaches to the point where Geet's parents, Daarji, Kamla and few others were still present. He is really disturbed with the way Daadi was blaming herself for all what has happened to Geet where as he is the one who is solely responsible. He is back to his Terrance when Armaan holds his hand with concerns ? Maan holds him back and nods for Yes.
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Daarji takes a lead in enquiring about Daadi...
Daarji:
M:
Everyone there present get highly alerted learning that Savithriji (Maan's daadi) is upset...especially Daarji. After all she is the samdhan* of this family and upsetting her is like adding black marks on the Handha family.
(*A/N – Samdhan(For Female) / Samdhi (For Male) generally means elderly relatives of your son/daughter's spouse's family.)
M:
Everyone take a sigh of relief as this would have resulted in worst. But the problem still remains.
M:
Daarji:
M:
Mohinder:
Maan gets really furious listening to Mohinder...(So, you care more about these people around Papaji?)
This is the first time Mohinder has got it back from Maan.
They all got into further deep talks which went on for sometime.... Geet's family is somehow not convinced that Geet should move out of here before Nandini's wedding. But Maan has been standing stubborn.
Daarji holds on to Maan's hand and tries to convince him.
Daarji seems to be genuine with his reason...Maan gets really confused. What if Geet decides to stay back here? He cannot force her. considering the condition of their current relationship...and then suddenly he hears a voice which gives in the final decision.
Everyone turn to see Geet who descends from stairs and moves towards the family crowd gathering. She stands folding her hands as that would relax herself. Nandini, Rajji and Ridzy also walk down the stairs slowly. They all stand near by Geet...holding on to her. Daarji immediately move towards her and holds her hand.
Daarji:
Geet has never witnessed Daarji like this...and that too asking for forgiveness from Maan and now to her..but her heart and soul is far polluted with all what happened a while ago and she has lost her mindset to accept it.
Geet gives a sad smile ....Daarji's hold on her hand loosens...
Daarji:
G: She looks into Daarji's eyes and talks straight.... at least she got this courage to tell him the reality of her life that she had here in Handa Haveli. (And how am I suppose to take my own decisions in between all this?)
Both Daarji and Maan are rooted at their respective places listening to her actual condition...she never had any choice of her own to make but still she respected the principles of both the families happily and in return she just got insulted and let down.
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G:
At this point Daarji has realized that its too late and enough damage has already been done to the relationship that he has shared with his granddaughter. All he followed in his life is "Discipline" and he wanted his children and grandchildren to follow it... Especially with Geet as she is the eldest grand daughter of this family. And he admits that she has always followed his principles. But its too too late. He never intended something like this to happen. His Geet would always understand him but yes...he failed in understanding her equally ...AND its all over with this moment. He is left with no words to comment further.
G: (Immediately after my wedding happened, everyone moved one in their own ways without even looking back at me)Her eyes moving around acknowledging each and every face of her so called relatives...her Daarji...ma...papa...and suddenly her gaze fixes on Maan...and that very moment he could feel her burning vision. Its true that everyone left her alone ...including Maan himself. He looked back deep into her hazels and he expected her to pin point at him and shout at him for all what he has behaved with her in this one year...but she didn't...Her eyes blinked at him for a brief second and looked away.
She moved to face the elders as she still has more to tell. (So, where I am and how I am living...No one even bothers or care to know)
Her painful words were told so calmly and coldly and it really stabs Maan. She is not saying a single lie...he behaved as if he never cared.
And people around could only glance back at her silently as she has said the truth...Mohi-Rano look at each other and then they couldn't even face Geet due to shame as they had neglected Geet and didn't even initiate to meet her at least once in this last one year. and the same truth is even uglier for Maan as during those moments of his marriage he held her hand promising her for a life long support... and immediately after all the marriage related formalities, he left her then and there and never looked back at her in this last one year. Armaan has been silently observing the scene..he feels miserable seeing Geet's condition. Now he seriously votes for Geet to be moved out of this place. That will only help her condition.
Obviously Geet controls her tears as her bitter memories of her marriage flashes her. But she conceals all her emotions to herself as no one from this crowd deserves to know about it...let it be her daarji, her parents or even her so-called husband.
Rano: Geet's mom wanted to spend some last moments with her before she leaves..but Geet stops her..
G: She is saying it very coldly without expressing her anger or hurt. but deep within, she is feeling so very low to put off with all her relations...especially her mother...Today, she got an opportunity to lift the long time burden in her heart.
Geet could tell how she felt all these years. Who knows if she would get an opportunity like this again in her life? She doubts. Again she could speak up to them because they all are related to her...but she doesn't say anything to Maan...infact it doesn't even cross her mind that she needs to talk to him as she has mentally accepted the voidness of this so called relationship that has bound them. She just gives Maan a cold glance and makes her move towards her room.
Geet's mom is heartbroken listening to her daughter's words...Mohi consoles her...Rano wipes her tears argues back ...
Maan just looks at her while she was slowly retrieving herself and moving away to their room. He is glad that she at least spoke with her Daarji and her parents...She still didn't go against them or argue with them but she has opened up herself to them which is more than enough to make them realize how their dominance as elders has affected her life....Also it worries him if she has truly accepted to move to farm house? why did she consider it as a decision from the elders of his family? Is she happy with it?
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