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- In Serial42 Chapters
The Tempestatem
When Gale Storm is murdered, death brings with it an unexpected ticket to the fantastical world of Mioverold - a place rife with dangerous creatures and political conflict. While the adversaries may be driven by common goals, they have vastly different approaches. Faced with these uniquely powerful combatants, and no chance to return to life as he knows it, Gale must decide what to do next. Choosing a side to spend his afterlife with isn't going to be easy, since war is just as much about perspectives as it is about the absolutes of right or wrong.
8 259 - In Serial31 Chapters
D Days
Dragons were the apex predators of the magical world, feared for their strength and intelligence. They stood at the pinnacle of creation, until mankind fueled by fear and envy banded together and struck them down as the greatest threat to the continued existence of their kingdoms. Peace reigned for many years across the continent, until an accident in the Magocracy of Ken turned one of the most powerful mage lords into a power mad lich. Raising an undead army and creating a cult that worshipped him like a god, he cut a bloody swath across the continent in a bid to create his own domain. A great alliance consisting of the Kingdom of Light, the Magocracy of Ken, the Forest Kingdom of the Elves, the Mountain Kingdom of the Dwarves, and the Wild Tribes of the West rose up and the high lich was defeated, his armies destroyed, and his cult scattered. Still recovering, the world is a constant state of petty power struggles and back biting between nations. Border disputes are common and the constant fighting has taken a toll on the populations of all the nations. Of course, none of this has much bearing on the everyday life of a an ordinary young orphan in the care of a Temple run home. Or does it? *Current Word Count as of 8/4/18: 59,415 I am shooting for at least one update a week. Also, if you see any mistakes let me know and I will fix them. Cover by!*
8 160 - In Serial19 Chapters
Soul of ether/ towards eternal horizons
The boat will take you to the promised island far away, where you will find what you are looking for. It is the land of the wizards, fairies, and the final resting place of the king of knights. The path will be treacherous, and many are not allowed to pass. Be vary of the highest order kept by an iron fist, the ruler sparkling in gemstones, and their dukes with their fragments of power. The fog-sealed island hides its dark history under shining armor with padges of honor and blood. Then there was a boy, and his two loyal friends, who bravely took to find it and rediscover the soul's domain.
8 92 - In Serial20 Chapters
The healer Deku
This is an AU where Deku does receive a Quirk that heals everyone expect himself. This is a fan-fiction, I do not own My Hero Acadamia.
8 111 - In Serial50 Chapters
ꜰʀᴀʏᴇᴅ |ᴀ.ʟ.| ꜱʜᴀᴅᴏᴡʜᴜɴᴛᴇʀꜱ ꜰᴀɴꜰɪᴄᴛɪᴏɴ {ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴀᴍɪʟʟᴇ ꜰᴀɪʀᴄʜɪʟᴅ ᴛʀɪʟᴏɢʏ #1}
Camille Fray has a normal life.A young mother, a young sister and a father who died when she was child. Graduated from high school and 2 years into a psych degree. A normal, boring life.A mundane life.Or so she thought.On the night of her sister's 18th birthday, everything changes. Skeleton's come out of the closet, secrets are revealed and both her and her sister, Clary, are thrust into a world where "all the legends are true."When Camille meets Alec, even more changes. His intelligence and brusque manner matching her own draws her to him but will he feel the same way?Or will continuous obstacles keep two people, who should be together, apart forever?Find out in Frayed.{BOOK 1 of the Camille Fairchild Trilogy}
8 124 - In Serial15 Chapters
Artificial War
Fifteen year old Kira struggles with his disability. But when other faction threatens to destroy their way of life. Will he step-up to change the tides of war or succumb to his unjust fate?
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