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No Second Chances: The Beginning Of The End
Greed is a powerful feeling that has changed the world over thousands of years. Science, religion, and magic have built a new era and there are some who want to end it all, for the sake of a dying wor...
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Jack
This is a story about a nineteen-year-old college freshman whose life is flipped completely upside-down when he meets a strange, yet very attractive young girl. Well... that’s a little bit misleading. It’s more along the lines of a mortally wounded goddess falling from the heavens, and smashing the hood of his car, but you get the general idea. In a modern society where monsters hide among humans and creatures of myth stalk an unusually gifted boy as he rapidly ascends in power, aided by the most destructive and least predictable force in this, or any universe. Blessed with the power of a deceased goddess, follow Jack’s rise to becoming the newest god of love.
8 78 - In Serial34 Chapters
Bonespore
Harux Y'saanith is not your average elf. He is wild, untamed, and likes a good old cut of meat over a plate of vegetables. But what he does have in common is his love of fighting and magic. So when he gets the perfect opportunity to join an academy full of strong fighters, he couldn't resist. Journeying with an eccentric tech billionaire, a boy who's way too theatrical for his own good, a proud knightess and many others, Harux wonders if he'd finally found strong opponents, or even people he can call his friends. Bonespore is a shonen-inspired story set in an academy where students train and fight. There is also a blend of magic and SciFi as it is set in a post-modern world of sorts. If you like something that is a blend of both magical slice of life, and tense moments with battle, horror and other events, then it'll be to your liking. (This will be crossposted onto Scribblehub)
8 171 - In Serial6 Chapters
Rune
A forsaken kingdom, an empty throne, a dwindling population and the blame is one young girl? Can she overcome the darkness in her heart and the stigma of her people and become something great? This is my first attempt at a series so if anyone has any critiques on my work, grammatical or plot wise feel free to leave them in the comments; also, don't be afraid to be brutally honest in the reviews. Gonna leave it at (14+) for now. PS- The description is a work in progress.
8 176 - In Serial15 Chapters
Artificial War
Fifteen year old Kira struggles with his disability. But when other faction threatens to destroy their way of life. Will he step-up to change the tides of war or succumb to his unjust fate?
8 193 - In Serial7 Chapters
(Uncontinued) The Neverbeast
This is a remake story based on @balthazar5150 and I have permission that I can continue it or do it as I wish and if you wanna find out what happened next just read the story of the first neverbeast made by him down below on the playlists and hope you will enjoy this story
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