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it has been a year since i opened this shop and served everyone the best possible critique i could offer. it has been a journey, i learned a lot from this as much as my clients have learned. and now it has come to an end:)
yes, you've read it right. i am ending the journey here. it's about time to close the shop. i won't be accepting any clients anymore. but will i open another critique shop? well, i'm not quite sure. the thought hasn't crossed my mind yet. oh, and i think i've waited enough for the two pending clients. i can't possibly wait forever. so... yeah.
to all of my clients, i hope you learned something from my critiques. goodluck on your journey as a writer. i wish you all the best!
thank you once again for trusting this shop:)
forever thankful,
ethereal_solare
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