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1. To be a fairly new story. We don't want to read an entire novel (unless Full Story Critique is ordered)
2. LGBTQ stories accepted
3. Explicit scenes accepted
4. No "locked"/fan only stories
5. If we have too many clients at the moment there is a waiting list. We will inform you if this is the case but please be patient.
6. NO CANCER STORIES!! PERIOD. If a supporting character has it or it is mentioned in passing that is fine but NO full blown cancer stories
7. Don't get mad at harsh Critiques
8. Do NOT ask us to fan you! We won't
9. Do NOT spam our pages! They will be deleted and you will be blocked and/or reported
10. To request a critique you must be the author or beta/publisher with authors permission
11. Plagiarized stories WILL be reported
12. English ONLY, at the moment (Spanish possibly in the future)
13. FanFics- we only do fandoms we are familiar with, so please check first
14. Anything sent over Email must include the site/sites it will be published on
15. If you know what critic/beta you want, please request them
16. Angelz does NOT do beastiality (human/animal). Were, Neko, Anthro, animal/animal is fine though
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Sexy Space Babes
Jason had thought about punching a Shil’vati. Who hadn’t? Not only had the aliens conquered Earth with almost trivial ease, the seven-foot purple amazons also had the audacity to start running the planet better than Humanity ever had. He'd never do it though. He was a reasonable guy, just trying to get by under his new feminine overlords.Wasn't he? (Edit: Book one of this series has now been taken off KU and can be returned to RR. Because of this, all content is being shifted over to Between Worlds.)
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Maker of Fire
On a world where magic kept civilization firmly in the bronze age, the Gods dropped an accountant and a mining engineer to start a political and industrial revolution. They wanted enlightened governance and a fast track to the iron age. They got indoor plumbing, paper airplanes, a cranky queen, and one very grumpy prophet. Dramatis Personae Aylem was a bookkeeping student when she died. The Gods reincarnated her as the greatest mage ever known, born into the ruling class of gigantic, magic-wielding humans. The Gods expect her to conquer the world and introduce double-entry accounting. Though Queen and numerical reformer, world conquest is stalled because everyone is scared of her and she doesn't like war. Emily was a retired engineer when she died. The Gods reincarnated her as one of the enslaved class of small, magicless humans. The Gods expect her to drag the world out of the bronze age. Though she's already recreated matches and wrought iron, introducing technology isn't going well because she was born a slave (oops) and having escaped, wants nothing to do with so-called "civilization." Asgotl was a whale when he died. The Gods reincarnated him as a griffin and expect him to have the same role he played in his previous life: to keep a reluctant prophet from walking off the job. If only they had remembered to tell him about it. Revised update schedule will be once a week on Saturdays, noonish Mountain Time (in North America)
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Heartthrob
Second-life can be Hell. EJ, a young and dead secretary, struggles to find her place amidst the turmoil of an unforgiving dystopia. Romance, intrigue, strife, and the violence of modern life all take their toll on the ghoulish debutante as she tries her best to stay sane and safe. Tensions are high and climbing by the second within her home city of Vitus, and all she can do is try to stay afloat. Between finding peace with her own unlife and the attentions of the city's denizens, can she avoid being drowned in the rising tide? A dark romantic thriller for mature audiences. Enjoy responsibly. Updates come out on Fridays, at 8:00 PM CST, for that authentic nighttime feeling.
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Virtual reality: Sorp
Sorp is something bordering on what it is to be human. Perhaps he is more human. He has lived in squalor, his only family are the friends he grew up with. This is their journey through the new substitution for reality. In this virtual reality, they are given a purpose they never thought to seek out for themselves. To be more than hooligans. To be more than the bottom of the barrel. They do this in their own way. Unhindered by usual moral discrepancies. Ready to fight, kill and maim on a whim. Warning: This story does contain graphic descriptions of a sexual nature, violent fights, blood shed, gore and at times, crude language. There are also acts that are considered immoral or evil committed by main characters, so this story may not be for the faint of heart.
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Намайг зүгээр л BOSS гэж дуудахад болно2020.03.10/2020.07.08.
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A Light Not Extinguished [40K Dark Age What-if]
We all know the story. The Men of Iron rebel, humanity degrades into barbarism during the Age of Strife, Slaanesh is born through the depravity of the Aeldari Empire, the Imperium rises and falls and the galaxy burns in strife and bloodshed.But what if that which was ordained never came to pass? What if the Cybernetic Rebellion never happened? Can humanity defy the dark fate written in the stars with blood and sin? I DO NOT OWN WARHAMMER 40K, THIS IS AN UNOFFICIAL 40K FANWORK
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