《Critique And Editing Info》Critique: Chasing Highs
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Chasing Highs
QueenofRohan
Adventure, belonging, romance
LOVE IT! It's mysterious.
I'm a little lost. It's good though. It makes me want to read on to find out what is going to happen to Dot.
Omg. Your descriptions are amazing!!! I could feel how cold it was. I could see the town. I could see him. There is little grammar errors, but they don't bother me. This is because your descriptions take my breathe away. MY HEART!!
I know you only asked for 1, but I had to read on!! So 2 and 3 is on the house.
5 💙💙💙💙
It's sooo GOOD!!! Everyone needs to read this!!
Rate from 1-5
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1: Poor/Needs MAJOR editing
2: Almost there/ needs fixing/need practice
3: Good/Needs a little editing
4: Good/Needs a little editing/may recommend/may read on
5: EXCELLENT/will recommend to followers, friends/may read on
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