《Captain Critiques: A Grumpy Pirate Review Book》Payment & Form
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Payment is given ONLY once I finish the critique. I will message you once the critique is done.
Depending on my enjoyment of the critique I will ask for one of the following:
*1 - 5 comments on the first three Night Rider chapters - NO copy/paste critiques - I WILL know
*1 - 5 comments on the first three Nightspun chapters - ONC 2020 project
*1 - 5 comments on the first three The Soul Thief chapters - ONC 2021 project
* A follow
*A dedication
I will tell you want payment to give. It will NOT be more than one choice mentioned so it is quicker and easier.
If I don't get confirmation of payment within TWO weeks after I inform you about your critique I will delete all my messages from your story and add you to my Mutiny Reading List AND my Hells List alongside a possible Mute.
There are exceptions but I NEED confirmation i.e. a message via PM that the Payment will be completed. If you are on hiatus for longer than a month then the same thing applies.
I don't want to waste my time critiquing for someone who is no longer there.
Entry Form
Apply in the COMMENT SECTION. No inline comments, please. That's my job.
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- In Serial13 Chapters
Frozen Core
Ice. Synopsis for lonliness, strife and death. Surving the winter was always hard in the past, even for those with magic surronding them. But does it have to be? Could a dungeon be born out of someone's love for the frosty season? A place with snow for sledding, stars to dance under the aurora, jiggle bells to chime, cozy cabins in frozen forests, and many more heart chilling events wait for those looking to beat the heat. Joy to the world that embraces the cold!
8 77 - In Serial15 Chapters
Monster Story
There once was a doll... This doll had arms, legs, eyes, a mouth, ears, and a nose. This doll could do a lot with so little, why would anyone want to throw it away?
8 166 - In Serial42 Chapters
Done For [Billy Hargrove]
"Two damaged people trying to heal each other is love." He mumbled.In which a boy that came from an abusive home fell in love with a girl who felt like home.#1 in Billy Hargrove (4/10/20)#1 in Netflix (6/1/20)#1 in Stranger Things (6/6/20)#1 in FanFiction (6/19/22)Started: July 26, 2019Completed: August 20, 2020Word Count: 43,126
8 172 - In Serial18 Chapters
Misteri Tuala Wanita
Masalah yang sering dialami oleh wanita dalam menguruskan sebuah benda yang dipanggil 'pad' atau bahasa sopannya iaitu 'tuala wanita'. Agak sedikit kotor bila terbayang jenis cecair pekat berwarna merah yang harus dibasuh dan dilumatkan sampai bersih. Tapi, itulah wajib dilakukan untuk kaum hawa yang mengalaminya pada setiap bulan. Jika dibiarkan, maka benda yang lain akan berlaku. Betul ke?Sesuatu di luar jangkaan atau itu dianggap perkara biasa?Jadikan ia satu pengajaran, bukannya satu permainan.
8 173 - In Serial26 Chapters
Voidsong (A NaNoWriMo 2018 winner)
Synopsys: The Empire thought humanity died, and forgot all about it. The Empire is mistaken. A Note From the Author: This story was written as a National Novel Writing Month 2018 entrant. As such, its entire 50,000+ word length was written between November 1, 2018 and November 31, 2018. Overall, I would consider this no more than a polished draft. In that vein, the chapters have no names, only numbers. Special thanks to Chronus on youtube for answering my questions on NATO radio procedures! My Apologies to the Finnish Language, which I have abused in (probably) unforgivable ways to create Twisted Empire names. If anyone is interested, break the names up by commas and toss them into your favorite translation program (I used Google Translate, and tried to avoid umlauts and other accents) for some semi bilingual boni. If I got something wrong (and I know I did… somewhere…) let me know over on reddit and I will see what I can do to fix the mistake. Lyrics, where included, are cited in footnotes.
8 153 - In Serial70 Chapters
Marinette One-Shots
Hya! This is just a bunch of random Marinette one-shots!! I will be taking requests, so if you have any, be sure to tell me!!-dont bully others -this is not strictly MLB ships, (feel free to skip chapters if you'd like, but don't tag on the ones you don't like)-request what you wanna read (I'll try and do it if I can)-enjoy!
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