《Captain Critiques: A Grumpy Pirate Review Book》The Waiting Game
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It is a guide to the status of your critique and will only be updated once a comment sample has been sent by me via PM and has been accepted by the author. If it hasn't been updated it means a comment sample has not been sent and I'm prioritising survival right now aka busy/sick.
Do not querey the status of your critique if it is written here. I know of it's existence and the decisions are final. If you believe there is a typo then feel free to message me privately but do not inline comment. That is my job.
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Style: Book Review
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Castlebound
A young scullery maid bound to a slumbering castle must embrace her innate powers to wake the castle and save the townsfolk from a fiery dragon. When Sleeping Beauty’s spell sweeps through the castle, putting everyone to else to sleep, Hailey is the last girl standing. While she watches everyone she cares about fall to the ground asleep, mages outside the castle battle to keep the spell from growing to cover the entire kingdom, giving their lives and their magic to keep everyone else safe. The legacy of the mages must be passed on and Hailey finds herself stepping in to shoes that she doesn’t think she can fill. Note this is a Work in Progress and hasn't been through any editing.
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Smells Like Winter
"Don't touch me, your hands are cold."Maddy Wesley was your typical 16-year-old high school student, a wallflower with excellent grades, a good taste for vanilla ice cream and a normal, somewhat dull life.Until a virus broke out. A virus that brought winter back in the heart of London.And there she is now, stuck in detention for the first time in her entire life because she was late to school on the very day the students were supposed to get vaccinated.Yes, vaccinated. But there's something menacing about the way the school nurse shoves the pointy syringe in each student's skin, something that makes Maddy's hair stand on edge. Something that tells her to run."Run."
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Lost and Found
My favorite story that I have written ever. It is all original. Thanks for reading!
8 163 - In Serial182 Chapters
Riddick/ Against the Heavens
SUMMARY: In a world where magic and magical beasts are omnipresent, the nature's law of strong ruling over the weak is followed everywhere. Controlled by Immortals who transcended the limits of mortality this world has mages and warriors as it's elites, all with the same goal of becoming an immortal. In the vast universe this world is an unremarkable one with no treasures but countless dangers where mortals are seen as nothing but cannon fodder for the strong. Riddick was born in this world as a son of a mere mortal. Join him in his journey as he paves a path to the epitome of immortality. He starts his journey with a small dream but will soon realise his destiny as the fate shows its cruelty.IMP NOTE : My work has no relation to Vin Diesel's Riddick movie. This is not a Riddick fan fiction but some thing which will come under Xianxia genre. Edit #1 - Please understand that this is my first work and I have improved a lot till the current chapter. I have yet to rewrite the beginning chapters and I am aware that they aren't really good. Still I hope you can read past the book 1 so you can enjoy the book just like many others who wait for it.Edit 2 # - This is an initial draft and sooner or later, I will definitely rewrite it all into an authentic book.Thank you, Gsd reddy.
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An overly OP MC in another world.
My name is Carlos Drake and I've been summoned to another world...along with my three friends Jake, Roland and Lucas, we are aiming to become the greatest heroes in the world! (Yo! red here....just gonna say...I got bored and wanted to try something different so I did this little book thing to make small chaps on every once in a while...please do not expect much from this.)
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Missing Files {Tommyinnit X Fem!Reader}
As a fan of the Dream SMP, you usually keep up to date with all of your favourite content creators. So, when you saw that the very popular Minecraft Youtuber Dream had announced a little competition over on Twitter, you were hyped! The competition was simple: whoever was the first to kill Dream in a pvp match gets temporary access into the Dream SMP! After winning and coming to some certain terms with the green blob man, you start your lore and end up catching the eyes-- and interest. Of the one and only; Tommyinnit.Ẁ̷̧̥̲̙̺͍̉́̍̒̕ͅh̸̫̍̇y̶̢̤̪͉̝̮͉̪̭̹͌ ̶͎̯̔̃̄͐́̑̐͛͝d̵̨̡̛̼͕̼͙̜͈̎̔̂̈́̉͘̚ï̵̧̙̺͍̞͕̭̙͉̤̔̆͊̏̔̿̾͆d̸̛͈̜̹͚͍̉͗̉́͋́̍̑͝ ̸͚͌į̴̩̳̜̭̼̦̳̎̃̔t̸̡͙̫̙́̆͋͌̈̋̊̆ ̵̘̯̬̪̯͖͎̫̌̓͑͛̚h̸̡͕̱̦̦̹̣̱̐̈́͒́̀͋͝a̷̼͔̭͌v̵̞̼͍̫̂͋̑̾͂̓̾̕e̷̪̎̈́̈́͆͝ ̶̧̬̱͙̝̻͊̐̀̐͛̽͘͘ẗ̴̡̝͓͉̪̱̯̺́̏͑̓̇́̑̌͝͝ͅớ̶̬̠̭̤͍̿̌̋͗͘͝ ̶̧̨̦̜͍̫̼̣̣̽̾̋̂ẹ̶̞̌̌͑̊͊̈́̀͐̕ń̶̨̢̢̞͖͍̤̭̭͉ḍ̷̱̘͖͓̣͙͎̓ ̶̡̗̥̱̻̬͂̏̉l̶̦͑͋̕į̷͈̞̣̹̜̗͍̍͂̾̍͒̔͗͒͌͜k̶̢͉̼̱̰͕̮͛͌̚ͅę̸̳͙̱̭͙̃͜͝ ̶̭̹̳̗̻͂͑͌͆͒̿͒̉̋͋ͅt̶̢̼̝̯̄̈́͑̉͑̚ḩ̶̮͔̣̹̩̬̞̲̀̓̌̇̓̑̚ị̷̤͓̞̼͙͔̩̣̱͗s̶̨̧̛̩̹͖̞͕̹̬̻̉͑?̸̼͙́̓̈́͝!! A Tommyinnit X Female Reader Fanfiction !!!!Disclaimer!!Some canon lore might be edited, so-- don't question it. I don't know much about what's going on in the SMP lately, but I did try to do my research. :pAuthor's Notes: * Reader is FEMALE* Lore story is during Tommy's exile* Angst? (blood warning)* No smut (big man may almost be legal, but it's still a nono in this minecraft christian household.)
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