《Captain Critiques: A Grumpy Pirate Review Book》The Waiting Game
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Warlord 6
Five hundred years after ninety percent of the western continent was swallowed by the five human warlords who lead the demon swarm upon earth, a girl is orphaned at a young age, left alone on a small peasant city on the remaining coastal land of the western continent. She fought for every inch of her life everyday and everynight. Then one day, I army showed up to the city, and burnt many buildings to the ground. The girl was caught in the middle of this, was caught by one grand soldier, guarded by many others, this soldier was the king of the men. She tried running from him, but could not escape the guards. Little did she know where this would lead.
8 131 - In Serial73 Chapters
The Goddess of Death's Champion
Eliot and Cel start off the same as any other peasant and climb their way to the heavens. At least, that's what a cheesy hook might say, however, Eliot and Cel have always had the attention of the Gods, Eliot longer than Cel but by no God more important. Even if it is their destiny to achieve legend status, they started out some where, and with only the semblance of a head start, not to mention that it makes for an interesting story. (If you decided to read because of a specific tag, some of them only show up later on in the story. I should also mention that romance is a significant focus but there is no romance tag besides the one in genre)
8 183 - In Serial12 Chapters
Necromage
Dan is your average worker who managed to get his hands on the a VR helmet for the newest game, Eternium. He finds himself in way over his head as everything is deadly down to the smallest Rabbit. Join Dan in his adventures through this fantasy world! This is an offshoot to my other series, Bunnymancer. This story will focus on what if Dan went down a different path and became a Necromancer instead of a Bunnymancer. The story will be a little darker and the first six chapters will be the same. Past that though we will get into a new plotline, though if you've already read through bunnymancer I would suggest starting at chapter 7 when reading through this. This is a book within the Completionist Chronicles Universe. I was given permission to make this as long as I did not publish it as an official Mountain Dale Press work or sell it for money.
8 125 - In Serial31 Chapters
Reverend Insanity(But it was me DIO!)
“I Dio, perhaps I failed to ascend to Heaven.Yet, even now, I still believe that I’ll be the victor who stands above all!Be on this or another world, I shall claim absolute victory, or I’ll be crushed by the chaos outside this world and vanish into nothingness.Heh, either way, I’m already bound to die, so why I don’t give it a try?” With this thought on mind, Dio ripped the space as he was on his last breath, and he was transported to a different world. Gu's, what is that?Are they like they Stands of my world?----------------------------------------- This is a fanfic of both Reverend Insanity made by Gu Zhen Ren and Jojo's Bizarre adventure made by Hirohiko Araki. This fanfic will take place around the same time Fang Yuan used Spring Autumn Cicada for the first time, but it will includea 'twist', by Dio's arrival. Anyway, even though this fanfic takes place at the start of the first chapter of Reverend Insanity and the end of the third part of Jojo's Bizarre adventure, yet you shouldn't read this unless: You completed the novel of Reverend Insanity and that you have already read the end of the 6 part of Jojo's Bizarre Adventure. If you have read those two stories, or if you don't mind being spoiled, then go on.
8 798 - In Serial74 Chapters
Rebirth: My Sassy 'Crown Princess'
"You mean that Prince Yu wants to marry me?" "Exactly, young master, Prince Yu wants to marry you!" "Hell no! Is he out of his mind? Even if woman is a rare species nowadays, as the prince, he could have a chance to marry one. Is it because he got excluded, or maybe he has sexual impotence, so he could only marry a man?" "No, Prince Yu is charming, majestic, endowed with civil and martial virtues, and also in perfect health." "Then why would he marry me?" "Maybe because of your reputation out there." "Reputation? Am I quite famous?" "Of course. Young master, you're far-famed." "Really? What did they say about me?" "They said you are ugly, good-for-nothing, short-lived, a freak, with no morals, and shameless…" Welcome to read the whole Rebirth: My Sassy 'Crown Princess' on Flying Lines.
8 180 - In Serial18 Chapters
legacy of the blade
Left in despair and loneliness by his parents until he is given a new family a new chance at life which he spends cursing his old parents for leaving him. Until he finds the reason he was left and that reason made him give on himself. Until he found a reason to live and that reason is brave adventure. Welcome to brave adventure a game where skill is emphasized over stats and death is as cruel and painful as the real world.(please note i'm not the best at English so you can correct me in the comments if it bothers you or ignore it
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