《Louis' Depressed Girl》Chapter Fifteen: Zap Zone
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Mia's P.O.V
I hurry up and get ready, waiting for Louis to arrive.
Once I was finished I waited patiently for Louis.
"Miaaaaaa," A voice sung from behind my apartment door, specifically a beautiful, blue eyed boy with brown, floppy hair, and a funny personality.
I quickly ran up to the door and jerked it open, "Hey Lou!!!" I smile, reaching up to his lips and pecking them lightly.
"Ready to go?" He asked, looking down at my outfit. I decided on a fancy, blue shirt and a pair of with shorts. I pinned my hair into a side braid, and applied a little bit of makeup, enough to satisfy me.
"Yep," I smile, locking up the door from behind me and reaching for Louis' hand as we were walking down the hall.
When we got to Louis' car, he went over to my door, like a gentleman, and opened it for me, making me blush.
When Louis came in I began talking, "So where are we going?" I asked curiously, looking over at Louis who was chuckling to himself.
"Love, its a secret," I groan at his response.
"You're sounding like one of those cliche guys in those books," I mumble frustrated.
"What kind of boyfriend would I be if I never had surprises for my wonderful girlfriend?" He smile, reaching for my hand.
"Well... Secrets, secrets, are no fun, unless you share with everyone!" I pout, sounding like a 5 year old kid.
"Cute," Louis chuckles, rolling his eyes at me playfully.
I finally gave up and sat there miserably. Glancing out the window towards the scenery.
The sun was high up in the air, a slight breeze shaking passing trees. I look over and see a young girl, she was jumping around by a water fountain, begging her mom for a penny.
I wish I could shake her and have her come back to reality; Sometimes, wishes don't come true.
"We're here," Louis finally says. I look up from the window and see a huge building in front of me.
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"Zap Zone?" I say, a little confused. I think Louis could tell that I was unsure about the place.
"It has laser tag, bumper cars, go karts, and an arcade!" He says cheerfully.
I laugh and open my door, Louis doing the same.
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"So the rules are simple. You aim your gun at the enemy and shoot with the trigger. You have a total of 3 shields that will protect you for a limited amount of time. When you are hit your vest will be inactive for 5 seconds. And remember don't get to violent because we don't want injuries." The employee explains to Louis and I, as well as a few younger kids. "The doors will open in 10 seconds, so blue team you will enter at this door, and red team will enter at this side.
I walk over to the left entrance where the red go, as Louis walks over to the right entrance where the blue go.
We hear the announcer count from ten.
"3.....2......1." The gates slowly open, and thats when I run out.
My team and I separate and run to different places. I notice myself cramping up when I reach half way through. I rest for a moment.
"Cchhhhhhuuu." I look down at my vest. Its been hit.
I look around, curious on who did it. I instantly hear a familiar laugh from behind a wall.
"Louis!" I grunt, quietly running to his hiding spot.
"Hi Louis," I wink. Louis looks up quickly a hits a button.
"Shield activated," His shield rang, making me angry.
"Sorry babe," he laughs running off, me following.
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"I only hit you once!" I whine, looking at my terrible score.
"And I got you 15 times," He winks, wrapping his arm around my waist.
"Fine." I mutter, "Lets see how good you are at Go Karts," I smirk.
"You haven't been on youtube?" He laughs.
I looked at him confused.
"I'm like the champ of Go Karting!" He shouts, letting everyone around to look at him.
"Paleaseee." I laugh, pushing him back a tad with my hand.
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He chuckles and leads me to the go karts.
"I want the pink one!" I smile, pointing towards it.
"Of course you would," Louis laughs, while rolling his eyes.
I jump into my go kart and strap myself in tightly, looking over a Louis who was in a blue kart.
We look up at the traffic light in front of us, waiting for it to turn green.
Within seconds it hits green and we speed off. Louis in the lead.
I swerve left and right around the track, passing Louis during the second lap, a playful smirk wiring on to my face.
"Hurry up," Louis I yell. Making his engine roar up.
It was an intense 5 laps, but I ended up winning at the last second.
I stood up for a victory dance, "WHOO WHOO" I cheer. I wave my hands back and forth in the air. My hips shaking left and right.
Louis wraps his arms around my waist, catching me off guard, "Good job babe," He mumbles in my ear softly.
"Thanks," I smirk, kissing his lips slowly, pulling away to talk again, "But we're tied,"
"Game of skee-ball?" He winks, grabbing my hand and walking me over to a pair of large skee-ball machines.
"Highest score wins," He says, wiggling his eyebrows up a down.
"Hm. Good luck," I laugh.
We each place in our quarters and down drops the plastic, white, skee-balls.
We both pick one up, my eyebrows furrowed in determination.
I throw first, getting 30 points.
Louis goes and gets 20.
It continues like this until it was up to the last two balls. If I score 40 points, I win. If Louis gets at least 30, he wins.
I hold my breath and throw the ball carefully, hitting 50.
Louis groans, he only manages to get 20.
"OH YEAH!" I smile, dancing around like a fool. "I woooonnn!" I brag, dancing carelessly.
"You're no fun." He mumbles giving me a frown.
"Ohh you poor baby," I cry, standing on my tiptoes and kissing his lips softly.
"Lets go home, yeah?" Louis says, grabbing my small hand into his.
"Yeah," I smile, placing my sunglasses over my bright, blue eyes.
I walk over to his car and let myself in.
"Oh we got to stop at Harry's first, I needed to grab my ps3, I left it in his room," Louis says, keeping his eyes on the road carefully.
"Yeah sure." I smile, looking back out the window until we arrive to the hotel.
When we stepped out of Louis car, the whole area erupted into screams.
Bodyguards lined up behind us, blocking multiple fans.
"Mia!" A few girls call out, but most were focused on Louis, which is understandable.
We push our way past the large crowd and make our way to Harry's room.
Louis unlocks the door and opens it up.
We both stand in shock as Harry was making out with a young girl.
"Oh sorry," Harry mumbles.
Both Harry and the girl stand up.
"Oh, hi. I'm Mia." I greet, holding out my hand.
"Hi I'm-"
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