《Escape From Undertale》Chapter 4: The Elements
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As Jack was beginning to feel comfortable, he slowly stood up. "umm, Jack what are you doing?" Toriel said looking up at him with a confused face, "just...exploring" Jack says as he grunts in slight pain from his ankle. He then slowly limps to the right side of the house and is met with three wooden doors, one on the far left which appeared to have a note attached to it, and two others with nothing but bear wood. Jack then reached for the first bare wood door until his arm was abruptly grabbed by a small hand, it was Frisk. "Have you ever heard of asking permission silly!" She said with a cute smile, which Jack returned with a smirk. "may I please go in your room...Frisk" Jack said half sarcastically. "yes you may" Frisk said as she opened the door for him. Inside was a small pinkish red room with a single bed, wardrobe and a desk. Jack limped around the room looking at the pictures and the few furniture that accompany it. "SO....what do you think" Frisk asked with her hands behind her back looking up at the modern warrior, "I love it...your Mom's a great designer." Jack answered kneeling to the preteen's level with a warm, wise smile. Toriel then walks in the room watching the humans talk, "and how are you two getting along?" She says with a motherly smile. "we're doing just fine Mom. Mister J..Jim..." Frisk's answer was abrupt as The soldier jumped in the conversation "Jack...my names Jack, kid." After this Frisk smiled and hugged her mother, "do you want to finish your pie my child?" at the sound of Toriel saying pie, Frisk immediately agreed. She then ran to the wooden table and started chowing down one of the pieces of pie. Toriel starts to walk to the table as Jack's eyes catch a portrait on the single desk in Frisk's room. It was a family portrait of Toriel and Frisk standing in a flower meadow with a spec of sunlight obscured by a caves ceiling. for a second, Jack smiled...but then he had a sad look on his face. As if he remembered something, something.... Suddenly Jack was thrown out of his trance when there was a loud coming from the door that lead to the ruins!
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Jack ran out to see three "things" standing in the middle of the house. Each one of the figures were engulfed in some form of material. One was entirely on fire with a strange iron mask that resembled a demon from Chinese mythology with horns that poked out of each corner of the mask and distorted yet symmetrical teeth that protruded from the sides of the mouth which appeared to drool flames. The second figure was engulfed in ice and rock which appeared to look like a knight in armor from the middle ages with the chest plate being made out of ice and the helmet which was made out of a dark gray rock that was slightly glowing from the ice crystals protruding from the cracks within the sides of the helmet. The third and final figure was tangled in leaves and branches which formed a strange armor that was distorted and crooked. In the living room were the only two residents of this house. Frisk was behind her mother, Toriel stood stoically in front of the child with fireballs growing from her palms. "Who are you!?" she says, the three do not respond. The three figures start to slowly walk towards Toriel, "STAY BACK!" Toriel then shot one fireball at the "THINGS" that stood in front of her. It then went into the fire engulfed figure, As it went in, fire spewed all over like an explosion knocking Jack back onto the ground as the heat went through him not harming him. After the furious explosion had disappeared only smoke remained. At this moment Toriel, Jack, and Frisk waited intently. Waiting to see the smoldering remains of these creatures. The smoke then cleared to reveal a large mass of rock and ice, tangled in leaves and stems with steam rolling off it. It then began to crack, then it crumbled to reveal the humanoids unscaved and pissed. Suddenly the fire figure disappeared in flames then reappeared behind a confused Toriel. It then turned its hand into cold metal and grabbed Toriel by the neck, lifting her up in the air. She then looks at Frisk, "r..run my child!" Toriel then tries to hit the figures face to no avail as it just drools more flames. Frisk then tries to run to Jack but an ice wall blocks her path in front of her and The injured Lieutenant!
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Jack runs to it and tries to break it, "son of a bitch!" Jack tries to think of an idea, "damn it...ok..ok what would Hawk do, DAMN IT! I wish I had a drink...drink..DRINK!" Jack then remembered about his flask. He brought it out, luckily the flask was half full of Jack's favorite drink, WHISKEY. The soldier proceeded to throw the whiskey all over the ice wall making it freeze instantly. Jack then brought out a match box and pulled out a match. Jack ignites the match, "Time to break the ice" Jack says as he throws the match at the frozen patch of whiskey causing it to burst into flames. The ice covered figure starts to grab its hand in pain. It then brings up it up to its face, the hand is spurting water as the rocky armor starts to break. When the ice was weak enough, Jack kicked a hole through it making the Ice figure kneel in pain as it grabbed its hand tighter, "Cmon kid, !" Jack yelled to Frisk as his hand was out to grab her. She tried running to him until the wooden armored figure grabbed Jack's wrist, suddenly lightning began to course through its fingers. It then proceeded to shock Jack! "GAHH!!!" Jack screamed as he fell back from the jolt. He took a minute to get up, but his vision was blurry. The wooden Figure then grabbed frisk. After seeing this, Jack took out General Valaskez's knife and stabbed it into the figures back causing it to growl in anguish, dropping Frisk as it fell to its knees. At this moment Jack grabs Frisk while he has the chance and pulls her through the hole. He then looks at Toriel through the hole, unable to do anything. She then gives Jack a pained look, "Keep...her safe...!!!" She screams as the Figure tightens his hold on her throat...causing her to pass out. Without a seconds hesitation, Jack Grabs Frisk "Quick mister Jack, down the steps!" Frisk yelled as she was in Jack's arms. The injured soldier then limps down the staircase as fast as he could, he then went through a dark hallway, yet he didn't care if it was wierd. He had to escape one way or another. As he turned the corner he was met with a giant purple gate. Jack did not waste any time, he limped to the door and opened it to feel a rush of cold wind on his face as he went through the large boundary. After this Jack limps for three more inches with Frisk in his arms until he heard a screech from behind the gate from which they came, suddenly the gate explodes into flames and shrapnel as Jack and frisk were knocked back onto the snowy ground!
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