《Mistake is mine》Chapter 10
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*Sneha Pov*
I am currently helping Bhabhi in the cooking. And no I am not cooking the food; I am just cutting the vegetables.
I cooked when they returned from their tour because it will be late for them to start cooking and I am sure the entire burden will be thrown on Bhabhi to cook.
And I should also think about the kids right.
But after that I decided to never cook for them. So I told Bhabhi that I will do all the cutting for both Saturday's and Sunday's and she will be the one that cooks.
Then she said "Sneha it was never your duty to cook for all of us but you did as a loving person. Now if you even want to do it now, I would have never allowed you."
"Bhabhi seriously can you be anymore perfect." I said.
"Not more than you." she replied.
I shook my head not believing it at all.
So finally everyone entered Bhai's house and settled for dinner.
When they took first bite everyone turned towards me.
Then Samrat asked "You didn't cooked today?"
"Nope! And I will not like never." I replied honestly.
"Why?" he asked me.
"Why should she?" Bhabhi retorted.
"She is perfect in that and at first she told us that she will do every Saturday right." He replied and asked "So why?"
"Because I am just a kid and why should I cook for all the adults here." I replied raising his so called 'Kid comment'.
He looked at me confused but everyone continued to eat their food.
Next day even though it is Sunday our group decided to go to college because we all have some doubts in few subjects.
So we thought our college Library is good place for that because we can use some new books for further reference and we even asked our Principal permission.
It is not a new thing in this college and that's what a special quality of this college I love.
When I reached college someone started calling 'Neha!"
I was stunned but turned around to see Suresh running towards me.
When he reached me I asked "Did you call me 'Neha'?"
"Yes! But why are you crying?" he asked confused.
Then I touched my cheeks and felt the tears. Until he told me I didn't even know that I am crying.
"You don't want me to call you like that?" he asked.
"No no. You can!" I replied immediately.
"So anyway. Do you know we are getting results tomorrow?" he asked.
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"What? But tomorrow I wanted to go to a movie." I replied frowning.
"Really? What movie?" he asked.
"My favorite actor Sharukh's." I replied dreamily.
"But tomorrow is first day right. How will you get the tickets?" he asked.
Then I actually thought about it and he is right.
"Don't worry I will try for them." He said.
"Really?" I asked him excitingly.
"Ofcourse silly! You are my best friend." He replied.
"Really?" I asked shocked.
"Before you steal 'Really' word from this planet, let's go to our class." He replied rolling his eyes and chuckling at me.
After college came to an end I immediately reached home to help Bhabhi in this one hour. Because every Sunday the work just gets more and we have to work one hour extra.
When I got ready to go to the café, I went inside the house to inform Bhabhi.
Yeah! She kept a rule that whenever I leave to café or college I need to tell her and when I will start to come back home I have to inform her by calling.
She said by this she can be tension free.
But to my bad luck I saw Bhai and some of his friends just lazily sitting in the living room.
I ignored them and said "Bhabhi I am leaving."
"Okay! Once again be careful." She said her usual dialogue.
"Where are you going?" I heard Bhai asking me.
"She is going for part time job." Bhabhi replied for me.
"What? But why are you working?" he asked me shocked.
"Why can't I?" I asked him.
"I am taking care of all your expenses right. Then why?" he replied.
"Because I can't be your responsibility forever Bhai." I replied and left the house.
After work when I returned everyone are already sitting at the dining table.
When we started eating, Bhai said "You should stop working Sneha."
"I can't. I want to work." I said.
"It is not safe for the girls to work this late." He said trying to accept his decision.
"Don't worry Bhai. My friends are there to protect me." I said stopping him from saying anything else.
Next day when I reached my college, my friends came near me and hugged me tightly.
"What happened?" I asked them worriedly.
"You just passed with flying colors Neha." Suresh said.
"Really?" I shouted when Suresh pointed out my reply.
"Oh! Then what about you guys?" I asked them.
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"Not as good as you but we did more than our expectations." Ankitha replied.
"So we have decided to go to that movie you wanted." Suresh said.
I nodded excitingly.
Today we both decided to skip the work and we both got the permission.
I returned to my home and Suresh went to find some tickets. I immediately told Bhabhi about my results and she was so happy for me.
When she said that we have to celebrate I told her about my movie plan and she actually got more excited for me.
Everyone reached from company little early than usual and they all are sitting in the Bhai's living room along with the ladies.
As for me I am just pacing along the stairs little away from them.
*Amala Pov* (Sneha's Bhabhi)
Today when Sneha told me about her results I am so happy and then her plan about going to watch a movie made me happier for her.
Everyone returned home early today and is sitting in the living room. I too just sat with them.
But I saw Sneha pacing on the stairs. I couldn't help but chuckle at her nervousness about not getting the tickets.
"What happened to her?" Nag asked looking at her.
Then I saw everyone is doing the same.
"She is just nervous that she will not get the movie tickets today." I replied casually.
"Which movie?" Samrat asked.
"Sharukh khan's. He is her favorite actor." I replied.
He immediately took his phone out and started talking to someone in whispers. After putting his phone down, he started saying "I got the tic..."
But couldn't complete his sentence because we all heard someone shouting "Neha!" entering our house.
Nag's and remaining boys face turned into shock looking at the boy.
"Neha?" he finally shouted little loudly already entering inside.
At the same time Sneha stopped at the top of the stairs turning towards this boy.
"He calls you by the name 'Neha!'?" Both Nag and Samrat asked at a time.
She turned towards them and replied "Yeah! So?"
She didn't wait for their reply and turned towards the boy and said "Suresh! Did you got them?"
Oh! So he is the Suresh. She talked to me about him many times.
He immediately turned serious and bended his head shaking it.
Then what Sneha did next surprised all of us because she took the Vase which is on the table near her and said "If you will tell me that you didn't get them, then this will make contact with your head."
We all looked at her in shock.
"Geez Neha! Are you ready to hurt me for just some movie tickets?" He asked placing his hand on his heart dramatically.
"Ofcourse! Without any doubt." She said still holding the vase.
"Well I don't want to get my handsome face damaged." He said and when Sneha raised an eyebrow he continued saying "Ofcourse not as handsome as your Sharukh, so here are the tickets."
She immediately placed the Vase back in its position and reached near him screaming and hugged him.
She kept on saying "I love you!" continuously and Samrat's face is totally watchable.
"Okay love birds cut it out." We heard another voice coming from the door and saw four members entering the house who are two boys and two girls.
Sneha released Suresh and said "You guys are just jealous."
I don't know about them but Samrat is sure because he turned his hands into fists.
"Yeah yeah! Let's go." One girl said.
"And by the way Sneha we will go to a restaurant first and will go to the movie." One boy said.
So only Suresh is calling her as 'Neha!'.
She nodded and turned towards me and asked "Bhabhi I can right?"
"Ofcourse. It is celebration for your results." I replied.
"So you are her Bhabhi?" Suresh asked.
I just nodded and he continued saying "Bhabhi we heard a lot about you. She always talks about how sweet and caring you are towards her."
I smiled looking at Sneha and said "Not as much as her."
"We know that. No one can cross her." They said looking at her proudly.
"Ok guys let's leave we will get late." Sneha said and they all left the house.
After few minutes Nag asked "What just happened?"
"I don't know." Samrat replied with hurt in his voice.
Samrat! You should have thought about this first when you talked about her like that even when you don't want to but did just for your friendship.
And Sneha I am so happy for you! I thought with happy tears in my eyes.
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there are few mistakes in this chap guys
and also as i wrote about Srk's movie, i know it is all lie but plz ignore it for this story because i couldn't write another actor's name other than his.
What can i say i am just die hard fan here.
Comment plz and vote.............
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