《In Love with A Criminal》Technical Problems
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Sonic's POV
I went out to the backyard and there were about what seemed maybe 20 Shadows. I ran past them looking at their eye color, none seemed to have different eye color.
"Where can they be?" I stopped to think. Then I saw one more running out of the tool shed, then behind him came another Shadow with his arms crossed. I walked over to them. One of them jumped once I approached. "From the looks you look like Bashful." I said talking to the one blushing, obviously. "And you're-"
"Naughty." He said. His purple eyes scanned me. "Also know as Seme and Dominant. He's known as Uke and Submissive." He pointed as Bashful. I looked at Bashful.
"Um..." He his face was red. Then he closed his mouth and put two fingers between his eyes and mumbled. He then opened his mouth to say something, but a hand to his face and smiled.
"Are you gonna say something?" Asked naughty. "Because if you are, you're making a fool of yourself." Bashful blushed. "Say what your trying to say now... This guy..." Sighed Naughty.
"Um...you're kinda...um...cu- No, no, no... Okay, well no...okay...um..."
"Tell me so I can tell him." Bashful whispered into Naughty's ear. Naughty Smirked. "He thinks your cute." I blushed brightly.
"Okay... Oh, wow. You're with Scourge now...so this is really awkward..." I rubbed the back of my head.
"No, he's with me." Naughty put and arm around Bashful and pulled him closer.
"N-No...Naughty. Please... EEK!" Bashful gave a squeak as Naughty spanked him.
"We don't say no to me..." He whispered. He brought Bashful closer to his face.
"Hey!" Naughty looked at me.
"What?" He growled.
"He said no. And no means no." I told him, pulling Bashful out of his grip and behind me.
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"He's my submissive. I'm his dominant, so he does what I say." Growled Naughty.
"He's my friend so I have the right to protect him." I said standing in front of Bashful protectively.
"So it's fight you want. Then it's a fight you're gonna get."
"Bring it on." I growled.
Tails's POV
We were both tied, Smart Guy and Me. We had been going on with questions all day. This was our 27th round. A Shadow came up.
"First one to answer this problem takes three of the players points and this point."
"Bring it on." I told Smart. He looked at me bored.
"What is the square root of 5,648?"
"1.001530748442794!" I shouted.
"Tails wins!" He shouted.
"How does it feel to be a loser?" I smirked. He smiled at me.
"Not that bad. And it was 95 not 94." He said.
"No."
"Check." He tossed me a calculator.
I typed the numbers. "You're right. That's means-"
"Shadow wins!" Shouted another Shadow.
"No! This can't be!" Smart came up to me.
"Good job. You tried." He told me and walked away.
Narrator's POV
Scourge was literally drunken in love. His dumb-dumb switched had been turned on. Now, all he could think was having fun with these Shadows; which clearly were having fun with him. They were all over him touching, kissing, licking, and sucking...every inch of his body. Every once in a while, the Shadows would fight over a certain place on Scourge's body to gain a milky white treat.
They all wanted a treat. Scourge had cummed at least three times, and the Shadows kept making him.
"Oh..." Moaned the green being. This indicated the he was close. They all began to pleasure Scourge at a certain area. "Oh, yeah... Yeah! Right there!" Then he released, everyone swarmed to get a taste.
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But all three scouts had forgotten about something, more like someone. Down in the basement stood a ghost. He was slowly disappearing, no one took notice though. From his knees and down were gone, completely. He sat frozen, silent and transparent in the basement. His legs were starting to disappeared by millimeter by the minute, if his emotions were not gathered in time, he would fade forever and so would all his emotions...because he wouldn't exist any longer. There would be no way to bring him back. And the three scouts had no noticed several emotions were starting to disappear.
Sonic's POV
"Ow." I said as Naughty was on top of me. His knee was against my back and he held one of my arms out.
"Who's the brave one now?" He whispered into my ear.
"Get off!" I tried kicking him off, but he pulled me arm. "Ouch! Okay! Okay! You-" All of a sudden I looked over at the other Shadows. They started to disappear, one by one. "Oh no..."
"What?" Then I took my chance to throw Naughty off of me. "What the hell?" He questioned. He got up and ran toward me but stopped. "Oh no..." I looked at him. I gasped.
"Your-"
"Hands... I'm disappearing..." His hands were transparent now.
"It's okay, it's just your hands. It'll be okay... We still have sometime to get you back to your original. It'll be okay."
"No it won't. It's not coming off." He said worriedly.
"Hey, it's gonna come off. Once we get you back to Shadow, you'll be okay."
"Guys..." We heard Bashful. We turned to him. He had begun to float and he was completely transparent.
"Bashful!" Naughty jumped up and grabbed his foot, pulling him back to the ground. Bashful held tightly to Naughty as his feet refused to touch the earth.
"Um. You guys need to come with me. It'll be okay. You just need to go back to your original."
"Naughty... I'm scared..." Bashful whispered.
"I've got you Bashful. I won't let you go." I get it now, all the emotions have a partner, and they can't live without each other. That's why they both have to go at the same time.
"Guys, hurry come with me."
"What about all the other emotions?" Asked Naughty.
"They'll follow us. Hurry, follow me." I took them inside, loud thuds were heard from all the others coming behind us. We ran through the house, hurrying the the basement.
Tails's POV
Everyone's ears perked up at loud thuds coming. Then it hit me. Shadow! We're almost out of time. Some emotions were starting to worry, they were disappearing.
"Everyone follow me! I have a solution." I ran out the kitchen door. They all followed me.
Scourge's POV
"What the hell?" I groaned. I rubbed my head. "Where am I?" I looked around. All the Shadows had lost interest in me, which woke me out of my lustful dream. I looked down my body. "Shit." I quickly cleaned up in the bathroom. When I got out, all the emotions looked at me.
They were...disappearing...
I must hurry to Shadow. Then another Shadow came through the door, Clever.
"Okay, Green. Get me back into my body. I don't want to disappear forever. I'm ready to go back now." He said.
"Very well. Follow me." I ran past him. All the emotions followed me.
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