《Kernstalion》Not a chapter 2
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As it's NaNoWriMo again, I've started up a 'short' story for this month, as I always do.
Because it's the first thing I've posted since Kernstalion I decided to poke some people here and see if I can some of you to read it and give me some feedback. Its meant as a more slow paced, simple story. Instead of LitRPG, which I usually write, its a Card Collecting story about a boy called Irwin (who would have guessed). It will start out with Irwin turning twelve, and his world changing massively. My goal is to get him aged up pretty faster, probably by chapter 8, as writing about such a young protag is a bit harder than I'd expected.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/60277/irwins-journey-card-fantasy
Sorry for the trouble, and for this wondering, this is by no means my 'next' story. Its just a test.
My rewrite of Minglings is going strong, and I'm over 3/4 of the way with that.
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