《[A Promise]>R. Tempest x Reader》*Insert Intriguing Title*
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Uh... Hi.... 🧍🏾♀️
I want to talk about the worst thing to ever be made on this planet.. My book.. Ugh.. I don't even wanna call it mine😭.
So.....
As you could.. Obviously tell... I've been lacking on the uploading part of this book.. And yes.. I have a solid reason for that.
At the beginning of writing this book, I was honestly excited to have my idea for reader and Rimuru to be together and have them do all sorts a things... But... How I went about it.. Was not.... Eh... It was horrible. I executed horribly.
I've read most of you guy's comments and most of you wished that Reader and Rimuru continued being friends before marrying each other (sorry.. It was my love for the trope 'already dating' couple that made me wanted them to date quicker... Super sorry!). And honestly.. I really do agree with that... I felt like if I turned this story into a slow burn.. It would've been so much better.. Like.. Really better😭😭.
When I was writing the story (before taking a.... Break.. Yeah..), I noticed many mistakes in the book (which is okay.. People make mistakes😅). I tend to put 'Y/N' when it's supposed to be 'you' and I'd brush over it because my eyes wasn't able to catch it (if that makes any sense lol).
I do think I have good writing potential, but there are times where my brain would just give up on me.
Sooooooooo.. What I had in mind is this...
What if I made a better, more improved, out of this world, version of this book? A remake, per se. I'd change things that is beneficial to you, as a reader, and more comfortable for me, as an author.
When I tell you that I really hated continuing this book because it sucks donkey.. I'm telling you.
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And I don't want to discontinue the book as it is.. I actually want to finish it. I had plans for the future. I haven't finish reading the manga, but I had plans for my own version of the story or for Y/N's plot (as in finding her mother and other stuff.. Hehe).
Honestly, out of topic. I always get anxious when I get comments from you guys. It low-key makes me scared because I'm always wondering, "are they gonna talk about how they want reader to do this instead of that? Should she have more screen time with this character than that? Is she being too annoying?" Or like.... How you guys want her to have smexy time with Rimuru 😭😭
I've always tried to avoid saying this, but I'm a minor lol (nah, I'm not a cringy 12 year old..) and it also makes me uncomfortable thinking about writing them. The least you can get is a good ol' smooch. Hehe.. I'll see what I can do tho.
So.. If you're up for the idea of me remaking(💙), that's totally fine.. If you're up for me to continue(🖤).. That's... Also totally fine (no it's not). The story continuing is totally up to you.
But for now, keep safe and pray lol.
Drink some good water and eat some health food... Idk.
My brain is dead. I quickly wrote this at 1am..... Yes. I'm fine. Thanks for asking.
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