《Unexpected-- Under Editing as a new book》Important!!
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Hi all, (I'm posting the same message on my other book) I have a quick poll for y'all that I'd love if you answered!!
I'm thinking of reworking Unexpected to make it better, I've already started writing out some ideas but I want your opinion.
Would you read the rewritten work? It's going to be sooo different from this book with only a few similarities: for starters, it's not going to open with Scott and Tori having sex right away, it's going to be more of a slow burn from friends to lovers. It's also going to focus more on Tori's abilities and delving deeper into the history with her mother and all that.
If Yes, comment here!
If No, comment here, or just don't comment.
Update: It'll be written as a separate book and the original will stay up on my profile. The new book will be titled Unexpected: Book 1. I'll post on here once the new one is posted!
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