《Mistakes (school 2015 fanfic)》Part 4
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Taekwang walks into his room and lay down on his bed.
"I have a weak heart don't you remember?"
"Weak heart?" He wondered.
"Since when did she has a weak heart?"
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"Ya! Kim Hajin!! Babo!! Babo!! Ah jinjja!" She said while hitting her head continuously.
"Did he hear what I said?"
"No right? Please noo!!!" She said and jumped to her bed.
*knock knock*
"Ne?"
"It's time to eat your medicine miss"
"Ooh, come in"
She swallows the pill and sits near the window.
She looks outside the window.
"Oh, no stars tonight?" she said and lay her head on top of her hand on the window.
She takes a deep breathe, and stares at Taekwang's window.
The curtain wasn't closed and the light was on. Suddenly Taekwang appears only wearing towel covering his down body part. Hajin was surprised and about to take her eyes off it. But then Taekwang notice her and scream, "YA! PYEONTAE (pervert)!!" and point at Hajin.
"Ani!!" she said and closes her window's curtain.
She jumps into her bed. Then, without noticing she says, "He has a nice body.." she smiles.
Then she notices and say, "Ya Kim Hajin, museun saeng-gag*?! Ahhh!!" she buries her head on her pillow.
*what are you thinking?
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The next morning...
"Omma, did you see the dress we bought last week?"
"I put it in your closet"
"Where?"
Eunbi's omma come to her room. She searches it, "Where are you going?" She asks.
"Ehh, theater"
Her mom found the dress and give it to her, "Are you going on a date?"
"Ah, ne.." Eunbi answer shyly.
"Have fun, don't come home to late"
"Arrasso!" She answers.
She wears the white dress. She curls her hair and looks in the mirror. She smiled feeling satisfied with her look.
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Then, there's a notification on her phone.
"I'm outside your house" the message said.
Eunbi rush outside and saw Yian waving at her.
"Ya, I almost thought you're Eunbyul" he says.
"Aaah. Shall we go?" She asks.
They arrived at the theater.
"What shall we watch?" Yian ask.
"That one!" Eunbi point at an adventure movie.
"Eunbyul would have picked the thriller one" he says.
"Aah, is that so" Eunbi mumbles.
They bought the tickets and buy some popcorn.
"One caramel popcorn please" Eunbi ordered.
"You guys are totally opposite, Eunbyul likes the salty one" Yian said.
Yian pays for the popcorn and they watch the movie.
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Hajin opens her eyes and realize that she wasn't in her room. She gets up and finds her mom next to her holding her hand.
"Omma, where are we?" she ask in a weak voice.
"Oh, you're awake. We're in the hospital" she answers with a smile.
"Why?" Hajin ask.
"You don't remember?" her mom asks confusedly.
"Ani," she answers.
"You were coming down for breakfast when suddenly you fell" her father said.
Hajin thinks hard to remember but she just can't.
"Don't try to remember, what matter is you're alright now" her father says like he's reading her mind.
"Ah,, okay"
The doctor come in and called Hajin parents. Hajin was left alone in her room.
"Ahh, what to do?" she ask herself.
She finds her phone on the desk and takes it.
"Omo, I'm so bored" she said while playing her phone. There's a notification. She opens the massager.
"Ya, let's play. I'm bored" it said.
Hajin replies, "Why don't you have a date with Eunbi?".
"Forget it! Just continue whatever you're doing right now!"
Hajin laugh and her parents come in. They come in silence with a sad face.
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"What's wrong?" Hajin ask not knowing anything.
"Nothing, just eat your porridge and let's go home" her father said with a fake smile.
Hajin eats her porridge with a bright face.
"She was so clueless", Mr. Kim whisper to Mrs. Kim.
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Yian talks about Eunbyul a lot during the movie. They walked to the bus station when Yian say, "Eunbyul is..."
"Enough!" Eunbi shout cannot take this any longer.
Yian was surprised and looked at Eunbi.
"Stop it,
jebal (please).."
Yian stares at Eunbi, "What's wrong?".
"I'm sick of it. We're rarely together because you need to practice and when we're together you always talk about unnie," she says.
"Ya, you know my feelings.." Yian says.
"Ani, I don't know" she answers.
Yian looked shocked.
"You never told me about your feelings" Eunbi says.
"I did" Yian says.
"No, you never did. It's always Taekwang who told me about his feeling although I reject him many times" Eunbi says, and then she realizes that she just talk about Taekwang infront of Yian.
Yian looked pissed.
"I didn't meant to.." Eunbi says.
"So you like him now?" Yian ask try to hold his anger.
"That's not what I meant.."
"So that's why you met him on the rooftop at the other day?"
"No, it wasn't like that.."
"Ya, where's Eunbyul?" Yian ask suddenly.
"Mwoh? (what)"
"She wouldn't act like this if she was you" Yian says.
"I was right, you still like my unnie.." Eunbi says holding her tears.
She didn't think that Yian will react like this. She thought that he will say sorry and everything was back to normal. Yian was lost at words.
Eunbi nod, "Very predictable" she cry and run away.
"Go Eunbyul!" Yian called and realize that she was Eunbi, "I mean... Arrrgghh!!!!"
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Eunbi run as fast as she can. She stopped at a bus station. She cry regretting what she said.
"I should've not told him about that"
"I should've just bear it"
"I should've stay"
Many thoughts crossed her mind.
At time like this, she really need that person,
"Gong Taekwang" she thought.
She opened her phone and search for Taekwang's contact. She press call and put her phone on her ear.
No answer.
She call him again.
Still no answer.
But she didn't give up, she call him again.
"Gong Tae, please pickup" she mumbles.
Still no answer, she cry feeling desperate.
Eunbi then send him a message,
"Meet me at the park near your house".
She stands and go to the park.
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Eunbi arrives at the park. She looks around, then her eyes stop at a sight of two people playing on the playground.
Laughing together.
The girl fall down and the boy lend his hand to help the girl stand.
Eunbi was silent like a statue.
"It's the worst day of my live" she thought.
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Hai guys!!
Well, how was chapter 4? Are you curious who did Eunbi saw at the playground?
I'm curious as well, but i will update soon. Don't worry.
And don't be afraid to tell me about your opinion, it help me a lot.
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