《Enemies》!!ANSWERING IMPORTANT QUESTIONS!!
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Hello children. I see many of you are confused on the past chapters.
Let me put you in there situation. Say you hated someone but were thrown into a place of torture and pain and they were the only things you knew. What would you do? If it was me I would for sure get over my hate for them and stick with them. Which is what is going on in the story. They are in a place were they might be killed and they are the only people they know. Therefor they cling onto each other to feel safe as there the only people they know. If you have anymore questions on this one just comment and i'll try to answer ((:
I see many of ya'll were confused about this so let me explain...the city George and Dream live in has a really messed up system, hinting on the fact that they went to the highest jail just because of a murder which normally would've been sent to a normal jail. Once again if you have questions on this just comment and i'll try to answer
Ahem...yes George did send a pic. NOT A DICK PIC THO!!! If you read the next message Dream had said "Okay that's just rude. No need to flick me off. I was just asking for a innocent pic of you jez." Clearly stating that George had sent him a pic of him FLICKING HIM OFF, and againnn if you have any questions on this just comment and i'll try to answer
In reality we really aren't going fast. A lot of you guys were confused when it came to the part of George wanting to sleep with Clay. I though I made it clear on why George had done this but I guess I hadn't. I had explained that George had a different attitude when it came to night. I based this factor off a real life situation of a guy friend i used to have. He used to act like a friend in the morning but when it came to night he would be so tired he would act kinda "romantic" I guess? I don't know but that's what i based Georges personality on. So George wasn't in anyway falling for Clay at that moment it was just him being so delusional that he acted that way. If you have questions on this comment and i will try answer
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Cmon guys...It's George...he always moans. This one should be self explanatory (: Questions for this just comment and i'll try to answer
For a normal book yes it would've been to fast, but for the lineup of my book it needed to be said. The book goes very far into this whole jail system thing and ventures out of that too. I personally just needed a quick background story. Which consisted of basically 6 ish chapters. Once the story is complete you will more understand that the timing of the beginning events were placed at a reasonable time.
Clays mom did shoot herself but it wasn't in her head. She had shot her arm. Why did she do that? So she could frame Clay and George. Yeah she's evil as fuck.
This one was quite confusing to a couple of ya'll and I understand why. George had only sprained his leg leaving him a little capable to walk. George had almost died from the initial impact of the crash causing extreme whiplash, not necessarily the injury's after. Therefor yes he almost died but his injury's weren't severe enough to kill him when it came to living normal. Any questions just comment and i'll try to answer
Ahem children. Don't lie to me. We all know we've gotten horny in the stupidest times. So give him a break for being horny after almost dying ((: Yk the drill with questions lmfaooo
Because it's George and he's just a dumbass like that. Yep same question thing.
Currently no I'm not planning on making it a smut but things can always change. I mean debating on how this story went from sweet to fucking death the chances of it randomly going to smut is kinda high lmfao (:
Because it's not a smut at the current time so therefor I feel that would've been out of place
Great question. I don't quite know but i'd love to get it out tomorrow. I've been so stressed with my dog and school and just my mental health in general so it hasn't left me much time to write, but since tomorrow is Friday i will have all weekend and all week until Thursday to have all day to work on it (I only have school on Thursday's and Friday's, I do online school the other 3 days)
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