inspired by an issue in my family

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I struggled and am struggling to develop this idea because I keep asking people for reassurance, and I have trouble with confidence in what I write. I feel like people wouldn't like it.

I enjoyed being able to play around with my characters. It's the first time I write a story that's not a first person POV and I really enjoy narrating everyone's perspective

In the comments I've been getting, people enjoy my story, and they really feel emotions towards the characters

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I'm still not sure

I would like them to take the lesson that if you do bad things, they always catch up to you, just like when you do good things

I would tell them to write what they feel, and instead of telling the reader the story, make them feel like they're IN the story

I think I'm very similar with Dulce in that we are both very protective with our family, and through experiences, we both grew

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I believe that being able to witness what a psychotic person thinks, is interesting to some people. Or maybe that's just me.

I kinda want to focus on my present at the moment. We'll see about new projects, when the time calls for it.