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Hellooo 👋🏻
I've been looking back and I've seen that no one really comments. I find that completely fine but i do appreciate feedback. This is my first time writing fanfic and I have no idea wether or not this is good. So if you have anything sort of feedback then I would appreciate it. I will try to compromise with you and see how it could work.
Thank You ☀️
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