《P A I N (FINISHED)》part 8
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julie texting:hey
julius:hi
julie:i cant fall asleep
edgar:i can
𝒆𝒅𝒈𝒂𝒓 𝒉𝒂𝒔 𝒍𝒆𝒇𝒕 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒄𝒉𝒂𝒕
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Edgar:woud you rather stab my father or-
selever:stab him
Edgar:i didnt even say the other opinion yet
selever:STAB HIM!!!!!!!!!!!>:D
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julie:your smiling,did something happen?
Selever:cant i just smile because i feel like it?
Edgar:ruv tripped and fell in the parking lot
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julie:i thought i had coronavirus but turns it was just aids. God is good (●'◡'●)ﾉ✞︎
rasazy:*looks at edgar*
edgar:*looks ta rasazy back*
rasazy:should we be concerned
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selever:why are your tounges purple?
sarvente:we had slushies,i had the red one
Ruv:i had a blue one
selever:oh
rasazy:OH
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