Hey guys! I got back from vacation two days ago, and during it I was thinking maybe I should ask you guys a question

Are the early chapters of this book good? And if not what can I do to change them, because I would like to change them in some way without having to rewrite them. Though of course if you guys want me to rewrite them I will. Not only that but I'm running out of ideas for chapters and I'd highly appreciate it if maybe you guys could give some plot ideas for further chapters, it doesn't have to be only shinkamisero it can be strictly shinkami or shinsero, it's whatever YOU guys want.