《The Ultimate Guide To Writing PJO Fanfics》OC reviews {CURRENTLY CLOSED FOR CATCH UP}
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Blaze
The story of a fire elemental's life in a world dominated by mages. He will have to learn how to manage betrayals, treachery, and maybe even love as he goes on adventures to find a meaning to it all. From dark, humble beginnings he will rise... or fall, devastating amounts in his journey across the world. Hello, Author here! I am, unfortunately, rather terrible at coming up with descriptions that seem to have the right amount of decorum and yet actually serve their function of adequately describing the story, so here's the coursenotes. - The story follows a fire elemental. (As you can tell from that, it is heavily besed on fantasy with mages and the like. Technology will not feature prominently) -As mentioned in the tags, this will have game-like aspects. (E.G. levels, stats. I will be trying to put my own twist on this notion however, so bear with me if the premise intrests you but you despise LitRpg) -It'll get rather dark, but not devastatingly so. (I'm trying to write a more complex story so it will have its dark moments, the prologue being one of them. Rest assured the whole story will not be this dark, though I'll make sure that no-one is a saint either) -The protagonist/protagonists will not be a Mary-Sue. (The plural will be understood when I'm further into the story. They also won't be impossiby unlikeable such as those in many Light novels.) -There is no prophecy (Anyone who says there is, is lying, trust me.)
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No Gods! Some masters?
Kolost was once a man damned to a life in servitude, slaving away in the mines to work himself into and early grave. Then a miracle from the gods order him to serve a prophet on her journey to codify all the medical texts in the known world. To create a library never seen before and help ease human suffering. In return he will become a free man once again. So he did. Then on the eve of their success he was betrayed and cast into hell. Not even having the choice of returning to servitude he was locked up and the keys thrown away. This is where we meet our hero, at his lowest point. He dreams of revenge against the gods but killing a god is a mighty undertaking. Will he succeed in his quest? Maybe.
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The First Champion | BOTW Link x GN!Reader
Contains spoilers - gender neutral MCOne hundred years ago, you took part in a prophecy of old. Having being gifted the ability to hear the voice of the goddess Hylia, you aid the other prophecy holders with guidance and advice from the spirit realm. But despite years of preparation, Ganon prevailed and brought with him the end of the world.You survived death, and now, a new journey awaits. Recover your forgotten memories and destroy Ganon once and for all with Link at your side. Reunite with old friends and enemies and, maybe, address your unspoken attraction you've had towards the hero since before the calamity. Cover made by Jeremy Fensky#1 on link#1 on zelda#1 on loz#1 on tloz#1 on legendofzelda#1 on nintendo #1 on thelegendofzelda #1 on botw#1 on breathofthewild#1 on hyrule#2 on secondpersonStarted: September 2018Discontinued: August 2019Revisited: May 2020Officially completed: Oct 27 2021(This story previously had a female MC. Please let me know of any missed she/her pronouns)
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Love Written Forever In Ink! (A Justin Timberlake fanfic)
A Justin Timberlake fanfic! When Justin goes to leave for his Europian leg of the tour. He meets an ordinary girl; Aria Traumen with a odd background. After a while her true colours start to appear and she changes his whole life! It changes the way he talks to Jessica, the way he looks at her and let's see if their love will be strong enough or not! Keep reading to find out more!
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Dragon Ball Magic
Sala Malik and Avo Cado are earthlings. When the humans were killed and the earth destroyed, Avo was one of the few to survive. Seeing his best friend die in front of his eyes, the feeling of powerlessness was unbearable and soon, as he watched the universe undo what had been done, he made his resolve to become a powerful magician and a defender of his home ! With the resurrected Sala, Avo left the comfort and familiarity of his planet on a long journey through space... All in order to learn the secrets of the Arcane. ARC 1 - First encounter with the Namekian people. Chapter 1-7
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MsButterfly's Poems: The Attys 2012 Poetry Contest Entry
An entry for Attys 2012 (Competitor) poetry contest consisting of 10 poems written in 10 different poetic form.Contents:1.Kyrielle: "Death"2.Shakespearean Sonnet: "Glacial"3.Limerick: "Maze"4.Villanelle: "Fire Sprite"5.Haiku: "Welcome, Spring"6.Triolet: "What Love Can Do"7.Diamante: "Child and Adullt"8.Couplet: "What Writing Means"9.Free-Verse: "Dear, Death of God"10.Nonet: "Save Me"
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