《Rescuing Andy》Chloe at gun point and Andy negotiating
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Chloe Price POV:
I see Andy enter the room and feel automatically relieved. She's good at negotiating so I hope for the best outcome.
"Chloe are you okay?" She said walking a few steps forward grimacing in pain.
"Besides having a gun pointed at my head yeah." She replies.
I can see that Chloe is very afraid. Wes another cop at 27 division was her husband and they had kids.
"Kevin please put the gun down. You never wanted any of this only Sam. But instead you killed a detective and wounded a cop. Please just stop." That's when I get shot in the stomach.
Andy McNally POV:
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I see Chloe collapse onto the floor and my instincts tell me to yell into her radio man down! Suddenly Kevin gives me a hit list and see the names Andy McNally, Sam Swarek, Chloe Price, Nick Collins and Jerry Barber.
"Nick! Chloe's been shot! Stem the bleeding." I yell making Nick come even more faster then he usually does.
"Hey. McNally what's going on?" He asks and I point to Kevin whose putting the gun at us both and laughing.
Nick Collins POV:
I hear a gunshot ring out and then hear McNally shout to me to get into the room and something about Price being shot.
"What's going on McNally?" I ask and she points to this guy who has to be her other kidnapper, Kevin Malloy who grins while pointing the gun at us.
"1546 I have a gunman in the evidence room and an officer down!" I say into the radio.
"1546 who is the officer down?" The radio says and I recognise it as Sam's voice which sounds really worried.
"Chloe Price," I reply.
Andy gives me a hit list. The names on the list is :
Andy McNally
Sam Swarek
Chloe Price
Jerry Barber
Nick Collins.
"Sam. We need your help." McNally shouts.
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