《HOW GIVE ME DESIROUS MY ADOPTED BROTHER ?? (mizo bl)》🔞 first time
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How give me desirous my adopted brother part 4
Samuel //kha tiang zawng khan min tih hlauh a tum zawk em mawn le,ka awm avan ti nuam lo tak emmm...in a tang a min chhuah tir dan tur, plant hran a hmang ani ngei ang...ten awm lutuk kha tiang zawng kher kha chuan ti lo se la tha ang....ti nge kei pawh kha ka lo awm mawl ve tawp ri ngawt a...at thlak lutuk....ni e tuar hram hram angai ......e ngah mah ngai lo ang hian awm lui tlat ila a tha ang...eng tek tik pawh hmang rawh se ka chhuak chuang lo ang a ti nuah nuah reng a...dar 10 a ri vuk tawh a,,.a leh kha zir pawh pakhat mah a thluak ah a la thun lo...vawin tlai lam a thil thleng kha ala ngaituah zui char char ani,a fawh chak mit meng kha ahmuh hmaih lo an in fawp thwi thuak a ni zawk mah anih kha..
Room leh lam ami ve thung chu a tutor haw rual khan a chat thla ani nghal mai a mut a chhuak em ani....a mang lam e rawh a khaw lo leh pek hle thung...
A hma ni ami ang chiah chiah,a chhing tan chiah a,,, a mang ram ah a cheng ani nghal mai....a hmasa ami ai khan an thleng thui hret leh nghal....
In hnuai lam a ,""min rawn miah lo in fa a tan a lak na lehkha ilo ti fel vek amaw """vin hlak mai a pi remi tawng thawm a vang chuan denis a pawh a mang ram a tang in a ti harh chiang hle...a boner a lo tho nasa leh pek mai a...tun tum chu a mut bu lam a huh lo hlauh...van neih thlak hian....in hnuai ah a chhuk vat a...samuel pawh a rawn chhuak ve vat...
Pu zochhuana chuan samuela fa a lak na lehkha alo ti fel vek chu niin ,chhung kaw hming ah pawh a lo ziak lut ve thlap mai....pi remi chuan ..he nopang hi i fapa chu alo ni tak tak zawk em ni!???a ti vin hluk hluk a...pu zochhuana chuan ka thianpa fapa ani ka tih tawh kha.....i duh phawt chuan kan dna pawh i test thei a lawm....ti nge mi rin na hi i neih lo em em....,dan ang tak in ka fapa ni se ka ti mai ania....lo sawi buai ve vak vak kha a tul lo eeee...a ti khur khur a...a vin deuh hluk avang chuan pi remi pawh in dek a rawn ti ngam tawh lo.....
Pu zochhuana chuan rinte tah lo kal teh le...hei i hming sign chiah ka ma mawh tawh ania.....ti chuan dan ang tak in ka fapa i ni ve tawh ang....a ti dam leh ang thlup lawi a,na chin lawk a a vin hluk hluk teh reng nen....pen a rawn pe var a.... samuela tan pawh a nuam duh lo tak zet mai.....
Zawi sap chuan naktuk ah kalo sign zawk thei mai ngem le...in ngaihtuah chian ve phawt ka duh a.....a rawn ti zawi sep a....a in thla hrun hmel ngawih ngawih ,sign tak tak chi ah pawh angai lo...pu zochhuana chuan awle...naktuk a office a theh luh hman ka duh a....ka hna kal hma in min rawn pe dawn nia a ti sam a.....mu tur in alut leh nghal...pi remi chu a va melh deuh ralh a alo meng thip nasa mai a......a pawm Pui ve teh chiam lo tih alang reng mai...
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Denis pawh a room lam ah a chho hluk hluk a...a pin dan kawng ka a khar ri ring thak thak khawp mai..... samuela tan chuan nuam lo duh tak hi ani ringawt...file chu a en a.....a khum a tang in atho leh thin...a room ah a tei a tei ringawt dar12 a ri vuk tawh a...a pin dan kawng ka rawn in kik ri dat dat chu a va hawng a denis a lo ni ,biar rim a nam hum hum leh nghal....
Ni e ,biar a in miau a lawm...a thin a rim chuan a in ve ziah reng ani.... samuela a unaupa ani tur chu a duh hauh lo ...a tir ah kha chuan a thik vang deuh kha ni a....tun ah hi chuan a mang khawlo tak tak te vang in ngaih tuah na mumal apu hlei thei lo... samuel a a unaupa nilo se a tih na chu a hma aiin a lian leh zual daih tawh....
a chhan ber pawh ain hre chuanglo....
Samuela chuan i rui ami khawi ami nge i in a ,i chhuak miah bawk silo a...a lo ti hap a...
Denis chuan biar te chu ka room ah ka kawl teuh lawm le ..i duh ve mi??a ti nuap nuap a...
Samuela chuan ....ka la in ngai miah lo a...an ti ha a,denis pawh rui chhe lutuk chu ala nilo samuel a ban ah chuan vuan in ama room ah chuan a kai phei hluk hluk a,khum a biar lo awm nia chu a va hawn sak a...in rawh a ti chang fak a,samuel a chuan ka in ngai lo ....tih pah in chhuah a tum a...denis chuan a vuan lui tlat...nep lutuk mai...in rawh mipa ini na nge...a ti khui khui a....samuel chuan denis a kut a biar chu la in a tlak nghal pap a...a tawk em ???a ti chang fak a,chhuah leh atum chu denis chuan a va dang tlat pek a...A room kawng ka a khar hmak zui....
Ka sawi tum ka la sawi lo....a ti chang fak a...
Samuela chuan Lungawilo tih hriat tak in a hmui a pet sawi sak a...
Denis chuan i hming kha sign hlek suh...nang nen hian unau nih ka duh lo ania,a rawn ti vin hlak,samuel chuan ""ti maw? Nang aia i chhungten min duh sak i hlauh vang em ni???he mi lak tlak lo i hmusit em em hi !! I tluk loh i hlau ti raw!!?? Nep lutuk...a ti ve siah mai,zu rui mai mai chhan that viau ngai in a hrelo
Denis chuan nang kha nih kha nep ...mipa pawh ini lo....biar pawh in thei hlei lo,i thian kawm a tang reng pawn mipa ti a chhiar tlak i ni lo...ka zak zawk.nang ang ka unaupa ini tur chu...a ti ve khalh khalh a...
Samuela chu athin rim ve tawh tak zet..
A thianpa a rawn hmer tel ve kher a amah ringawt a tham lo hi chu pawi pawh a tilo .....mahse a thianpa a hmer tel ve hi chu alawm vak lo.....hnek tum in akut a hum ruh tang tang a...hnek ta lo chuan
khum a biar chu la in denis a hma ah chuan,a tlak pawp pawp a...tu maw nep itih chu tih pah in a dang ain leh zel a....a rui chhuih tawh....denis chuan ,a tawk in tawh suh tih leh a biar bur 6 na in tur tak chu ava lak sak a....a peih sak hluk a....
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Samuela chu a nui sun sun a..
""kha kha ni mai""nawi fe a tih pah chuan denis a khum a chuan a bawk thla thlawp a...
""Min tluk loh i hlau anih kha""..nui sun sun chung chuan rawn la ti tal tal a....denis chuan,""ka khum a tang khan tho rawh""..a ti chang leh fak a....
Samuel a bawk chuan ,a rui phur tawh nen a pawr ve em em ringawt tawh a....
I unaupa ka nih loh chu duh viau mah la ka ni tho ang....te an ti elh khalh khalh a...denis a thin rim chu a sen tawn tawn thei tawh.....ngawi rawh tih pah in ....samuela hmui chu a zuk hup a....
Samuela lah a meng phi ruai ringawt tawh mu leh mal anei tawh hlawl lo,denis an ahmui ahup na chu la sawn in a nui sen sen a....rawn tho ut in.......ti maw ,eng vang in maw..a ti leh nuap nuap a...a mit meng chuan a elh sen tak zet...denis a huat tawk a tling leh em em tawh...
Denis ///in chhir suh ang che.. ...tih pah in samuela chu khum ah chuan a nem tlu pawp a....a hmui pawi sawi lo tak chu a kut zung pui chuan a nuai sak nawk a,a chil alem khawlh khawlh bawk,han fawh chu a tum ngial a mahse a huai sen tawk lo ani, a chhan chu, rui chhia ani ve lo tlat.......a lung erawh a phu dup dup a samuela chuan mit meng de set set chuan denis chu a en a,min fawp ta che,i chak tih ka hria lawm!!!!!
a rawn la ti hap zui..... Denis a thlan te chu a tla bawrh bawrh thei hial a tawp a tawp ah chuan fawp ta nge nge a... Samuela lah harh fim tawh hek lo le ,denis a nghawng a lo kuah pah chuan,a lo chhang let ve hmiah hmiah a....an in fawp ta miah miah mai....ka ei zo vek dawn che in ti ang mai in an duh thawh dun em em,han chawlh det tum pawh an awm lo,denis chuan samuel a kawr chu hlih sak tan ta a...i fawh mai chu a duh tawk tawh lo ani... a tak sa te chu a zut kual ruai a,a hnu te chu zuk fawp in a awm te pawh a fawh sak ta ruai mai bawk a.... samuela lah a moan ham ham zui thawm lah chu a dim lo phian leh nghal....denis a chu han kuah in ,a han fawp ve leh nawk nawk thin ...denis a t-shirt pawh a hlih sak ve thuai a....an hnuai lam pawh a tang na khawp mai
Minutes rei lo te ah....an in phelh ruak chu a ni ta der mai ...
denis chuan samuel awm bawr leh hnute te chu a fawp kual ruai reng a. samuela pawn a rawn fawp kual ve ruai tho bawk a,denis chuan samuela chu a kuai bawk ta thlawp mai a....a dick chu samuela hole ah chuan a thun ta hmiah hmiah mai ni chu.... samuela chu a rum chhuak hak a
denis an a ka a zuk hup sak thuai a....a tight em avang chuan a thun sawt lo ang reng.....mahse tawp a tum hauh lo, samuela lah in alo dawh rem ve seuh seuh bawk a,a full a thun zawh chuan , a dep zui zat a... samuela mittui chu a luang ngia ngia tawh a ...a na ti em a ni
...a tir ah na ti viau mahse a feel zui thuai a, a na tih na aiin a nuam tih na in a hneh chilh zawk,denis hi a zei ve em ani....a rum chhuak leh halh thin tih loh chu thawm neih pawh a tum zui lo..a in pet fan fan duh chauh tawh,a moan ham ham reng a,chu chuan denis a ti zau thau zual tulh tulh leh nghal..denis chuan samuela nghawng hnung lam te chu a zuk fawp deuh ruai a... samuela kut leh lam pawh a kut in a hmer tlat bawk ,a kut leh lam in samuela thil chu a hrawt sak bawk a,samuela mawng vel pawh a tham sak leh tawn tawn thin bawk.
Denis//mipa nilo hmeichhia pawh sex a hman pui hmasak ber ani,A hmel tha tak hian,a ti ler ve ang reng viau, hmeichhe boobs leh mal pawh a chul tam tawh mahse, sex kher hi chu a in sum theih na lam tak ani ve thin kha ani a...samuel a lak ah chuan, a sih hnip(awlsam) ngawih ngawih lawi si..chu ti chung chuan a zei em em tho mai,a tight em avang chuan a dep chawl leh deuh dat
thin mahse a chhun zawm leh vat zel tho a..darkar 2 dawn chu hun an hmang ta.....
chuan zawi muang in a phawi a...a cum na hnang chu a rawn chhuak ngia ngia a,ngai sak zui lem lo chuan samuela chung ah chuan a bawk thla thlawp,reilo te ah,khum ah chuan lawn tha in a zang thal in a mu rem a.... samuela chu a awm ah a rawn bei zui thlawp a.....a lo kuah ve mai a...an mu hil chhun zawm nghal chu ani ta der mai....zing ah eng tin tak awm ang maw....an hnu hma lah a tawm kai lo ve ang reng si a....
Zing dar 7:30 Ari vuk tawh a..nidang chuan samuel hi dar 5:00 vel ah a tho daih thin....denis erawh tho tlai thang ania.....masangi chuan samuel chu a dam sam lo anih a ring ringawt.....denis a erawh a ti fo dan in kai tho tur in a room lam apan chho chhat chhat a....denis a room kawng ka chu akik dat dat a...denis tho tawh rawh tuk thuan ei ahun dawn.....a ti lang lang....denis chu masangi thawm avang chuan mit a rawn meng siar siar .....phak fe chuan ummmmm a ti tuah tuah a...masangi chu abuai em avang in in hnuai lam ah achhuk leh mai a..nakin deuh a samuela chu ka kai tho mai ang ,a thawh hai ve tum ani sia...a lai nat awm emai a in thlahrung thei si...a ti niap niap a..
In hnuai a chhuk in a pen thla thauh thauh a...
Denis an amit ameng fel chiah chu....a awm a tui fahran a samuela mu hil sak sak chu a hmu a.....nizan thil thleng te amit thla nghal zut zut mai.....nizan khan a rui chhe ve lutuk lo ka tih tawh kha...mahse a tisa chak na in a nawr na em a in control thei lo tur tawk in a lo kai ve sek bawk nen,bak ah samuela lah khan a ti phur tur tawk in alo chhang let ve zel anih kha,a thlan fim a rawn tla nghal bawrh bawrh a,chet pawh a che ngam lo...a chet vaih chuan samuela chu a rawn harh mai ahlau bawk si ani...... ngaihtuah na fim hman tum in thawk an la leh hak hak a.... samuela bawk chu a zuk en leh a....a mu tui tak zet.a hmel lah chu a hmu tha em em mai leh nghal....mit khap lek lo in a lo en vung vung lai chuan samuela chu a rawn tal tham tham a,a rawn harh dawn niin a lang....han bih ruk ngawt thei na chi ni hek lo a mu hil der leh ringawt a...
mahse van neih thlak tak in a rawn harh hauh lo,a hma aia tui hmel fe chuan a muhil leh sak sak a...denis a chu a la kuah rem sauh sauh zui leh nghal.....denis chu a lung a phu leh dup dup tawh a...ain ngaih tuah harh deuh thut a....thawm dim tak chuan ,a tho them them a.....a thawm hnaw ava in bel sawk sawk a... samuela saruak fe a a khum amu chu a blanket sin lai nen chuan a pawm tho nawlh a....dim fe chuan Samuel a room lam a pan phei pui thawm thawm a....tuman an hmu lo hlauh mai....samuel chu a khum ah chuan a mut tha deuh hnak a....a zang chhe lo, samuela lah nizan a rui hneh bawk a amu nghet zek mai...a let a let a ,a muhil chhun zawm leh nghal zel a.......an blanket chu avar vek anih thin avang in..... samuela blanket zawk chu ahlum mawp mawp a....a room ah atlan luh pui leh deuh hlawk hlawk ...a bedsheet a cum hnag awm te chu a tel deuh nawk nawk a.....a ma room bathroom lam ah chuan a va luh pui in baket ah a chiah a,sabawn dip aphul nghek a....a nuai nawk nawk a...a hriat chin ah a mah a in suk ve vawi khat na ani......thil sual ti, a hnu hma thup tum hi a ang ber a...
A in bual zawh chuan kawr ha lo in darthlalang hma ah a ding a....a tak sa a duk thliah thliah (love bite) te chu a en vang vang a,nizan thil thleng chu a la feel vawng vawng mai...."Hei vang hian em ni,ka unau pa ni tur khan ka lo duh loh em em che ??!""ti in a mah chu ain zawt sap a..
A vawi 2 nan masangi chuan denis kai tho tur chuan a rawn chho leh a.....denis chuan kawng alo hawn nghal vat a......dar 8:30 a ri leh tawh nia i rei emai...class i tlai ange....a han ti ghal hmuar hmuar a....kal nghal mai pah a samuela kai tho tur a,a room hawn mai chu a tum a...,denis chuan.
A dam lo!/a lo ti bak hluk a..
Class a kal peih lo ang mut tir mai mai rawh...a tih zawm leh nghal zat bawk.... masangi chuan van khawngaih thlak tak .....chaw tal ei se ka tia lawm tih pah in samuela room a luh chu a tum leh talh a..
Denis chuan kalo kai tho mai ang.../a rawn ti leh hluk a..
Masangi chu ngaih tha lo deuh reuh tak chuan anih chaw ei ka zu siam dawn nia rawn chhuk rual ru o....a ti ve mai a..a mil lo viau khan ka hre sia a ti rilru niap niap bawk....
Denis chu a thaw hawk hawk thei....samuela saruak ngal ngat a mu ava hmu dawn tih kha ahre chiang em ani....
Denis chu samuel room ah chuan a dak duk duk a.. samuela pawh a rawn tho chhuak ve tan tham tham a...a lu chu a dawm vawng vawng a....denis an samuela harh ahmuh chuan ama room lam ah bak lek in a tlan phei leh nghal ,a in siam sawk sawk a..class kal tur in bak lek in a chhuak nghal vang vang zing chaw pawh a ei lo.
samuela chuan an in thlek an in thlek thin a...amah a saruak bak ah a mawng vel chu ana ut ut mai leh nghal a..nizan thil thleng te chu a ngaihtuah vang vang a,a mang hriat ruai thei chauh leh nghal.....mahse a hriat chian erawh a mumang a nilo tih chu ani,a chhan chu a tak sa a ,a nghawng dan avang chuan a hriat thiam theih vek...
A Thlan fiam a rawn chhuak nghal tiam" a
A zam chhe lo chauh mai...shower lam ah a lut thuai a shower a in phu tir sar sar chung chuan a mitthla ah nizan a thil thleng angaih tuah a...a mit thla ah a chiang talh talh leh nghal .a taksa a duk thlih thliah (love bite) te chu a khawih a.....a mittui rawn hnap in...a thu hnawk a...enge maw ka tih tak le.? A ti a ,a lu a dawm tlawk tlawk a,a in hnit faih faih reng bawk.....a in bual zo a in thlak lai chuan.. fa a lak na lehkha nizan lam a pu zochhuana pek chu dawh kan ah ava hmu a.""He thil vang hian maw !ka chung ah kha tiang thil kha i tih zorempuia ka ngai dam miahlo ang che ...""a ti sap a.... paper chu a la a hming chu a sign ta hmak mai..
U nau chu kan ni khawp ang"!! a ti chang leh fak a...in hnuai ah file nen chuan a chhuk a..ni zan lam thil avang in a bai seih seih a...pen pawh a har sa talh talh khawp mai....sana a en a....tan hun alo pel vuk tawk...a la in siam miah bawk silo..masang tinge min kai thawh lo...tih pah in tui a in khawlh khawlh a...ka han in siam lawk ange!!! Tih pah in file chu dawh kan ah a dah a..
Masangi chuan denis khan i dam lo atia...class a kal peihlo ang.kai tho suh min tia lawm....a lo ti var a..
Denis an a tia maw!!??a ti leh he haw a...
Aw!!zing chaw pawh ei lo in a chhuak daih tawh ani chu class kal tur in a lo ti var a...
Bak ah i kal bai suih suih bawk sia ..i enge na a.a tih zawm zat a...
Samuela tan han sawi chi zia zang a ni si lo, khaw sik in min tham deuh a niang...bah nak chuan a ti a....
Masangi bawk chuan pu zochhuana sawn alo la nghak fan fan che nia....file kha va pe rawh.....i dam dawi tur ka lo la ang...chuan facial te kan ti dun mai mai dawn nia.....i duh leh in ah pawh lehkha te chu i zir thei tho lawm...a ti zung zung a....damdawi bur a zawng ruai tawh bawk..
samuela chuan nia ,a ti zawi sep a....pu zochhuana file pe tur chuan lehkha chhiar pin dan ah chuan ava lut a....pu zochhuana chu alo hlim var var khawp mai...tun ah chuan dan ang tak in ka fapa i ni ta e....hmun pui lam ah ka va theh lut ange..masangi khan i dam lo a ti a....in exam a hnai tawh si a....i lo in enkawl tha viau dawn nia....
A ti nui var var a.... samuela erawh a nui tawi tak tak khawp mai.a sign chhan kha han hlim pui viau tur chi ani tlat lo.......
Masangi chuan zing chaw a lo siam fel sak diam tawh a....i chaw ei kham ah dam dawi hi i ei a nga .i dam var var mai ang...alo ti nui sen sen a..châk lo fe chuan chaw chu a ei ve leh ta....a ei kham ve leh mut a duh thu sawi in ...a room lam ah a chho san leh nghal a,masangi pawn a tih tur a ti zui leh malh malh a.
Samuela chu a khum ah chuan a thu a,a khup chu akuah bet a,a lu a phum bawk tah duh lo viau mahse a mittui chu a rawn luang leh thin..
Tiang tur tih hria ila chu he in ah hian ka lut hauh lo ang..denis ka harh fim lo lai chuh in eng tin nge ti khan min tih theih le....mi rilru chhe tak ni tur ah ka lo ngai lo che sin,a room a ain khung tlawk tlawk avang chuan rilru fim apu thei thlawt lo,denis chu a dem tak zet mahse..thil thleng te a ngaih tuah let erawh chuan a mah pawh a lo tang chhin miah lo kha ani si a,duh loh a hnek in a mah khan denis kha phur na ape zawk lek lek kha ani a,a nawr zawk lek lek tih na nih chu....a zak ngawih ngawih mai,a in chhir tak zet mahse a sawt tawh silo a,a thleng tur ang chu a thleng vek tawh,tlat ani.
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How do I get more reads, votes, and comments?If you find yourself asking that question, then I have some answers for you. What can you do to reach out to readers and potential readers? How can you encourage readers to comment and vote? What are all the different ways you can promote your stories?This #1 ranking guide is written by a Wattpad ambassador and especially geared for new Wattpad authors. Lots of tips, advice, and personal opinions await you - including everything thing I've done to promote my own Watty's finalist and winning stories - but only if you turn the page.Reader testimonial by @AyushiPandey-- 'I read your guide for Wattpad success when I first started writing my story last year in August, and now it has been an entire year when I stumbled upon it again. I just have to say, I loved reading it again, it has the best tips one can find (take it from me, I have read many, many guides here). Thank you so much for taking out your time to compile such an amazing book!' Reader testimonial by @suspishfishy-- 'I have to thank you again! As soon as I wrote a book that focused on what I wanted to write, instantly people started to read my books and give me feedback!'**THIS IS NOT A PLACE TO ADVERTISE YOUR STORY. This is where you'll find detailed instructions for the proper places to advertise and find readers. If you ask people to read your story here, your comment will be removed.**Thanks to @EnjxiiBlxck for the cover.
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