《Some OC Rough Draft Short Stories》;The Commenter, Entry One;
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Hello. ;I; am The Commenter. Truth be told, that is not my real name. I shall not disclose that here though. You can call me Vhais. (Vuh-hai-ihs) Straight to the point, I'm fully aware that the world we are in is not real. I have a reputation of driving people insane when I tell them that straight to their face.
Yes, I said my world. I am from the real world. There I lived a life I did not enjoy nor want. And you have no idea what I've done to try to escape that world.
Continuing on, I am one who will not die. Immortal, you could say. However, I have tried and tried to revive someone like me, similar in powers and mortality. I have failed. The Observer, or Oeaxe. (Oh-aches/Oh-eeks) And yet here I am, alone. I ;can't; say further details yet. I will explain more when I trust you more. Just thought it was worthy of mention.
Since then, it is just me and my dog Fido left in our lonely home. Bored. Repeating a slow, tiring day. That is until I decided something. I decided to watch you folks. And lord, you lot are entertaining and worrying. Some of you are pretty powerful. Some of you, not so much. All interesting stories though. I think I will visit this dimension as much as possible. Continuing further.
As you may have guessed, I am also a being with powers. I have the ability to write people in and out of existence. I have the ability to manipulate reality. I can see a lot in this reality, but not all the time. That would get annoying. I can bring objects to me and affect people. I don't really know how to describe it.
Right, back to the self aware thing. There are multiple or sometimes just one author of these realities. For, I used to be one. My reality is gone, so don't bother trying to find it. Scrapped story, I didn't think it would disappear completely. From that, I concluded that there are authors for every reality. It's easy to figure out if there is one author or many. Ex: Messy timeline.
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Back to the ;trust;. I do not trust easily. It will take a lot of time for me to really say anything about my past here, but I figured this much information would be fine. That is all. Oh, and ;anyone; who reads this, take care. Good day.
-The Commenter, Vhais.
P.S. The semi-colons are important.
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