《Mrs Preeta Karan Luthra》Part:8
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When he come from room.
Four of them(Shristhi,Kabir,kaajal,kunj)glare him.
All four comes towards preeta.
Kab: Preeta ye kya bol raha tha Teri Saadi....
Preeta: Kabir ham baad me baat karte hai isbaare me......
Kunj(angrily): lekin hame abhi jaanna hai.
Preeta (angrily):Maine bola na baad me baat karte hai. Abhi Chalo yaha se.
{Kaaj:(to Kabir and kunj)wo tensed hai ham baad me baat Karlenge use. abhi Chalo}.
Thodi der me sab kuch normal ho jaata hai.
Kareena (budhiya): Karan jaao jaakr mehendi lekr aao.
He goes from there.
Kabir to (kaajal,kunj and Shristhi):ye ho kya ho raha hai abhi thodi der pehle to isne bola tha ki ye preeta ka husband hai.to fir ye(points towards mahira)ladki kon hai.
Shr:Kabir ham iss baare me baad me baat karenge abhi tum kuch mat karna please.
Kaaj(her phone started ringing): ek min Mai ye call attend Kar me aati hu.
She goes from there.
Karan come there with mehendi in his hand he looks towards preeta.
He goes towards her and intentionally slips.preeta hold him and in this process mehendi comes in her hand.
Karan smirk. While preeta confusingly looks towards others.
Karan(in preeta ear): Mehendi ho gai babydoll.ye mera sorry hi samajh lo.
Preeta shoked.
She leave the bowl and goes from there.
Karan mehendi ka bowl family ko dekr uske piche nikal jaata hai.
Kaajal was talking with some clients when rishabh come there.(guys both of them haven't seen each other dono alag direction se aate hai).
Kaajal slips but before she hits the floor rishabh hold her both have a cute eye lock.
But kaajal come back to sence.
Kaaj(nervously):th... thanks.
But risabh was in his own world he was continuously staring at her.
Kaajal snaps her fingers.then he come back to sence.
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Risabh (awkwardly): y..ya..
He stands her properly.
Both were not looking at each other.
But something hits kaajal mind.
Kaaj: execuse me Mr luthra aap Karan luthra ke Bhai ho right.
Rish:ha..haa wo mra hi Bhai hai.
Kaaj(angrily):tumne apne Bhai ko kuch sikhaya nahi hai ki kisike bhi character pe ungli uthane se pehle uske baare me jaanna jaruri hai.
Rish: dekhiye preeta ji ke saath jo huwa uske liye I'm sorry sayad hamme hi kuch kami ho gai thi. Hamne sayad use sahi aur galat ka fark nahi bataya.
Kaaj prov: kya baat hai mujhe laga ye bhi attitude dikhaiga us Karan luthra ki tarah fir Mai ise sunaungi😁 but he is mature. Nice
Rish prov: pta nahi Kyu mujhe ye ladki achi lag rahi hai. Bhale hi ye jaisa bhi bolti ho lekin iska dil saaf hai.i like her.
Kaaj: excuse me mujhe ye call attend karna hai.
Rish:yaa sure bye.
Aur Meri tarf se bhi
Bye.😏
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