《New year or New life?! (COMPLETED)》Caught or Not?
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Jai was fuming in anger.
Ritu:Kya hai? Humesha usse kyu maar tah hai? Tu chahta kya hai? Agar ussey kuch hojata tho! Shaadi ki umar hai uski phir bhi woh kaam kar k hum sab ko khana deti hai woh. Tu kya kar raha hai sirf uski paison ka barbadi. Tu yaad rak le Jai uski pasion mei khaana khata hai tu(slapped). Usne aaj tak uss ke liye kuch nhi ki uski saari kushiyan chod kar hum sab ke liye sab kuch kar rahi hai woh. Tumhe sharam aani chaiye apni choti behen ki pasion mei khane ke liye jab tum uski shaadi karwani hai.(slapped him again)
Jai:Humesha uski support kyu karti hai ma?
Ritu:Ab tumne usse kyu mara bata mujhe achi tarah pata hai tumhari koi kaam achi nhi hui toh tum apne gussa uss bechari par uthar tha hai.
Jai was silent.
Ritu:Bata na kya kiya usney.
Jai didn't say anything.
Ritu:Ab bataoge bhi?
Jai stood still.
Ritu:Kyu kar raha hai tu aisa woh bechari din raat Mehnat karti hai woh tum aur tumhare papa ke baare mei soch ke uski har khusiyan kho di. Uss ko painting karna tha jab tumhare papa ne kaha nhi woh chodi woh athletic join karna chahti thi jab tum ne kaha ladki hai iss ki zaroor nhi hai agar kahin chot lagi toh shaadi koi nhi karenge tujhse shaadi kar ne ke liye ladkiyan sochenge ussey shaadi kar ne ke liye koi sochega bhi nhi ussey dekhe hi haan kar dega. Jab woh literature padna chahti thi tum aur tumhare papa ne milke uske sapne ko tod di hai bata ab kya ki usney.
Jai:Ma bass....
In Singhania mansion
Chandu:Veer jhoot bol raha hai kya?
Veer:Mom aisa kuch nhi hai.
Ballu:Tum kab se jhoot bol ne laage ho?
Veer:Dad woh.
Chandu:Kya hua Veer tumhe (disappointed as Veer never lies to his parents😔)
In Sharma house
Ritu:Bata kya hai.
Jai had no answer.
Bani was crying in her room.
Ritu:Bata prblm kya hai tumhara? Kyu ussey mar raha tha!
Jai:Kuch nhi.
Ritu:Kuch nhi hai toh ladai kyu ki?
Jai was silent
Ritu:Haan yaad aagaya tumne kaha ki tumhara t-shirt iron karne ko aur usney nhi ki hai na? Pagal t-shirt ko iron kyu kar na hai maine hi kaha ussey iron na kar ne ko.
Jai:Kyu? Mera t-shirt hai mujhe iron kar ke hi pehen na hai.
Ritu:Aisa hai toh tum khud iron karo woh naukarani nhi hai tumhara.
In Singhaina mansion
Chandu:Bol na kya hua hai tumhe.
Veer was feeling very bad for hiding the truth but he wanted to suprise them by showing his love.
Ballu:Pyaar hua hai tere bete ko.
Chandu was confused Veer was shocked.
Chandu:Kya?
Ballu:Haan pyaar hua hai ussey. Ab apna mooh kolo.
Veer:Dad woh....
Chandu:Kya bol rahe hai aap? Aapko kaise pata?
Ballu:Aaj sir ko signal mei dheka maine uff kya bataun itna khush the unke pyaar k saath aaj tak tere bete ko itna haste huye nhi dheka maine.
Chandu:(hitting Veer)Kyu nhi bataya tune mujhe dekhna hai meri bahu ko.
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Veer:Mom aaj ghar aa rahe the hum dono par baarish hogaya hai isliye nhi aayi woh.
Ballu:Toh beta isliye aap bike pe ja rahe hai?
Veer:Dad...
Chandu:Kyu bike se kya farak padta hai.
Veer laughed. Ballu too laughed hiding it from Chandu.
Chandu:Veer batao.
Veer:Mom it's romantic🥰aap samjh nhi sakte🤭romance ki baat.
Chandu:Chup. Ismey kya romance hai?
Veer:(laughed😂) Pata nhi aap logo kaise shaadi ki aur aapka beta bhi🤣
Chandu:Kaisi baatein kar rahe tu chup!
Veer:😂
Ballu:Zor zor se brake lagane ko romance kehraha hai.
Veer:🤣 Dad aap samaj nhi paayenge chodiye yeh sab...
Suddenly Veer's phone rang. It was in the living room. Chandu took it and was about to give to Veer but saw the dialer's name saved as "Sweetheart Gharwali". She smiled and gave it to Veer. Veer saw his phone and immediately attended the call and was about to get up from eating. Chandu didn't let him.
Veer:Haan bolo sweethea.....(he saw his parents seeing him)Mm bolo.
Bani:Veer😭 Jai bhaiyya ne mujhe mara.
Veer:Kyu?(his expression changed and his parents were curious)
Bani:Kyunki maine unki t-shirt iron nhi ki.
Veer:Lagta hai tumhara bhai ko metal asylum ki zaroorat hai😂
Bani:Veer😕
Veer:Aur kya boloun?🤭Pagal hai kya kon t-shirt press karta hai agar kar na hai toh woh khud kyu nhi ki🤨?
Bani:😖😣Veer mere saath hi aisa kyu hota hai.
Veer:Swee...(saw his parents and gave a disgusting look😬) Bani leave it.
Bani:Tum Veer ho ya koi aur?
Veer:Kyu?😐
Bani:Jis Veer ko mai janti hoon woh sweetheart bole bina ek line nhi bolta. Tum ho kon?
Veer:Oh😍 acha toh tumhe acha lagta hai na.
Bani didn't say anything she was blushing.
Veer:Just admit it sw....(closed his mouth🤐)
Bani:Haan I admit mujhe bohot acha lagta hai jab tum Sweetheart kehte ho mai sari pareshani ko bhul jati hoon jab tum sweetheart kehte ho ☺
Veer didn't know what to say he was in front of his parents.
Bani:Ab buloge?
Veer gulped and was changing his expression🥴😣
Bani:Kya Hua?
Veer:Kuch nhi...
Bani:Kuch nhi...
Veer:Kuch nhi...
Bani:Bolo na kuch nhi sweetheart😇 (saying the word dreamingly)
Veer didn't say anything.
Veer in mind:Itna bada khulasa iss situation mei🥺
Bani was hurt.
Bani:I am sry Veer agar mai disturb k....
Cut by Veer.
Veer:Arrey sweetheart meri jaan aisi kuch nhi hai😚
Bani giggles hearing sweetheart.
His parents glared at him. He didn't mind them.
Veer:Tum aisi soch bhi kaisi li sweetheart?
Bani:Sorry😸
Veer:It's ok love💘
Bani:Kya kar rahe ho?
Veer:Woh kaam kar raha hoon jo aaj tak kisiney nhi kiya hoga(seeing his parents)
Veer in mind:Aapne maa baap ke samne gf k saath baat kar raha hoon sweetheart.
Bani:Aisa kya kaam hai?
Veer:Bataunga!
Bani:Khana hua?
Veer:Nhi.
Bani:Toh khao mai baad mei call karti hoon.
Veer:Hmm thik hai.
Bani:Thik hai sweetheart😽
Veer blushed which was noticed by his parents.
Veer:Bye sweetheart!🤗
Bani:Bye sweetheart💕
Veer forgot that his parents were there.
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Veer:Love you sweetheart💚
Bani:Love you so much sweetheart 🧡
Veer hanged up his phone and saw his parents looking at him. Veer started before they could say anything.
Veer:Yeh kya harkat hai jab koi baat kar rahe hai toh unka baatein suna decency hai kya(acting like a good child🙂)
Chandu:Tu apne ma baap k samne aisi baatein karna decency hai kya?
Veer:Mom😔(used his weapon his sad face)
Chandu:Veer mai bas mazak kar rahi thi beta🤗(hugged him)
Veer smiled.
Chandu:Mujhe Bani ko dhekna hai Veer.
Ballu:Achi thi woh. Bohot pleasant aur kind si face hai uski.
Chandu:Photo hai?
Veer:Haan hai.
He showed his phone to his mom. She saw their pics.
Chandu:Bohot khubsurat hai meri bahu.
Veer blushed.
Veer:Dil se bhi☺
Chandu saw Veer,Bani and Varun. She was shocked.
Chandu:Kabse chal raha hai yeh sab? Baccha bhi hai kya😳?
Veer was more shocked.
Veer:Baccha?
Ballu:Veer yeh kya hai😲tumne bataya kyu nhi? Hume humare grandchild se dhoor karna chahta hai kya😥? Yeh umeed nhi tha Veer.
Veer:Dad....
Chandu:College love story hai kya?Baccha 7 saal ka lag raha hai. Ab tum 24 ho toh 18,19.....24 arrey haan😳 mera calculation correct hai.
Ballu:Dikha Chandu.
They both admire Varun.Veer saw them seeing Vani and Varun pics now he same to know why they were confused.
Veer:Dad woh aaj mai aur Bani amusement park gaye the wahan mila iss bachi ko. Bani ko bohot pasand aagaya isiliye hum pics li.
Chandu:Acha.
Ballu:Amusement park?
Veer:Haan.
Ballu:Yakeen nhi hora hai beta tu teri gf ko amusement park le k gaya?
Veer:Dad mujhpe aapko khabi bharosa nhi hai par Bani par bharosa hai na?
Ballu:Ofcourse kyu nhi?
Veer:Bani ne kaha ussey amusement park acha lagta hai isiliye le k gaya.
Chandu:Ahaan.
Chandu was swiping and seeing Vani's pics.
Veer:Dijiye(grabbing from her)
Chandu:Shaitaan puch leta na.
(Shaitaan- My mom's favourite word to address me everytime😁)
Veer:Iske baad ki photos aap dhek nhi sakte.
Chandu:Kyu?
Veer:Mom aapka beta ka aur uska gf ka pics hai.
He had a pic in which he kissed Bani's cheek. For capturing the photo he begged her the whole day.
Veer:Aap Bani se baat karenge?
Chandu:Bilkul kyu nhi.
Veer called her. She attended the call.
Bani:Hello sweetheart😽
Veer:Kya kar rahe ho sweetheart? Busy ho kya?
Bani:Nhi free hoon.
Veer:Mom se baat karoge?
Bani:Haan(realised they didn't tell) Tumne batadi?
Veer:Haan.
Bani:Kab?
Veer:Dad ne aaj signal mei hum dono ko dhek li so I opened it.
Bani:Acha.
Veer:You know what you called me right! Sometimes before.
Bani:Haan.
Veer:Mai un dono k samne bait k baat kar raha tha.
Bani:Kya?😳 tho sweetheart! Love you! Yeh sab kaha tune.
Veer:Haan😜don't worry sweetheart😙 they can understand.
Bani:Hmm😊
Chandu took the phone from him.
Chandu:Hello bahurani!
Bani:Namaste ma.
Chandu:Namaste!kaise ho?
Veer:Meri sweetheart bohot Hot🥵hai.
Bani:😳😲
Chandu:😄Issey kaise sambhal the ho.
Bani:😛Kya karein par woh bohot sweet hai aur caring bhi.
Chandu:Haan😉(teasing)
Bani:Mujhe woh bohot acha lagta hai ma. Sach mei mujhe pata nhi itna acha ladka apne kaise paala itna pyaar kar tha hai itna care kar tha hai mai bohot tadap rahi thi pyaar k liye aur woh sirf Veer ne mujhe diya hai.(teary eyes🥺and breaking voice😖)
Chandu:Arrey Bani tum hai hi itni achi ladki har ek ko tujhse pyaar ho jata hai. Mai bhi tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon tum meri beti jaise ho na.
Bani:Haan ma😊
Ballu:Mujhe do...mai bhi apni beti se baat karna chahta hoon.
Ballu:Hello beta!
Bani:Namaste daddy ji.
Ballu:Namaste beta.
Bani,Ballu and Chandu were talking laughing and enjoying whereas Veer was getting bored.
Veer:Bas karo na meri gf hai mujhe bhi baat karne dejiye😫
They weren't ready but Veer forced them.
Veer:Sweetheart💙
Bani:Veer I love your family so much.
Veer:Tch..tch..tch..don't address as YOUR family it's OUR family sweetheart.
Bani:Haan sweetheart.
Veer:Aur batao.
Bani:Tum batao na Veer.
Veer:Shadi kab karenge?
Bani:Jab mere gharwalo haan karenge. Tum itna desperate kyu ho😆
Veer:Tumhare bina bohot bore ho raha hoon. Agar tum yaha hoti toh acha hota.
Bani:Hmm.
Veer:Bani sweetheart aaj humne Varun k saath pics li na usko dekhe mom ne....(he said what his mom asked him)
Bani:🥴
Veer:Sweetheart hum names sochlete hai thik hai?
Bani:Kiska?
Veer:Hamara bacche ka
Bani:Oh tumne soch liya hoga batao.
Veer:Ladki hui toh Yuvani, Shravani, Dhvani, Evani,Vanshya.
Bani:Arrey Veer kuch zyada hi jaldi hai! Tumne naam tak sochli 😯
Veer:Haan. Ismey kya hai.
Bani:Sirf ladki ka naam socha hai kya?
Veer:Nhi. Vandit, Vaneesh, Vanshil, Vantik, Vansh. Kaisa hai🤩?
Bani:Bohot acha par sab naam mei Van,Vani kyu hai?
Veer:Sweetheart Veer aur Bani ko ek karo....Vani....
Bani:Sounds good.
Veer:Haan so!
Bani:Acha. Tumne yeh sab kab se soch rakha hai?
Veer:Jabse tumhe dheka.
Bani:Veer😚tum bohot sweet ho.
Veer:I know😉
Bani:Veer don't you have any plans?
Veer:Plans for?
Bani:Baby!! I mean shaadi aur seedha baccha?
Veer:Arrey nhi actually I have many plans usko complete kar ne k baad baby.
Bani:Hmm.
Veer:Tumhe problem toh nhi na?
Bani:Bilkul nhi.
Veer:Thanks for understanding sweetheart🥰
Bani:That's fine.
Veer:Hmm.
Bani:Veer aaj ma aur daddy ji ne mujhse baat ki na mujhe bohot acha laga aur daddy ji mujhe ek dam papa ki tarah lag rahe hai aur ma bhi. Mai bohot soch rahi thi ki papa mujhse pyaar dikhai par nhi daddy ji ki baatein bohot acha laga Veer. Thank you so much aisi family dene ke liye. A perfect husband, loving daddy ji aur caring mummy ji. Thank you so much Veer.
Veer:Sweetheart thank kar ne ki zaroort nhi hai baby bas kal milenge na tab 2 kiss dedo thanks ki zaroort nhi hai.
Bani:Veer tum bhi na...
Veer:Mai bhi kya sweetheart🙈....
Bani:🙄Har baat ko romance kaise bana lete ho?
Veer:Khud ban raha hai maine nhi banai.
Bani:Pata nhi mummy ji kaise tumhe sambhal te hai😀
Veer:Mai koi 5 saal ki bacchi thodi hoon aur aisi baatein sirf tumse😘
Bani:😄Thik hai bye.
Veer:Bye.
Bani:Goodnight Sweetdreams🌙
Veer:Goodnight Veer❤dreams
Bani:🤐🤭
Bani cuts the call and went to sleep Veer to slept.
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