CAN I GET SOME COMMENTS PLEASE

IN OFFICE.

Mayuri:Monil....I want our project file....

Monil was working on his system eagerly so he didn't see who he is talking to.

Monil:Jaa ke bhabhi se puch....

Mayuri:Bhabhi? Kon bhabhi?

This caught his attention.

Monil:Bhabhi nhi Bani.....

Mayuri went to the cabin and saw there was none she came to Monil and asked about it. Then Monil came to know they must be somewhere out. He called Veer.

ON THE WAY.

Veer's phone 📱 rang.

Veer:Sweetheart attend the call📞

Bani:🤦🏻‍♀️Tumhara phone baj raha hai Veer mera nhi.

Veer:Arey yaar....kaise attend karoon?

Bani:Oh...sorry Veer😜.....

Veer:Jaldi!

Bani took his phone from his shirt pocket saw the dialer's name.

Bani:Monil hai.

Veer:Attend karo.

Bani:Hello Monil.....

Monil:🤔Bhabhi aap?

Bani:Haan....Kya hua?

Monil:Bhabhi aap dono kahin bahar hai kya🙄?

Bani:Haan Monil.....

Monil:Woh hamari project ki file kidhar hai?

Bani:Veer ki desk mei hai.

Monil:Tq bhabhi.....

Bani:Hmm it's ok😊

IN MALL

Veer's pov:

It's been one and half an hour since we entered the mall but still Bani is shopping 🛍 I am seriously hell tired walking here and there, standing in the same place and trying more than 50 shirts. But she is happy😊doing this amd that's the only thing which convince me for the shopping. Yeah here comes the next shirt👔51st shirt for me to try the most awkward thing is it's olive green🥴....But my sweetheart thinks this will suit me and she gives it with a smile which is my weakness I will do anything for her smile.

Veer:Sweetheart olive green🥴?!

Her smile faded in a second because of his question.

Bani:🙁Tumhe pasand nhi hai?

Veer:Not at all I love it🤗....I will be in a minute.

Saying this Veer headed towards the trail room.

VEER IN THE TRAIL ROOM:

Veer:Olive green? Fine anything for my girl😏....

Veer wore the shirt.

Veer:Hmm....not bad😄My sweetheart's selection are really good. I am excited to see her🤩expression but even a little fear is inside me as she rejected 50 shirts and if she rejects this I will😑 seriously loose my patience.

Veer came out.

Veer:Sweetheart💕......

Bani:😻Looks good Veer!

Veer:Finally😃!

Bani:Come let's take 2 more🙂

Veer:What?!😳Not 50 trails again😲.....

Bani:Veer😕.....

Veer:😐Fine.

Bani:That's my Veer😽 Now go and change....

VEER IN TRAIL ROOM.

Veer:Anyway I am happy😊she liked this shirt but she is about to shop 2 more shirts I am tired yaar....I need some energy🔋.....No I need help now.....Bani..... (Screaming)Bani.....

Bani came near the trail room.

Bani:🙄Kya hua?

Veer:Sweetheart the button is so tight..... I need help☹....

Bani:🤦🏻‍♀️Veer....you are still a kid!

Veer in mind:😲Me? A kid?🤔Then what she is?

Veer:Sweetheart please come inside😔

Bani:No😤....you come out.

Veer:What? You want others to drool over your hot boyfriend🤤? Seriously? Every girls here have their eyes on me. 🤪You wanna give a treat to their eyes?

Bani:Arghhh😬......I'm coming.

Bani was about to enter but Veer pulled her inside pinned her to the door. Within a fraction of second he attacked her neck nuzzling kissing and sucking. Bani closed her eyes clutching his hair and moaning his name. Veer was about to bite but Bani pulled him attaching her lips to his they were having a passionate kiss when Veer hand on her waist were pulling her more and more closer. Veer was about chew her lips but Bani pulled away.

Veer:What😠?

Bani:Don't....bite🥵....(Panting)

Veer pulled her again kissing her lips. They had a long soulful kiss.

Bani:😡What was this?

Veer:What😊?(Like a cute kid)

Bani:Why did you call me🤨?

Veer:Ofcourse to kiss😚....

Bani:Veer😬....

Veer:Sweetheart don't complain me you were the one who😈was wild in the kiss.

Bani:It was started by you😾

Veer:Still you😉enjoyed it darling.

Bani:😑Where is your shirt?

Veer:Why?🤭don't you like this?

Bani:Wear your shirt!😐

Veer:Why?😚Can't you control yourself?

Bani:Shut up I am going😏....

Veer:Wait sweetheart let's go together....

He wore his shirt in the middle of the conversation.

Veer:Let's go....

They both came out and saw a girl seeing them with a shocking 😳face even she was🤤drooling over him. Veer didn't see her as he was wearing his 2nd button of his shirt. When he saw her😍she came to him and started to flirt when Bani was fuming😡

Veer:Miss....I already have girl friend❣

Girl:😙So what?

Veer:Move🙏🏻!

He escaped from their Bani laughed teasing him.

Bani:Veer if we aren't met you would surely had a🍽dinner date with her right?

Veer:Yeah! But I met you fell for you🤗 and no one other than you....

Bani:Why do you accept🤨any random girl?

Veer:Sweetheart I just "accept" I never "ask" anyone for a date😏....other than you my love💘

Bani:🤔Attitude?

Veer:Maybe😉but I don't like anyone😒!

Bani:Come let's select shirt👔....

Veer:Sweetheart see this......

He pointed a shirt but the whole rack was of black,Grey and White shirts.

Bani:Veer darling agar tune black, Grey ya white ki shirt😤touch bhi kiya na I swear....

Veer:Mai woh shirt dikha raha tha😁......

(Showing some random shirt)

Bani:Hmm....

Bani's pov:

How sweet Veer is!😍really he is God's best creation ever in the whole world🌏I am seriously very lucky to get him as my love❣, my partner💖 and my everything💚pata nhi yeh Veer itna caring, cute, sweet, the best aur loving kaise ho sakta hai.

Someone pulled her she turned before seeing the person a tight slap landed on her face.

Veer:Sweetheart yeh🙂....(He turned and the sight shocked) Bani😲!!!

Tears rolled from Bani's eyes....

Veer caught her hugging her tightly.

Veer:Bani.....tum😧...tum thik ho?

His heart ached the most seeing her cry. Without knowing him his eyes moistened she hugged him tightly crying because of the pain she seemed to be a cute kitty who is in fear.

Veer:Bani kuch nhi...kuch nhi🥺...

Bani was sobbing softly.

Veer:Dekho tum😗strong ho na....nhi ro na nhi😢....

Jai:Oye bas😤...

Jai caught Bani's hand and pulled her away she was crying but still Veer was holding her hand tightly without letting her go.

Jai:Bohot ho gaya chal.....

Veer:😠Jai....bas issey zyaada nhi. Agar doobara tune Bani ko maara.....

Jai:Kya? Kya karega😏?

Jai was about to slap her again this was enough for Veer to kill him Veer caught his collar.

Veer:Bola na....😡Bani ko hath mat laga.

Veer slapped Jai.

Jai:😠Bani!!

He was about to turn to her but Veer pulled him.

Veer:Kya? Bani kya😤?

Jai:Bas kar warna😡 Bani chal mere saath....

Veer:Tujhe kya lagta hai tu bolega aur woh Maan jayegi tujhse zyaada meri baat maanti hai woh😏....

Jai:Hey aukat mei rahe samjhe....

Jai slapped Veer.

Bani came in between them and slapped Jai.

Bani:How dare you? Tumhe ussey maarne ki😡koi haq nhi hai!!

Bani caught Veer's hand.

Bani:Chalo chalte hai....

They went from there. They had their seat. Bani sat near hugging him.

Bani:Tum thik ho?

Veer:Hmm....

Bani:Is it hurting🥺?(Rubbing his cheek)

Veer:Nhi....I am ok! Tum....

Bani:🙂I am fine....

Veer:Tujhe ghar jane ki koi zaroorat nhi hai.....Tu mere saath humari ghar aaja...

Bani:Veer....🤨aise kaise?

Veer:Woh sab mujhe nhi pata🙁please aaja na....

Bani:Aajathi toh humari shaadi ke baare mei baat kaisi karoon?

Veer:Nhi un logo se baat karne ki koi zaroorat nhi hai....

Bani:Veer yeh kaisa🤐bachpana hai?

Veer:Bani ek kaam karte hai hum jaa ke tumhare gharwalo se baat karte hai🙄

Bani:Nhi....hum nhi "mai". Aaj mai unsey baat karungi.

Veer:Par.....

Bani:Shh🤫......Veer tumhe pata hai mai tumhare liye chocolate 🍫 layi thi😄....

Veer:Huh?

Bani:Haan.....😋hum dono khayenge.....

Veer's pov:

Seriously sweetheart yeh sab kar ke mujhe acha feel karwana chahti ho? I am not a kid still now Bani....you are seriously the sweetest Bani. Kuch toh karna padega iss dhabewalle ko.

Veer's pov ends.

Bani:Veer....🤔kahan kho gaye?

Veer:🙃Kahin nhi.....

Bani:Toh khao...☺Aaa bolo...

She fed him the chocolate 🍫and he too fed her.

Bani:Veer....ghar jana chahiye😞....

Veer:Bani😔please yaar....

Bani:Veer nhi😶....aao mere saath hum ghar chalte hai.

Veer:Humara ghar🤗!!

Bani:Nhi😐Mai apni ghar aur tum apne ghar....

Veer dropped Bani.

Veer:😒Mai baat karoon tumhari gharwalo se?

Bani:Aaj mai baat karungi sab se😉

Veer:Bani see I know you yeh sab tum nhi kar paoge😕....

Bani:Veer trust me I will try😊

Veer:This is not about trying Bani it's about making them understand.

Bani:Veer I will try my best.

Veer:🤐Bani....

Bani:Veer please I will call you at night ab mai jaa rahi hoon bye👋🏻

Veer:Bye☹....Agar koi problem ho toh ek call karna mai.....

Cut by Bani.

Bani:Tum aake sab thik karoge I know...

But now bye...

Bani left. Veer was feeling bad on what happened today.

IN SHARMA HOUSE🏡

Bani entered her house and saw Jai, her dad were fuming and her mother in dilemma.

Jai:🙏🏻Aaye aaye Maharani....

Bani didn't mind him.

Jai:Papa puchiye issey😤woh ladka kon tha?

Bani was about to go to her room but Jai pulled her and slapped her.

Jai:😠Kon tha woh ladka....

Bani was crying continously.

Ritu:Tu bas kar Jai!🙃Bani beta tu bata woh sirf tumhara dost hai na?

Bani was silent.

Ritu:Bani mai🤨kuch puch rahi hoon.

Bani didn't open her mouth bend her head him embarrassment.

Jai:Puch apni beti se.😡Tu ussey humesha support karti hai na.....ab puch....

Ritu:Bani bol....aisa kuch nhi hai jaise aap soch rahe hai🙁....bol apne bhai aur papa se.

Bani composed herself to be strong but still tears rolled her cheeks.

Jai:Bol kon tha woh ladka?

Bani:Woh....

Jai:Apna muh khol😡

Ritu:Bani bol de.....

Bani:Haan mai Veer se pyaar karti hoon 😭ussey shaadi karna chahti hoon.

Mahesh:Tumhari itni himmat👋🏻

He slapped Bani. She stood still crying.

Bani:Woh mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai mai ussey kabhi😪chod nhi sakti.....

Ritu:Dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya😠 tera?

Mahesh was about to slap her again but Ritu came in between asking him to stop.

Ritu:Bas kijiye🙏🏻....bas kar.....Mai ussey samjhaungi.

Bani:Nhi....mujhe kuch nhi samjhna hai mai Veer se pyaqr karti😭hoon aur woh mujhse....baat khatam.

Jai:Aye!! Tujhe kya lagta hai woh tujhse shaadi karega?😡Woh tumhari jaisi 1000 ladkiyo ko dekha hai...

Bani:Nhi! Veer mujhse shaadi karega. Infact usney kaha woh🥺shaadi ke baare mei baat karne aayega!

Jai:🤬Tu pagal ho chuki ho Bani! Agar acha ladka hai toh shaadi karwa dete hai....Tu ussey nhi jaanti.

Bani:Nhi...aap log nhi jaante Veer😢ko... woh aisa nhi hai.

Jai:Nhi jaante?🤨Har club mei member hai woh....aur ladkiyan😬....nhi tum ussey pyaar nhi kar sakte.

Mahesh:Kya matlab ussey pyaar nhi kar sakte🤬kissi se nhi kar sakte!

Bani:Aap sab galat samajh rahe hai☹.... Mujhe koi farak nhi padta pehele woh kaisa tha kya karta tha.....ab woh badal gaya.....🤧Veer jaisa pyaar koi nhi kar sakte mujhse.

Mahesh:Bas.....

Jai didn't speak a word he was silent Bani was crying speaking in support of Veer.

Mahesh pushed Jai and slapped Bani again. Bani fell unconscious.

Ritu:Bani!!!😮Yeh kya kiya aapne?

Ritu went near her and patted her cheek trying to wake her up.

Ritu:Bani....Bani....Jai paani le ke aao.

Jai didn't answer he stood still.

Mahesh:😡Nhi....

Ritu:Marjaati toh?

Mahesh:Acha hoga.

Jai went to kitchen and came with a glass of water.

Jai carried Bani to her room Ritu splashed water on her face but Bani didn't respond.

AT NIGHT 11:52

Bani wakes with hand on her head.

Bani's pov:

Ahh....my head it's paining😕.....Mai ab? Apne room mei kaise? Kya hua? Oh yeah I said them that❣I love Veer....Jai bhaiyya ne😔mujhe maara aur kya hua? Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nhi hai? Mai apne room mai kaise aayi?🤔Kon leke aaya mujhe yahan? Ouch....my cheeks.... I came to see myself🤕in front of the 🪞 mirror....Oh God the slap mark....hope it's temporary. I saw the ⏰clock in my room. 12:07😲What?! Oh no....Veer? My Veer!!! Shit! He would have been waiting for my call 📞 No! no! Where's my 📱phone? Where it is? God please🥺 Huff! Finally got it. Oh no! My Veer has called me more😳than 30 times. But I wasn't able to attend his call🙁 I called him.....In a single ring he attended my call😯 he didn't sleep till now!! Why my dear!!

Veer:Bani.....Sweetheart.....you ok? Is everything fine?

Veer was Panicking.

Bani:Veer....😊Mai thik hoon. You awake still now?

Veer:Haan....woh sab chodo tum thik ho na? Kisi ne kuch kaha?

Bani:Nhi Veer mujhe kuch nhi🤗hua mai thik hoon.

Veer:Why didn't you pick my call sweetheart💕 you said that you will call me at night!

Bani in mind:Wow🥰....bohot acha lagta hai jab yeh sweetheart bol tha hai.

Bani:Haan Veer but sorry I slept....so I forgot to call you!

Veer in mind:Bani jhoot bol rahi hai kya?

Veer:Sweetheart you never forgot to call me🤨but....what happened today.

Bani:Veer happens sometimes😁....

Veer:Hmm....Did my😚sweetheart have dinner.

Bani:🤔Ha....Haan😊....

Veer:Bani I really feel like you are lying. Mujhse jhoot mat bolo🤫

Bani:No Veer I had 🍽dinner.

Veer:No!!😐you didn't have your dinner

Bani:Haan.....

Veer:Wait let me guess....because your family came to know about our relationship!🙄Am I right? This is the reason......Like seriously? Sab ke sab paagal hai! Pata chala toh khanna nhi denge kya?

Bani:Aisa nhi hai Veer🙁!

Veer:Aisa hi hai Bani.... Pure Stupidity!

Khanna na khaane😠se sab kuch theek ho jayega kya? Tum jao apne liye plate ready karo😐

Bani:🙂Nhi Veer....mujhe bhook nhi hai.

Veer:Bani stop this! Fine tum nhi😏 maanoge na it's ok. Ab mai tumhara ghar aaunga aur tumhe khaana khilaunga!😑That's final.

Bani:Veer nhi mujhe bilkul bhook nhi hai....Mujhe jab chahiye🙃mai tab khalungi.

Veer:Time dheka hai tune? Mai aa raha hoon😬....

Bani:Veer zidd mat karo aur tum ne time dheka? Iss waqt pe nhi....bilkul😠 nhi.

Veer:Sweetheart❣please try to understand.....

Bani:Please sweetheart 💕you too try to understand!

Veer:Sweetheart💓.....

Bani:Veer....wait....I hear some footsteps 👣

Bani kept her phone 📱on the side table of her 🛌🏼bed and sat on bed with a 😥fearful sad face.

Someone opened the door 🚪 and it was Jai.....

Jai:Ab tak kya kar rahe ho?

Bani:Abhi uthi.

Jai:Hmm.....

He was about to go but he noticed Bani's 📱phone there he took it and saw the phone his expressions changed to anger.....

WHAT DID JAI SAW? WHY IS HE ANGRY?

WHY DID JAI SAY OF VEER WAS A GOOD GUY THEY WOULD HAVE FIXED HER MARRIAGE WITH VEER?

WHY DID JAI CARE FOR BANI WHEN SHE FELL UNCONSCIOUS?

WILL VEER COME TO BANI'S HOUSE IN THE NIGHT?

.

.

.

HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT IF YOU LIKE IT DO VOTE AND IGNORE MY SPELLING MISTAKES AND GRAMMATICAL ERRORS. LOVE YOU ALL.