《New year or New life?! (COMPLETED)》😐Never a clear mind🙄
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SO I AM THINKING TO END THE STORY. WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK SHOULD I END OR TAKE IT TILL BANI'S PREGNANCY?
Bani is waiting for Veer in the Cafe as Jay and her father asked them to talk.
Bani was before 20 minutes.
Veer was getting ready and was about to leave but he got an important call for meeting.
Bani in mind:Let me see 😍how soon Veer comes to meet me!
FLASHBACK:
Mahesh:😇Bani beta Veer tujhse bohot pyaar karta hai agar woh pyaar nhi karta hai toh tumse😶 shaadi nhi karta itne din tumhare saath nhi rehta.
Bani:🙁Par papa....
Mahesh:Bani tu😐 bas mujhe yeh bata tujhe kya lagta hai Veer aisa kuch kar sakta hai kya? Tu uss photo😏 ki baat chodo!
Bani:Nhi😔 papa Veer kabhi aisa kuch nhi kar sakta hai.
Mahesh:Tu Veer pe 😊vishwaas rakh aur us se baat kar problem ko solve kar aur apne ghar 🤗jao apne Veer ke saath!
Bani:😃Hmm....
Mahesh:Bani beta tu mujhe yeh bata tum apni puri zindagi 🤨mei kis se zyaada pyaar karti ho?
Bani didn't even think for a second and said.
Bani:Veer❤ se.
Mahesh:Bani yeh photo ek😒 misunderstanding hai pata hai kis ki wajah se hua hai?
Bani saw him.
Mahesh:Payal ki 😑wajah se hua hai!
Bani:Nhi papa us ne hi mujhe Veer ke 🙄baare mei....
Mahesh:Bani iss ka Matlab 😕hai woh tum dono ko kush dekh na nhi chahti hai.
Bani:Nhi🥴 papa woh....
She was not at all convinced.
Mahesh:Tujhe pata hai tumhare aur Veer ke baare mei 🙁galat mujhse kis ne kaha tum dono ke mehndi pe?
Bani nodded in no.
Bani:🧐Kis ne?
Mahesh:Payal 😞ne!
Bani:Kya😳?
Mahesh:Haan😐
Bani:😲Kya bola us ne?
Mahesh:Bohot galat bola hai tum dono ke baare mei! ✈Tum business trip gayi thi na Payal ne kaha ki woh business trip nhi hai tum aur Veer gaye 😶the. Aur bohot galat kaha.
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Banu was so shocked.
Her father advised her so much that she overcame her insecurities and was ready to go to Singhania Mansion.
Jai showed Bani the cctv footage in which a girl came purposely and touched Veer in an impropriet way and Veer warned her then he gave a hard slap and the girl went running when he called the securities.
IN CAFE ☕
Bani's pov:
I am really sorry🤧 Veer mai uss Payal ki baaton pe aa gayi. Mujhe nhi karna chahiye😔 tha. I am really sorry. Aaj mai tumko suprise karungi🤩
Bani gets a call.
It was Veer.
IN CALL 📞
Veer:Hello💗 sweetheart!
Bani:😺Hmm.
Veer:I am really sorry I will ☹be little late today I have an important meeting woh Baradhwaj hai🙁 na un ke saath.
Bani:Hmm🤗 it's ok.
Veer:I will try to be soon❣ love. Take care. Love you!💞
Veer cuts the call with disappointment as Bani didn't respond.
Someone taps the table to get Bani's attention and it was Payal.
Bani:Payal I don't wanna talk 🤐to you tum mujhe mere Veer ke khilaf bad ka 😠rahe ho!
Payal:Not at all 😧Bani. Not at all.
Bani:😡Shut up! Mujhe teri 🤬asliyat pata chal gaya hai.
Payal started to cry.
Payal:Tum bhi mujhpe😰 shak kar rahi ho na Bani....
Payal knew Bani's soft side and used it wisely and said something about Veer which Bani back to her condition of insecurities.
Payal left.
Veer entered and sat with an exciting face.
Veer:Hey 💖sweetheart!
Veer was before 5 minutes.
Bani didn't sound sweet as the way she sounded in call.
Veer:So baby missed😉 me?
Bani was still silent.
Veer:Kya hua🤨 hai sweetheart you🙄 good?
Bani:😐Tum mujhse pyaar 🤔karte ho ya mujhe use karte ho?
Veer:What😳? Bani🤧.....
He took a breadth and a sighed making himself calm.
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Veer:Sweetheart 😟I...love....you...only you! So please trust me. Mujhe nhi pata woh🙁 ladki kon hai kyu aayi thi.... I am clueless please trust me 😰baby.
Payal messaged Bani.
Payal:Do not 😏trust him he will throw you after using you.
Bani saw it and was silent she didn't knew how to respond.
Veer caught her hand and kissed her knuckles.
Veer:You trust me right😇 Bani?
Bani got another message.
Payal:Veer just 😒sleeps with girls and never care about any of their feelings. You😐 better don't trust him.
Bani was so done with these messages and outbursts on Veer.
Bani:Nhi! Nhi karti mai tumpe😢 vishwaas. Tum toh har ladki ke saath sone wala 😖tha na tujhe kya pata hoga mere feelings ke baare mei.
Saying this she jerked his hand and ran away from the Cafe.
Veer's eyes moistened hearing those words but still he was behind her.
Veer:Sweetheart please🥺 trust me I never slept with any girl other than YOU my 💟love.
Bani:Bas bas! Tum😩 jhoote ho!
Veer:Sweetheart please stop 😓I love you I want to be with you I can never ever think😭 of any girl other than you.
Veer was literally crying walking behind her on the road.
Bani:Bas mai nhi sune 🤯wali hoon tumhari yeh baatein.
Veer:Sweetheart 😖please ek baar ek baar mujhe dekho mwri baat suno yeh sab uss 😓Payal ki plan hai.
Bani:Bas ab aur bardast nhi 😫hota mujhe aap sab uss bechari ke peeche pade ho. Us pe 😮ilzaam laga ke tumhari galtion ko chupana chahte ho.
Veer:Sweetheart please🤧 ek baar ek baar iss video ko dekho na. Tumhe sab kuch😪 clear ho jayega.
Bani:Nhi nhi 😐dekhni hai mujhe.
Bani was crossing the road when Veer was behind her didn't even caring about where he was walking.
Veer:Bani😭 please ek baar.
Bani:😞Nhi!
Veer:Sweetheart....Mai😢....
Bani:Stop✋🏻 it!
Veer:😭Bani.....
She heard a shout.
She turned and saw Veer was hit by a car and threw to the other part of the road with blood on his face, nose and head.
Bani:Veer😳.....
She ran to him crying.
She took his head on her lap and was crying.
Bani:Veer....Veer....😢tujhe kuch nhi hua hai na? Tum theek ho na?
She saw her hands full of blood.
Bani:Nhi nhi....ngi kuch nhi hoga tumhe mai hoon😭 tumhare saath. Veer mujhe dekho mujhe dekho.
Bani was tapping his face.
Bani:Please someone call the🚑 ambulance. Please!
She heard a week voice.
Veer:Swe...et...😖hea...rt....
Bani:Veer....Veer....tum theek😰 ho na hum hospital jaayenge. Tumhe kuch nhi 😨hoga mai hoon na tumhare saath tumhe kuch nhi hoga😫
Veer:Bani...ple...ase...ek...aakhri....ba..ar keh..do...ki😣 tum mujh...se pya...ar karti ho...please....mujhe nhi lag...ta😢 mai...
Bani:Veer please...🥺aisi mat bolo please Veer....
Veer:😭Pl...ease...
Bani:Veer I love you so😭 much I love you so much tumhe kuch nhi hoga. Mai hoon tumhe 😭kuch nhi hoga.
Veer smiled weekly and blood oozed from his mouth.
Veer:I love you Bani❤....
He closed his eyes.
Bani:😿Veer....Veer....
She was crying so much.
Bani:Sab meri galti hai 😫maine tumpe vishwaas nhi ki. Sirf mai hoon tumhari iss halat ki wajah. 😢I am sorry.
She cried.
Bani:Please🙏🏻 someone call the🚑 ambulance.
She patted his face but he didn't respond Bani became numb.
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GUYS THINKING TO END THE STORY. WHAT'S YOUR VIEW? SHOULD I END?
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WHAT WILL HAPPEN?
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HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT DO VOTE AND IGNORE MY SPELLING MISTAKES AND GRAMMATICAL ERRORS.
WITH LOVE 💘
AUTHOR.
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