《New year or New life?! (COMPLETED)》🥺Will he survive?🤕
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Soon ambulance came and Veer was admitted in the hospital. Bani was restless seeing his situation.
She called Daksh and said him about everything.
Soon Singhanias came to the hospital and even Jai with his family came there.
Jai:😱Bani....
Bani saw Jai with a horrified face.
Jai:Yeh kya kardiya😩 hai hai tune? Veer ko maarna chahti ho kya?😫 Woh bechara tujhse pyaar kar ke bohot badi galti kar 😖diya hai. Us ki zindagi ka mazaak bana diya hai tumne. Mujhe sharam aa raha hai 😣tumhe apne behen kehte huye.
Mahesh:Bani beta maine tumhe🙁 samjhaya na....phir bhi...tumne Veer pe ☹shak ki?
Bani was rooted hearing them. She didn't know what to say them.
Ritu was crying.
Ritu:Sab kuch🙁 humari galti hai Jai. Veer ki iss halat ki wajah hum hai. Humhe inn dono ki shaadi 😢ko support nhi karna chahiye tha. Agar nhi🤧 kiya hota toh aaj Veer....aisi nhi hota.
Singhanias heard this. They felt pity on Bani still.
Jai dragged her by her hand.
Jai:Bata kyu ki 😠tumne aisa? Bata Bani. Apna muh khol!
Bani:😿Bhaiyya....
Jai:Bhaiyya mat bol mujhe!🤬 Tu bas yeh bata kyu 😤kiya tumne aisa Veer ke saath. Batao!
Bani:Bhaiyya woh 😓Payal.....
A tight slap landed on her face. As Jai slapped her hard.
Jai:😡Pagal ho tum? Kitni baar kahoon Payal tum dono🤬 ko alag karna chahti hai. Tumhe samajh mei kyu😤 nhi aata?
He was about slap her again. But Chandu defended Bani.
Daksh:Jai 😰bhai kya kar rahe hai aap? Bhabhi ki kya galti hai? 😟Woh bechari....
Jai:✋🏻Bas! Bechari mat bol us se. Teri bhai ki iss halat ki 😢wajah woh hai. Mujhe Veer ki bohot chinta ho rahi hai.
Jai was literally crying.
Mahesh:Mujhe☹ yeh umeed nhi tha Bani tumse.
Ritu:Bani tumhari iss wajah🤬 se koi tujhse pyaar nhi karte hai.
Bani was hurt with this.
Chandu:😨Ritu ji bas kijiye. Yeh kya bole jaa rahe hai aap😣 bachi ko.
Ritu:Behen ji bhai Saab humhe maaf kijiye aisi ladki 🤧aap ki ghar bhej ne ke liye.
Mahesh:Maaf kijiye hume🙏🏻
Ritu was crying joining her hands asking forgiveness to them.
Ballu:🙁Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai behen ji. Please aap sab 😕shaant ho jaiye.
Chandu was confronting Bani.
Chandu:Bani beta tum kisi 🙂ki baat pe mat aao. Jai tumhare mumma papa sab ab gusse 🙃mei hai unn ki baaton ko sunn ke tum pareshaan mat ho meri bachi. Kaash agar 😔Veer hota toh.... woh tujhe... samjhata....
Bani was feeling very guilty.
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Bani:Mujhe😭 maaf kijiye Mummy ji. Sab meri galti hai.
Ballu:Nhi beta humhe batana😥 chahiye tha Payal ke baare mei tujhe....
They said her what and all Payal did when Veer and Bani were been to their wedding shopping.
How she cut her wrist created a scene.
Bani was crying too much feeling so guilty of her act towards Veer.
Chandu:Bani...😪meri bachi teri koi galti nhi hai....Veer theek ho🙃 jayega....
Chandu said those to make Bani feel better but even she was broken so much as Veer was her only son.
The way she loved him and the way he loved his family. His craziness, his naughtiness and his everything was special to her.
For both Ballu and Chandu, Veer was very special. He was a son who never lied to his parents who never did something without their knowledge.
He was given all the freedom to do what he loves as his parents believed he would never commit a mistake or hurt anyone.
Doctor came from the emergency ward.
Jai:😔Doctor....Veer....🤨Veer kaisa hai?
Doctor:His condition is so worst. We need blood 😐as his maximum amount of blood is bleeding.
Jai:Blood...what's his blood 😧group?
Bani:😶B+ ve
Jai:I am B+ ve. Doctor🤧 I can give blood!
Doctor:Fine then🙂....nurse will take you.
Jai:Nothing's major right😕?
Doctor:🤐No Mr. I can't be so sure as he had his 2 floating ribs cracked and a perforated lung. So 😐we must do a minor operation for his ribs.
Jai:What😳?!
Chandu, Bani and Ritu were crying.
Doctor:😶Yeah!
Jai:😩God....
Ballu's eyes moistened even Jai and Mahesh were at the verge of crying.
When Ponky was crying hugging Monil and Daksh.
Doctor:And yeah 😐please not so much people in hospital....
Jai:Sure🥺....
Doctor left.
Jai:Milgayi tasali tujhe Bani😢?
Chandu:Jai 😖beta please....
Jai wiped his tears and went to the nurse to give blood for Veer.
IN THE ROOM.
Jai was in the bed near to Veer. He saw a lifeless Veer lying on the bed. His eyes started to flow.
Nurse checked his BP, sugar level and everything and started the process.
The nurses who were present there were wiping the blood from Veer's face, chest, head. Veer was pale.
Nurse gave Jai a ball and asked him to press it continuously and went.
Jai:Veer....kya hai 😖yaar....tu...tujhe kya hua hai? Uth na...uth jaa. Tujhe pata hai Chandu 😫aunty bohot ro rahe hai. Tujhe pasand...nhi hai na....jaldi🥺 uth aur aao hum unn se baat karenge....
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Jai was crying he couldn't even make words.
Jai:Veer bas 😢bohot ho gaya hai tera yeh gatiya mazaak uth jaa...aur tumhe jitni bhi mujhe irritate 🤧karni hai na tum karo koi....baat nhi mai tujhe kuch 😪nhi bolunga.
He still continued.
Jai:Tu humesha 😞bolta hai na....Sanaya ki choice boring hai....achi nhi hai kyu ki us....🙁ne mujhe choose ki....😭aaj mai bolunga....Teri choice gandi hai.... 😔uth na yaar! This is not done Veer. Please uth jaa😿....
Veer didn't react Jai was feeling so bad he kept trying to stop his cries.
Jai:Tujhe bohot....mazaa ☹aata hai na.... mujhe aisi dekh ne mei....mujhe pata hai...tu isi 😢liye nhi uth raha hai....😭Uth jaa yaar.
Nurse came in.
Nurse:Please patient😟 ko disturb mat kijiye aap and Haan please don't stress or cry it may 🤯make your BP go high or low.
Jai nodded and stayed calm for Veer.
Jai:Dekh mai yeh sab sirf🤧 tere liye kar raha hoon. Jab tu uth jayega tab mai iss 😔ka badla lunga.
Nurse smiled hardly hearing Jai talking to Veer.
Nurse:If you 🤨don't mind kya mai puch sakti hoon yeh aap ko kya lagte hai?
Jai:🙂Jija hai mera....par kabhi is ne aisi respectfully behave 🙃nhi ki.
And smiled sadly.
Jai:Pehele 🤭hum dono ek dursre se bohot nafrat karte the par ab😪....
He wiped his tears.
Nurse:Dekhiye mai aap ko false hopes nhi dungi kyu ki😐 inn ki condition bohot critical hai. Aap sab bhagwaan se 😕pratna kijiye.
Tears rolled from Jai's eyes.
IN THE WARD:
Ritu was cursing Bani.
Ritu:Tumhe mil gayi 😢hogi tasali ab yahan kadi kyu hai? Chale jao yahan se.
Ballu:Behen 😖ji please aap bachi ko kuch mat boliye.
Ritu:Kyu na bolun bhai sab....😫kyu na bolun?
Bani:Daddy ji, Mummy ji I am really sorry. Mujhe maaf🙏🏻 kijiye....sab kuch 😭meri galti hai.
Ballu:Bani beta aisa kuch bhi 🤧nhi hai. Tujhe Veer ke baare mei oata nhi hai woh toh 🙂bohot strong hai! Bachpan mei bohot naughty tha woh🔪 haat Kat deta tha, ped se 🌳gir gaya tha, us ka 👃🏻naak thod ke aaya tha, 🦵🏻pair fracture hua hai. Woh bohot strong hai theek ho 🙃jayega Veer.
Chandu was thinking of the way he grew being the so bold, manly, naughty, crazy and a stubborn kid.
Jai came out.
Ballu:Jai 😪beta kya hua?
Jai:Blood de di....operation 😢shuru karenge thodi dher mei. Please aap sab baghwaan se pratna🙏🏻 kijiye humara 🤧Veer theek ho jaye.
Doctor came there.
Chandu:Doctor kya hum🤨 Veer ko dekh sakte hai?
Doctor:Theek hai par sirf aap se koi 1 patient ko 🙂dekh sakte hai par bina disturb kiye. 10 minutes mei hum operation start kardenge🙃
Chandu:Sure....🥲Thank you Doctor.
Jai:Kon jaa rahe hai andar? Mai abhi dekh 🙄ke aaya hoon uss ko.
Chandu:Mai😶...
Jai:Nhi aunty please aap ☹mat jaiyega...
Ballu:🙁Toh mai jaun?
Mahesh:Hmm😕....
Chandu:Nhi. Mai...kehne 🙁wali thi ki... Bani jayegi.
Jai:Aunty 😮aap yeh kya keh rahe hai?
Chandu:Jai beta 😐Bani hi jayegi.
Ballu:🙂Hmm theek hai. Bani beta jao.
Bani saw Veer's state and was shocked he didn't have his glow his charm he was just pale. She cried.
She caught his hands.
Bani:Veer....🥺I am sorry....I am so sorry! Please Tum theek ho jao hum humare ghar chale 🤧jayenge. Mai kabhi kisi ki baat nhi sunungi Payal ki....😿aur kisi ki bhi. Please Tum theek ho ke aa jao Veer. Mai aisa😭 kabhi nhi karungi kabhi nhi. I promise.
She was crying so much thinking of the way how he would be always behind her even if she is angry with him.
Bani:I am 😭sorry!
Nurse:Excuse me. Aap bahar aaye.🙂 Doctors aa gaye hai.
Bani:❤I love you Veer.
Bani kissed his forehead and went out.
The doctors came after the operation.
Jai:Doctor....is Veer 😔ok? He is fine right? Shall we go and see him?
Doctor:Yeah!😊 He is alright.
Chandu:Thank God!😭
Bani had happy tears.
Doctor:😇You can meet him after 10 minutes.
Jai:Thank you so 🙏🏻🥲much doctor.
Doctor:It's my🤗 duty Mr.
He smiled and left.
Jai:Aunty aap aur Maa jaa ke 😊Veer ko dekhiye phir mai Papa aur uncle jaayenge😇
Bani saw them hoping Jai would say hear name but Jai ignored her completely after passing a disgusting look to her.
Chandu:Nhi. Pehele🤗 meri bachi jayegi phir mai aur Ritu ji jaayenge.
Jai:Aunty aap🙄....
Cut by Chandu.
Chandu:😐Jai beta....
Jai didn't speak further thinking even Veer would love to see Bani.
Bani entered the room.
Veer saw her. Bani smiled with tears.
Bani:Veer🥺....
She went near him and hugged him.
Bani:Tum theek ho🤧?
Veer:🤨Kon ho tum?
Bani was taken aback with the question.
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WHAT HAPPENED TO VEER? DID HE FORGET BANI?
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IS HE OK?
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HOW WILL THEIR LIFE MOVE ON?
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HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT DO VOTE AND IGNORE MY SPELLING MISTAKES AND GRAMMATICAL ERRORS.
WITH LOVE 💘
AUTHOR.
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