《Anakin x Padme (Two sides)》Fixing Mistakes
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I eventually did the same as I held him close to me as I felt his hard muscles as I embraced him close,
as one of my hands stroked his silky hair as the other one began to slowly drew circles on his back.
I cried with him.
It was clear that Anakin is a very broken man because of the dark side.
He mainly lost the rest of his limbs mostly because of it.
"Shhh... I know... I know..."
"... But-!"
"Shh I know, that's why I forgave
you, for what you did."
"Padme..."
"But I'm really here to get you to come back home."
"What- what do you mean by home?"
"I've lived here for four years Ani.
That's longer than anywhere else if you think about it."
"I wish you didn't. This place is terrible. "
"I know, I've been there."
"Heh."
He finally let go of me.
"Ani, I have to tell you something and it's about... Obi-wan. He is with the children- and yes we had twins called Leia and Luke and-"
"Yes I know. I felt their presences.
and with Obi-wan, I will try my best not to kill him..."
"You either kill him or you don't.
And I don't want you to kill or either hurt him. He has done alot for us Ani, please understand."
His grip began to tighten around my hand but trying not to do it too hard.
"Your starting to sound alot like Yoda,
but I can actually understand it."
He joked. He then eased his grip.
"But I have one very important question. "
I gulped. "Yes?"
"Did you have any... others?"
I saw the struggle he had to say that.
He looked even more hurt as his face showed it with greater sadness and fear.
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"No. I would never ever do that, even after everything...
Is this... A way of telling me that you have found another-"
"No. I would never. Never.
Padme, I wouldn't do it, not in my entire life I would want to sleep with another person, except with you.
Besides, have you ever seen the people I work with?!
They are basically literally planks of wood or either beyond stupid. "
"That's an interesting word choice."
"Let's say I picked up a few words on that blasted station...
Padme, there's something I've need to tell you something very important about that station."
His breathing started to ease.
"Okay. But you have to tell me when we get back so you don't have to explain it a second time to Obi-wan."
He looked down in frustration but he knew that he had to do this.
For us.
"This is going to be the death of me."
"You've been through worst Ani and survived."
"Barely, Padme I lived with regret of what I did to you... I'm sorry...
I don't even know how I even managed to survive without you. I always thought about you and even thought about ending it all.
But I didn't. And I'm glad I didn't.
So glad. "
The tears began to fall down my face.
"Oh Ani..."
I cupped his cheek.
"What is done is done. You can't change what you did but...
Now. We must start to think about the presant and mustn't dwell on the past no longer."
He nodded.
"Now, let's get out of this cave."
"Agreed."
As we began the tiring walk I then blurted it out.
"Why did you decided to leave the Empire?"
His face exspretion changed to the classic grumpy kind when he didn't get what he wanted.
Arrogant Ani is.
But it can be funny at times-
but that was before Mustafar.
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