《Best Friends Brother》15
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Jentzen
"Sorry" the person I had just bumped into and I said in unison. I look up to see that the person was Sophie. "Why are you up walking around so late?" I ask "I wanted some coffee. Why are you out so late?" she replies. "I wanted a bagel, but I think I got here too late" I reply as I point to the door that now has a closed sign on it. Kelly gives us a small wave, as she locks the door of the bakery and begins her walk home.
Sophie
I begin to walk towards the apartments that Kelly told me to look at and Jentzen follows me. "So, why are we walking to the apartments?" Jentzen asks "I need to find my dad" I reply "okay, yeah, surez find you're dad" Jentzen replies. Then he processes what he just said "wait. Isn't your dad dead though." Jentzen replies "not according to Kelly" I say back.
Jentzen
I try to keep up with Sophie as she runs the rest of the way to the apartment complex. She walks up to the front desk and says "hi, do y'all have a Allen Fergi here?" She asks "who's asking?" The person at the front desk as asks "his daughter, Sophie Fergi" I reply. Sophia, her real name. She always went by Sophie, because she hated the name Sophia. Her dad was the only person who called her that, which is probably part of the reason why she claims she hates it. Nobody else calls her Sophia, unless they're really mad at her.
Sophie
"Okay, well we cant really give you his room number, but we can call him down here for you if you want" The lady at the front desk tells me. I nod my head in response. "If he's really here, then why do you want to see him so bad?" Jentzen asks "closure" I reply.
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A few minutes later, a guy walks downstairs. He walks towards me and all of a sudden I got super nervous. Jentzen walks up to me and holds my hand. I felt better again. "Sophia?" The guy asks "Allen" I reply. My dad then wraps me in a hug. That is not what I was expecting at all. I hug him back, and for a few seconds I felt like I had never lost him. Like my dad had been there with me my whole life. Then I remember, he hasn't been with me my whole life. My mom has. I remember the reason I came here. Answers to my questions. All of a sudden I didn't want a hug from him. Atleast not until I knew the truth.
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