《Jack Dawson's Sister》~15~
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Me:"That was the last time Titanic ever saw daylight" Brock"We're up to dusk the night of the sinking. Six hours to go" Lewis"Incredible. There's Smith and he's standing there with the iceberg warning in his f**k***hand. Excuse me,his hand. And he's ordering more speed" Brock"Twenty six years of experience working against him. He figures anything big enough to sink the ship they're gonna see in time to turn. But the ship's too big with too small a rudder. Doesn't corner worth a damn. Everything he knows is wrong"
Rose did tell me that my brother drew her like one of his French girls,in Paris,lots of girls were willing to take their clothes off,I never saw them,I was close by somewhere,just not in the location. Jack kept me protected in that way and every other way.It was kind of gross when she told me because that is my brother she is talking about.
It was one of the most erotic moments of her life,up until then at least,her heart was pounding the whole time she told me.
She told me that she and my brother were on the run from Lovejoy and she gave him the middle finger. They ran to the red car at the bottom level of the ship where they did 'do it' *Gross alert*
A guy spotted an iceberg"F**k me!" He rang the bell,picked up the phone"Pick up you bastards!" A man did pick up and he yelled into the phone"IS THERE ANYONE THERE?!" Man"Yes,what do you see?" Man"ICEBERG RIGHT AHEAD!" Man"Thank you" he hung up and the whole crew rushed and worked hard to prevent the Titanic from hitting the iceberg. Man"Why aren't they turning?" It was too late and it hit the iceberg. Man"Smell ice can you? Bleeding Christ!"
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We all felt the giant thud. I ran as fast as I could and I found Rose and Jack on the boat deck. Jack and her held me as we looked up as we looked up and we saw the iceberg"Get back!" We did and huge chunks landed on the ship.
We had all decided to share the most recent news with Ruth and Cal. I noticed that Lovejoy sneaked the rare blue diamond necklace into Jack's jacket pocket. They body searched my brother and they found the 'stolen' necklace. Jack also stole the jacket but he was being honest when he said he was going to return it. He was put in handcuffs and he was taken away. Rose held my hand and I stayed by her side.
The shipbuilder,Mr. Andrews arrived in a room along with the Titanic's staff and blueprints. They spread them out as Mr. Andrews explains what is going on. Andrews"Water fourteen feet above the keel in ten minutes. In the fore peak,all three holds and boiler room six?" Man"That's right"
Mr. Ismay"When can we get on the way,damnit!" Andrews"THAT'S FIVE COMPARTMENTS! She can float with four compartments breached,but not five. Not five. As she goes down, the water will spill over the tops of the bulkheads at E deck,one to the next back and back. There's no stopping it" Captain"The pumps" Andrews"The pumps buy you time,but minutes only. As of now,no matter what we do. Titanic will founder" Ismay"But the ship can't sink" Andrews"She's made of iron. I assure you,she can and she will. It's a mathematical certainty"
Captain"How much time?" Andrews"Captain"How much aboard,Mr. Murdoch?" Murdoch"The Captain turned to Mr. Ismay"Well. I believe you may get your headlines,Mr. Ismay"
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